- Mar 10, 2023
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Thank you, Yeda Games, you have created something special! An adult visual novel actually written for adults - that may sound a little pretentious, but I can't imagine my teenage self would have enjoyed it as much as my middle aged self does. For a start it requires patience, it's really, really long and a slow burn. But it has a lot going for it, including the world building. This may count as a slight spoiler since the overview doesn't mention it, but Shattered might be worth reading for its uncomfortably realistic dystopian future setting alone.
If I may bring up one point of constructive criticism: There are so many routes with so many variations and following the huge walkthrough (529 pages as of 0.18!) is tough. What might be easiest and most helpful would be an in-game display of all the various points (dom/sub etc) you've collected. Make it a new page in the Codex. And because of how the walkthrough is written I'd love to know what act and scene I'm currently in, maybe that could be displayed in-game as well. For the walkthrough itself it might be useful to move the last page of each act (points and important decisions) to the beginning. Anything really to make it easier to hit certain routes.
If I may bring up one point of constructive criticism: There are so many routes with so many variations and following the huge walkthrough (529 pages as of 0.18!) is tough. What might be easiest and most helpful would be an in-game display of all the various points (dom/sub etc) you've collected. Make it a new page in the Codex. And because of how the walkthrough is written I'd love to know what act and scene I'm currently in, maybe that could be displayed in-game as well. For the walkthrough itself it might be useful to move the last page of each act (points and important decisions) to the beginning. Anything really to make it easier to hit certain routes.