VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - She Is My Precious [Ep. 4] [Finest Art Productions]

The renders are reasonably composed, posed, and lit. The camera perspective is liable to change only slightly between renders, which is jarring. Like each camera placement was done anew instead of setting its position and then going through all the necessary facial expressions for that shot. The writing is pretty rough. Sudden transitions or shifts in conversation happen for no evident reason. The number of times I said "What?! That doesn't make any sense" out loud is fairly high.

so far very promising. The plot is not the best but it's compensated by nice animations and sexy scenes. Progression is on point and the girl is very sexy. Can't wait for further updates.

Only downside is that sometimes grammer or dialogs are slightly messed up but you get the idea.

Keep up the good work. I enjoy the game, the story is good, I like the very small-step increase in the plot. diverse character but need more of them in action too, and the rendering and animation is good so far.

The game presents a visually stunning experience, with impressive graphics that bring the models to life. While the pacing is somewhat gradual, it allows for a deeper connection with the characters, who are exceptionally well-developed and engaging. The storyline has been compelling thus far, contributing to an enjoyable overall experience. I am thoroughly impressed and have found the game to be highly enjoyable.

Had to DNF early on. Perhaps it gets better but I found the game too wooden to get into.

Visually it's ok but the characters talk like they're reading from a script. Perhaps English isn't the devs first language and it's not WRONG per say but it really could do with some polish.

The plot seems a bit weird too. Like there's not a lot being explained before it happens and you're kind of left wondering what's going on. There's a girl in your dreams and she's not there anymore for.... reasons? And you dream about her and then you're talking to random people and then you're tutoring people? Are you a tutor? Are you something else, I dunno perhaps it went over my head but there's no real exposition to set the scene and then out of nowhere some random's grabbing your dick threatening you and the MC's quite chill about it rather than smashing a chair over her head....

All very odd

I tried the game for the preview graphics and was a bit disappointed that characters tend to look a bit like robots in-game. Poses are mostly ok but they seem lifeless.

The story is your standard trope of learning you have an 18-old daughter now. The English is mostly ok but the story-telling is just not to my taste. Quite often I wondered if I skipped a few pages between two clicks when the writing is missing something again. Dialogues seem to mostly consist of the MC doing most of the talking, slowly developing their character. Side characters never really develop any personality and seem to mostly serve as prompts for the MC to start talking again.

This one is not really my cup of tea.

Good Points
+ The art style looks promising, and the characters look kind of decent, but because of the bad points I'm gonna talk about this good point is kind of ruined.

Bad Points
- The story is not interesting nor unique, it's one of the cliche daddy-daughter porn VN stories you can find here and there easily.
- IU/HUD looks quite bad.
- Characters look like robots, their facial features, the look in their eyes, etc, everything about them looks quite robotic, they are not like human at all, and it's quite un-immersive.
- Dialogues are not good either, they give the same vibe characters give, it's almost feels like written by an AI or something, they have no feelings and they are quite rough.
- Sex scenes are the same as well, they are not good and quite robotic, and their eyes look so empty that make the whole sex scene quite weird. Sex scene animations are kind of the same as well, they are quite rough, and not good.

For The End
This game is quite poor, it's have nearly nothing worth spending time on it, if it was a demo I could be more tolerant, heck it's even worse than some demos I have seen... This game needs lots of improvements and polishing, and lots of details need to be remade, only then it can be at least decent. Until then I don't suggest spending time on it.

Emotionally resonant, this visual novel tenderly unravels the father-daughter bond. With eloquent storytelling and captivating visuals, it crafts a poignant voyage of self-discovery and connection, leaving an indelible mark.

Giving it a 4 star mostly cuz the story is pretty typical as has been mentioned before. Nothing too new or exciting here. It's very much a slow burn, particularly with the daughter, but for games like this, slow burns are always better. More engaging and more plausible. Renders and animations are pretty top notch though. Story is well written. I'll happily be keeping an eye out for future releases.

Ep. 3: A game that's as nice as it is unoriginal.

This is one of those games that you've played a hundred times before if you're into the father/long-lost-daughter incest trope:

1. A guy fucks his dream girl after which he never sees her again.
2. It turns out she became pregnant and exactly 18 years later his daughter magically finds her way back to him.
3. The handsome and wealthy protagonist turns out to be the perfect father figure / horndog.
4. A few cute side chicks are introdcuced to make sure the player's needs are satisfied during this slow burn.
5. Big happy harem ending (probably).

Apart from that this is actually a pretty good game. Beautifil renders, smooth animations, cute characters and a decent pacing. The dev tried to add an original twist with the daughter's past, although that didn't improve the story so far in my opinion.

Long story short: don't expect an innovative story, but if you enjoyed similar games in the past you'll probably enjoy this one as well.

Models are solid, especially the main heroine who's stunning. Animations are a bit rough but still decent. Ep 3's final scene was a highlight; only wish it was longer. Overall, enjoying the experience and looking forward to more!

The character assets are top-notch (5+/5) and alone are worth the price of admission, particularly the main LI (10+/10!). Game design/mechanics are super clean (4.5/5) and the writing, overall, more than decent (3.5+/5), bar the odd typo/grammatical error (all minor). That said, dev has been tardy, with launch + 2 updates stretching over 5+ months. Not dismal, but hardly ideal either. Story pacing and reader interest would have been better served with (the promised) 5 evenly/better-paced episodes over the same time period, ending more or less where we are now, and I reckon dev would have had double the subs, if not more. I really hope dev doesn't lose interest in this project, because all the ingredients are in place for the title to really succeed! It's in the dev's hands, literally, and with assets this good, you'd think it'd be worth the effort to see the story to fruition. Here's hoping. Potential is undeniable, and dev clearly has the talent to make it over the long haul with honest application, so yeah next (hopefully timely) update will be critical to sustaining and growing audience interest. Not worried about product quality, because that's been on point so far, just dev's commitment to meeting set goals and delivering in an honest, timely manner. As of now, I'm still fully onboard for the ride, so don't let us down dev! Update was good, so overall, def well worth the excellent 5 stars!

Greatness incoming!
Hope for a little more grinding pace and sleeping mishaps.
Greats graphics, storytelling, setup ...
Maybe a little bit more of choices and thaht should do it!
This one should be one of the next big thing and greatness awaits!

Ep 2. Till now we have a solid story with beautiful characters and even some not that polished animations. I would really like to follow the story and see what will happen in the future of this game. I keep my fingers crossed for more of it.

It's fine.

The renders of the daughter are great, but some of the side characters are lower quality (particularly the tutees) for some reason. The overarching story is reasonable, but the details are often ridiculous.

The largest issues are probably some of the emotional misses. Similar issues with the escalation with one of the tutees.

The daughter is supposed to be 18, but she hasn't had her period yet. The doctor just brushes this off as normal. She is the size of a 12 year old compared to other characters, but of course has very large breasts.

The story tries to biggen up the MC, for example by trying to convince the audience he would be able tutor a girl doing national math olympiads. Except he can't help yet, because he first needs her school(?) text books. He doesn't even check what she can or can't do. He also calls health insurance for helping the daughter, and just tells the insurer any amount of cost is fine. That does not make the MC cool, it's just plain stupid.

I mean, it's pretty good as of right now (EP.2). The Renders are almost flawless (Boobs of the daughter looking a bit too pointy, but maybe that's just me). The story is interesting, but feels a bit rushed, the beach scene for example. Nonetheless, I would put it in my Top 10 of the Year so far I will check on the game in a few episodes and see if it becomes even better and a bit more polished. Good luck with the game.

TDU.

Nice little game with stunning graphic on the models.
It's a little slow-burn, if you here for a fap you might be not on the right place.
Story good so far.
Like it very much!
Why must this rating have over 200 characters?

This is quickly becoming my favorite new game! What isn't positive to say about it! Thus far it has a great story/premise, incredible art, and absolutely no bugs. The story is original and quite interesting. I have no complaints and am amazed at how great the game is despite being "fresh". Besides the main characters (you, Emily, and your daughter), you meet an interesting batch of side characters that all, in some way, mold the story into a more solid foundation. Usually, when I play games lately, I've fallen into the habit of skipping through dialog. However, with this game, I took my time and got invested in the gameplay. Hopefully more people find this game like I did and give it a try. Additionally, the game is very polished. Few grammatical errors, no plot holes, and an, overall, monumental step toward a wonderful game. The daughter has an interesting background that really intrigues me. I can't wait to dig deeper into it and find out more about the home life she ran away from. Also, the story does a great job leaving the mother (Emily), up to mystery. It leaves an element of surprise and suspense for us to discover!
Overall, I couldn't recommend this game more! Please give it a try and you won't be disappointed, I promise!

My rating for She Is My Precious [Ep. 2] [Finest Art Productions]

First of all i must say this is my next new favorite here on F95. And love it already. The story or the answers can be a bit more in-depth not quite as simple, in my opinion. Very relaxing and wholesome soundtrack/music and good animations so far. But otherwise excellent rendering of the images and they loving and attractive character. My favorites are: Anne (so i named my daughter ) and Eileen. The other characters are also very lovable.

I wish the developer much success and all the best.

I definitely recommend it to others.

the dialogues could be much better. some reactions are too simple. A man suddenly finds out he has a daughter and reacts as if he'd been told the Lakers won their last game?
Other than that, the story is very good. And the drawings too.