The game visually is very good, but the dialogue and story need a lot of improvement. Hopefully someone can proofread or improve the dialogue in the future updates.
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Not unfair points, but I think they're addressable.
Job is simple. I think (though narration/story/dialog/exposition needs to make it clearer) that MC had a decent amount of money. Short term, especially, losing the job doesn't matter, because MC can afford things just fine.
Also, as the firing was unjust, one thing conveyed in the story was that the company could have a lawsuit on their hands, and one that is monstrously lopsided against them. Planning for the future, MC could be banking on that.
He also has a skillset that means finding another job won't be difficult.
So, if you have plenty of money to live on comfortably for a time, skills to find another job when you want, and legal action you could be a part of in your likely near future, there is no need to let yourself be overly stressed by events.
That is, quite admittedly, me reading between the lines, but not such a stretch that it pulled me from the game at all.
The second is easier. He met her at the day, time, and place he annually looked for her mother. She couldn't have known to look for him there and then without knowing who he was, and what he was looking for there. That means, even if not MC's daughter, she has some connection to Emily.
Add to that her age seems to line up with what would be expected, and MC's flashback in the beginning of the game to give us (admittedly meta) reason to believe she was pregnant, and she has another point in her favor.
She also looks a great deal like Emily, from what we could see and what MC says.
Lastly, when he took her to the doctor appointment, a DNA test was done, which means when MC gets the results, he'll have confirmation one way of the other. Which means even if we feel he believed too easily, we'll be given something concrete in game that affirms things.
Oh, almost forgot. Charlie, who seems to either be a PI or a cop, is also looking into this.
So, while MC may seem to accept it too easily, he is also looking for absolute proof. We, as players, aren't being asked to merely hand-wave it all away.
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The plot is odd but we'll see where it goes, I wouldn't mind checking out a future version.
The game doesn't seem to know who is talking at times, they should definitely fix that before moving forward and forgetting about the earlier versions.
I agree the MC accepted the girl is his daughter way too easily, if I met a girl that told me I was her dad, I would be asking a lot more questions. I also wish there was an option to let her choose her own name.
But my biggest problem with the game is that Eileen didn't get fucked the way she deserves, you can't go to bed with a woman like that and just sleep, that should be illegal.
The game doesn't seem to know who is talking at times, they should definitely fix that before moving forward and forgetting about the earlier versions.
I agree the MC accepted the girl is his daughter way too easily, if I met a girl that told me I was her dad, I would be asking a lot more questions. I also wish there was an option to let her choose her own name.
But my biggest problem with the game is that Eileen didn't get fucked the way she deserves, you can't go to bed with a woman like that and just sleep, that should be illegal.
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I mean it's an AVN you can't expect 100% realism. It would make sense for the mc to ask a lot more questions and to be more hesitant, but the game already seems like it will take the slow burn approach, we don't need more things to slow down the progress.
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In big lines the story is interesting, in detailed lines the story could use a bit more emotion and details. It feels there are gaps and loss of emotion in the conversations. The characters on it own are very cute and well done, so are the renders. But i'm still wanting to see more, I want to find out what happened to Emily and if the girl is really his daughter and how it all will evolve in matters of his love life.
Gist of it is MC knocks up his hs gf and never sees her again, 13-15 or so years later (based on her tit size, still in school and the fact that she hasn't had a period yet, apparently a late bloomer) he finds his resulting daughter instead while still hunting for the gf at their meet spot (not known for certain yet but prob murdered by psycho foster parents imo). There's several other similar f/d AVNs. Meeting Her, Our Fate (abandoned), Reclaiming The Lost to name a few come to mind.
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Yep, played first and last episodes and it's actually pretty good. But like many projects the game would be very well served by an overview that sells players on the story's hook and not just platitudes.
Call me cyncical but these days I assume all new releases will be abandoned (and probably right 90%+ of the time, it's why I quit giving money to unfinished games and AVNs), as very few devs do this for pure fun but cash. And, well, $0 on SS and $107/mo on Patreon doesn't instill much hope (not to mention it probably won't last long on Patreon anyway, bullshit content restrictions and all).
Holy shit, never thought I'd see Gollum as a cross-dresser/pansexual/trans or whatever he came out as.
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How old is the daughter supposed to be, how has she not had her first period.
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FUCK YEAH I DO.
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German Translation of Update Episode 2 ist ready!
Deutsche Übersetzung des Updates auf Episode 2 ist fertig!
She Is My Precious Ep 2 - German Translation - Deutsch-Übersetzung
Deutsche Übersetzung des Updates auf Episode 2 ist fertig!
She Is My Precious Ep 2 - German Translation - Deutsch-Übersetzung