I know what I'm talking about so what if it's less than two months if the quality is bad and the story is boring, you only get 1 or 2 characters story being told everytime a new update comes out. You really think this is a lot for a 2 months cycle? If you think so then I'm sorry for you.
the bad parts I think are 3 Main things..
1 The character MC 'mainly' deals with most is a male friend... who isn exactly a Tony Stark-like character
and that guy is not exactly a 'bright' person really... Or 'charming' or 'special' really
But closer to a movie 1 Ned Leeds from MCU...
2 thing is he does not use TV or library or even computer with internet. To find out
information or ideas, instead he runs to his male friend...
It kinda makes him a loser who is basically 'dependant' on another 'looser' because
his friend is not exactly 'popular' or even a 'top student' or anything remotely
That would make him 'stand out in a good way in a crowd'
3 The MC's friend has been by other devs or used as a girl...
and it would have been more 'hotter' if the MC's friend who helps him out had been a
good looking girl. Even if she is not 'popular' he could have made a backstory about her
wanting 'revenge' and her Childhood friend's who is not 'popular' or anything also now got
'mind powers' and thus helping him get into the other girls pants would been a way for
her to get revenge, it would have made her a way more interesting '2 main story character'
thus increase the game's story etc. It would been more interesting, also who doesn't like
'sex-revenge' stories?
Especially since MC could be give a choice to 'use his mind powers'
on his female friend and get laid there too...
'And yes... because of the amount of interaction etc, MC's male-friend is 2 main story character....
Right now Of course that could/might change but that is sort of how I interpret
the 'story' currently is... A (looser)-guy gets powers and runs to his friend to 'get help' and gets to have fun with
ladies...
I wrote a review of this btw...
The other parts of writing is alright but that part for it to go from 3 to either 4-5 stars?
it would need to be changed really or it would need to be added so much content to make up for
it and possibly even a skip 'prologue' in learning 'most' of his 'powers' parts...
And really it is just easier to change that part out and less time consuming...