I wonder if the developers read this forum, if so, I would like to praise the developers for what is so far a very excellent game. In fact, it's one of the best mind control games I've played, with good characters and a normal protagonist (by normal I mean that he's not an asshole or a sissy, not that he's very smart, but not a complete idiot, and most importantly he behaves reasonably in most situations). I hope that everything will continue to go the same way and that controversial content (trans, female domination, etc.) will continue to be only optional.
From the whole game I didn't like only two scenes that I personally would change a bit (spoilers alert):
1. the way Alex (the default name of the protagonist) gets the power of mind reprogramming is very frustrating to the pace of the game. You've finally corrupted your first girl 100%, and you're ready to subjugate her, but you have to tell her wait a bit, I'm going to go to a parallel fantasy world of my mind, travel there a bit and come back as soon as I can. And when you already come back, the whole mood is already down and the player gets not as much pleasure from the first time as he should have gotten. The solution to this problem is very easy, start a trip for a new power as soon as the player reaches level 10 and go to bed that day. In my 3 playthroughs of the game (0.12, 0.13 and 0.15 versions), when I was ready to subdue the first girl I already had a level higher than 15th, so I think level 10 should be enough.
2. The scene with Alex's capture by OCA agents and how Ava took control of him and erased his memory. Ava is well aware that Alex's mind is not ready for her and for some reason she reveals her cards that she wants to completely possess his body, it looks foolish to be honest. I mean, yes, it's clear to the player that Ava wants to take over Alex's body, but to show it in such a straightforward way doesn't seem right.
The solution to this scene is quite simple and doesn't even require redrawing the scene itself. At the moment when Alex is sitting naked on the chair and talking to Ava, he accuses her of setting him up with Bill and wanting to take over his body, to which she says something like “Don't accuse me of your stupid decisions, besides, your pathetic mind is too weak for me, for now” (thus reassuring Alex and the player that she won't be able to take control for good and that she can be trusted in this difficult situation for now). After the scene with the memories about his father, Alex sees that Ava has gone completely off the rails and is killing people left and right and demands that he regain control of his body. Ava refuses, calling him a pathetic wimp. Alex tries to resist and even partially succeeds in regaining control for a while, but Ava knocks him unconscious (but does not erase his memory, giving Alex and the players false hope that he can still control Ava, or will be able to in the future when he is stronger). He then regains consciousness in his room and accuses Ava of being a monster, to which she says that she is only a part of Alex's mind and if she is a monster, he is no better, and that she did only what was necessary to do in this situation, and she did it perfectly. They call Camille, and she explains that everything is fine and no one is after him anymore. So this scene now makes it clear that Ava is a monster and a manipulative bitch, but when it comes to saving Alex's life (and therefore her own) she can be “trusted”. And the “revelation” that Ava is actually a villain is better left for the end of the game.
Otherwise, this game is really great, and I hope it will be brought to release.
