This VN has me hooked now. The story is full of imagination, the renders are excellent, and the narrative is structured, convincing and often though-provoking. I do think that the Floyd part was a missed opportunity to take a darker, more ominous twist, and the resolution, while imaginative and witty, seemed like a get out of jail free card rather than an impactful chapter; I would have also liked to have seen Maggie portrayed with deeper, emotional scars rather than [in my eyes] a simplistic introvert. But having said [wrote] all that, this is a WONDERFUL VN. It makes me think, it makes me guess, it makes me search for clues [boink, boink boy!?] and I'm entralled by the plots and the story. The H scenes are really good, and the LIs are, in general, lovely and compelling. Nicely done L-J.