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Kinetic novel, no choices.
There might be choices to exclude stuff people might dislike, but that is about it. At least that is the plan for now, things might change.
The story is designed as double protagonists, and a lot of time they interact with each other. Who would make the choice? The girl or the boy?
Things become so much more complex with that.
I understand that the feeling of "impacting the story" might be important for some, and I will take it into consideration. Maybe a choice of "you are experiencing the story as xxx" and then certain choices could change the responses you get from whomever "you" communicate with.
But most likely not for this story.
But maybe in sections where the protagonists are not interacting with each other could be something I include in this story though, but no promises.
Ability to name the characters is more likely to be included, but no promise there either. I have intentionally written the story to exclude names so it would only impact minimal anyway.
As for updates. I decided to NOT go with smaller updates but follow the roadmap I included in the dev notes.
It is not abandoned, I promise you.
With the change to 16:9, even though I told myself "this novel should by design be a bit 'sloppy'", when I started working on the images, either cropping and upscaling or outpainting, I just could not stop myself from cleaning a few things up.
One thing leads to the next and suddenly I found myself in the rabbit hole of "perfection".
For example, making images like these, to make all 3 images in different angles takes a lot more work than people probably realize.
On the bright side, I have learned quite a lot from using img editing tools like krita.
I have spent more time using krita than generate new images since the initial release.
(keep in mind, there are still inconsistencies, like the toilet changing a bit, her dress not having a slit, red rug smaller in one image etc. Things that might or might not be fixed before next update)
There might be choices to exclude stuff people might dislike, but that is about it. At least that is the plan for now, things might change.
The story is designed as double protagonists, and a lot of time they interact with each other. Who would make the choice? The girl or the boy?
Things become so much more complex with that.
I understand that the feeling of "impacting the story" might be important for some, and I will take it into consideration. Maybe a choice of "you are experiencing the story as xxx" and then certain choices could change the responses you get from whomever "you" communicate with.
But most likely not for this story.
But maybe in sections where the protagonists are not interacting with each other could be something I include in this story though, but no promises.
Ability to name the characters is more likely to be included, but no promise there either. I have intentionally written the story to exclude names so it would only impact minimal anyway.
As for updates. I decided to NOT go with smaller updates but follow the roadmap I included in the dev notes.
It is not abandoned, I promise you.
With the change to 16:9, even though I told myself "this novel should by design be a bit 'sloppy'", when I started working on the images, either cropping and upscaling or outpainting, I just could not stop myself from cleaning a few things up.
One thing leads to the next and suddenly I found myself in the rabbit hole of "perfection".
For example, making images like these, to make all 3 images in different angles takes a lot more work than people probably realize.
On the bright side, I have learned quite a lot from using img editing tools like krita.
I have spent more time using krita than generate new images since the initial release.
(keep in mind, there are still inconsistencies, like the toilet changing a bit, her dress not having a slit, red rug smaller in one image etc. Things that might or might not be fixed before next update)
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I'm liking this so far. Normally I can't stand NTR games, because they almost always put you in the shoes of the cuck, but this in the third person is more like an NTR manga, which I've read a few of. The two girls are sexy and I'm interested in seeing what the dominant guy does to them.
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Test for android users.
This is a 0.65 (forgot to change from 0.7 to 0.65, but does not matter) release, but it is only a TEST, feedback IF IT WORKS would be appreciated.
I want to know if it even works if I am going to include an android version for the actual 0.7 release (full day 2)
Thanks again to malcolmalbie for the help! <3
This is NOT the entire day 2, but it is about 2-3 times longer than day 1 so you guys will get an earlier preview than the rest.
There are still inconsistencies yadayadayada... Also ends pretty abruptly so you are prepared for that...
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Forgot the link...
This is a 0.65 (forgot to change from 0.7 to 0.65, but does not matter) release, but it is only a TEST, feedback IF IT WORKS would be appreciated.
I want to know if it even works if I am going to include an android version for the actual 0.7 release (full day 2)
Thanks again to malcolmalbie for the help! <3
This is NOT the entire day 2, but it is about 2-3 times longer than day 1 so you guys will get an earlier preview than the rest.
There are still inconsistencies yadayadayada... Also ends pretty abruptly so you are prepared for that...
Edit.
Forgot the link...
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Yes, that is the idea, to let the readers put themselves in the position any of the people in the story.
I was not sure if it was good for people who want to "fantasize" about being the man, or woman for that matter. My preference is the silly boy so I do my best... xD
Thank you for the feedback! <3
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Update tomorrow, I just want to read through all the text one more time. It's late so I'll wait until tomorrow instead of forcing it out now.
On a side note, I spent 6 hours yesterday looking into animations. I had NO IDEA it was even possible to get something done locally.
I have not spent much time other than installing and make a few tests.
Lots of fingers, but if I could make these, there are probably ways to actually make useful animations!
That will be WAY further down the road though, probably the last things I add, IF I add animations, but still!
Made from an image in the upcoming update tomorrow...
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On a side note, I spent 6 hours yesterday looking into animations. I had NO IDEA it was even possible to get something done locally.
I have not spent much time other than installing and make a few tests.
Lots of fingers, but if I could make these, there are probably ways to actually make useful animations!
That will be WAY further down the road though, probably the last things I add, IF I add animations, but still!
Made from an image in the upcoming update tomorrow...
View attachment 2025-04-12-12h05m58s_seed58435445_An overhead view of a woman kneeling between the legs of the...mp4
View attachment 2025-04-12-11h47m10s_seed276265315_An overhead view of a woman kneeling between the legs of th...mp4
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Android or (no) bust
I noted it in the patchnotes, but people don't read patch notes.. xD
Also, literally 3 posts up.. xD
If people confirm it is working, I will update thread with android build.Test for android users.
This is a 0.65 (forgot to change from 0.7 to 0.65, but does not matter) release, but it is only a TEST, feedback IF IT WORKS would be appreciated.
I want to know if it even works if I am going to include an android version for the actual 0.7 release (full day 2)
Thanks again to malcolmalbie for the help! <3
This is NOT the entire day 2, but it is about 2-3 times longer than day 1 so you guys will get an earlier preview than the rest.
There are still inconsistencies yadayadayada... Also ends pretty abruptly so you are prepared for that...
Edit.
Forgot the link...
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I can't test it. I don't want to add links to stuff I can not confirm is working or not.
But confirm it works, and a full 0.6.5 version will be added.
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An extra carrot for android users..
If anybody confirms that it works, the updated version will also contain audio in the wood sex scene, something everybody else will have to wait for...
Otherwise, if the android version does NOT work, I would appreciate being contacted so I can try to get it to work, because I WANT it to work, I just can't confirm myself...
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You already did by typing here.
The game was updated just a few days ago, so please give me some time at least before next update.
I don't want to setup any donation service before I have something more substantial.
I don't feel I have the right to ask for donations before I have proven myself to deliver.
I like the game especially seeing it from an outside perspective not controlling anyone the only downside is the size of the guys dick, why do dev's insist in putting in ridiculously big dicks into their games why not above average. I understand its only a game and fantasy but this kind of thing tends to pull me out of the experience.
oh，the user name is fake， you are a real creater broYou already did by typing here.
The game was updated just a few days ago, so please give me some time at least before next update.
I don't want to setup any donation service before I have something more substantial.
I don't feel I have the right to ask for donations before I have proven myself to deliver.
Hello its_not_real. I DO confirm that your Android build is working smoothly and is a pleasure to read. Thank you for this 1rst story. I wish you the best as game creator.
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As promised, here is the latest version AND all images ready for production, I put it here instead of the main thread (even though it can be found there since gofile has all the builds), but with v0.7 an android build will be included on "main page" too.
I removed the text window and made the text white with black outline instead, the window covered too much and this looks much nicer imho...
There are tests for sound with one scene too (wood scene) so make sure to use headphones or adjust volume in settings.
I included test sounds for the ren'py settings too. And the moans are "voice" (I find it so annoying when you don't know what slider to use in the settings) and sounds are just slapping sounds and such.
I put a warning before it happens, but I don't think it would be fun to sit with your phone and suddenly moans starts flowing from it... xD
Thank you so much for confirming the build!
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Hello its_not_real
As technical feedback dealing with :
As a result I 'm craving for the next update. I wana read the missing humiliation scene and the story going further.
I DO thank you for your game.
Warm and thankfull regards
As technical feedback dealing with :
I totally agree with you it reads nicer. I didn't experiment any issue on android with sounds. They are a joly plus without getting boring. I was'nt expecting to read my nickname. Do not feel it compulsory, plz. I appreciated it though
As a result I 'm craving for the next update. I wana read the missing humiliation scene and the story going further.
I DO thank you for your game.
Warm and thankfull regards
Master of Puppets
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Finally got around to finishing 0.6.5.
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Thank you for the constructive feedback.
IF, and that is a big if, there will be urine content it will be optional. Probably a question at the start of the story and then an option again when (if) it is supposed to happen. But there are no plans of making it a big part of the story, it's more of a REALLY dark and degrading situation. It will not replace anything, it will be extra content.
I did contemplate if I should even involve that line you mention unless the option for urine content have been set to true, it will probably be removed for the future, it was more of an idea I had of her dark side really slipping out of her while making the boy lick her while listening to her husband fucking his girlfriend, probably not be the best implementation.
About them listening to the recorded conversation. It's not great, but it's a balance act of keeping the story short vs letting him have multiple drinks witch would make more sense for him to become that drugged. I really appreciate that feedback because I am not at all satisfied with it and clearly I am not alone in that. But that will have to be in a later release. not the upcoming v0.7
But the recording happens BEFORE he is drugged (he just does not know the conversation is being recorded), so those memories will stay with him, he DID say those things, it IS something that is turning him on... There will also be some admittance in the domination scene with the young couple after the massage.
And on day 3 there will be more in depth conversations between the young couple, the dynamics between them will become solidified.
As for order (the order is correct in the story, I assume you mean missing content), yes, you are correct. I should not release unless the entire story is complete for that release, that is why the next update is taking a lot of time, but I am actually working on the "last" scene I haven't finished yet now, the interaction in the bedroom between the young couple after the massage.
Then I have to create the actual game code and implement everything, also make a decision if I should create audio for more scenes than just the one in the forest for this release.
As for feminization, it is not something I am planning on for this story, because in difference to urine content, feminization would require a completely different story line compared to just extra content. Pegging however...
(Unfinished image, she normally does not have 3 arms and his hair color does not randomly change xD. But this kind of sex can be expected. The woman also has no objections to handling the boy while the man and girl is having sex next to them)
There is also a minor plot twist coming on day 3 or 4 (haven't decided yet), there are hints about it in one of the conversations between the old couple already...
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