I'm pretty sure I've played through all of the content available in the latest version, except for Mary, so I guess it's time to leave some feedback:
Positive:
Positive:
- I generally like the mechanics of the game, and the stat system and mind control mechanics are interesting.
- The graphics are nice and the girls are good looking. Each girl has a distinct look and personality that really comes through.
- Some of the stories are fairly well written. I particularly liked the Luna one.
- Unlike some other games, it's not littered with minigames and when they do exist, you don't have to grind them.
- As a disliker of incest, I'm of course thankful that it's not enabled by default, but probably my biggest problem with the game is how shoddily the incestless version is implemented. Most of the time it seems like the words "sister" and "mother" have just been search-and-replaced with "roommate" and "landlady". So you get dialogue nobody would ever say, like "You're my roommate. My best and only roommate", or the landlady calling you "my tenant" as a term of affection. It'd be more natural for them to call you by your first name and have other terms of endearment. And most importantly, it wouldn't sounds like you're talking to a couple of lunatics from day 1.
- The music, which probably isn't finished anyway since it seems like it's royalty free clips, doesn't really fit what's happening on the sceen a lot of the time.
- I'm not sure I'm sold on the main character. He's pretty obviously deliberately supposed to be bland and just a regular guy, but one of the biggest boner killers in the game is his seeing gormless, "Ken doll selling worthless workout gear on QVC"-face staring at you when you exit Ava's Mirror. I know he's not supposed to be the main attraction, but he could maybe use clothes that don't literally look like they're on a Ken doll, and maybe a stubble, since the dialogue paints him as a lazy slob.
- The girls really could use more random dialogue when you talk to them. You could even have them approach you and say something random and character-appropriate in public. That would do a lot to develop them as characters.
- I get that it's supposed to be a small town, but a lot of the characters seem massively too sheltered when it comes to sex. Everyone has Internet now and these people are 18-19 and up.
- Bras are there to support breasts. I know you're unlikely to re-render any of the scenes, but it bugs me how Alice's tits just swing around when she's fully clothed. A real woman with breasts that size would use industrial-strenght bras to keep them under control and from hurting her back. And popping the bra and seeing the full goodness pour out is a part of the excitement of giant breasts.
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