Banjorune

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I see "kinetic novel" in the description. Does that mean that there are no choices? There's only one path and one ending?
Thank you.
 
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its_not_real

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Kinetic novel, no choices.
There might be choices to exclude stuff people might dislike, but that is about it. At least that is the plan for now, things might change.
The story is designed as double protagonists, and a lot of time they interact with each other. Who would make the choice? The girl or the boy?
Things become so much more complex with that.
I understand that the feeling of "impacting the story" might be important for some, and I will take it into consideration. Maybe a choice of "you are experiencing the story as xxx" and then certain choices could change the responses you get from whomever "you" communicate with.
But most likely not for this story.
But maybe in sections where the protagonists are not interacting with each other could be something I include in this story though, but no promises.
Ability to name the characters is more likely to be included, but no promise there either. I have intentionally written the story to exclude names so it would only impact minimal anyway.

As for updates. I decided to NOT go with smaller updates but follow the roadmap I included in the dev notes.
It is not abandoned, I promise you. :)

With the change to 16:9, even though I told myself "this novel should by design be a bit 'sloppy'", when I started working on the images, either cropping and upscaling or outpainting, I just could not stop myself from cleaning a few things up.
One thing leads to the next and suddenly I found myself in the rabbit hole of "perfection".

For example, making images like these, to make all 3 images in different angles takes a lot more work than people probably realize.
On the bright side, I have learned quite a lot from using img editing tools like krita.
I have spent more time using krita than generate new images since the initial release.
(keep in mind, there are still inconsistencies, like the toilet changing a bit, her dress not having a slit, red rug smaller in one image etc. Things that might or might not be fixed before next update)
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Master of Puppets

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I'm liking this so far. Normally I can't stand NTR games, because they almost always put you in the shoes of the cuck, but this in the third person is more like an NTR manga, which I've read a few of. The two girls are sexy and I'm interested in seeing what the dominant guy does to them.
 

its_not_real

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Test for android users.
This is a 0.65 (forgot to change from 0.7 to 0.65, but does not matter) release, but it is only a TEST, feedback IF IT WORKS would be appreciated.
I want to know if it even works if I am going to include an android version for the actual 0.7 release (full day 2)
Thanks again to malcolmalbie for the help! <3

This is NOT the entire day 2, but it is about 2-3 times longer than day 1 so you guys will get an earlier preview than the rest. :)
There are still inconsistencies yadayadayada... Also ends pretty abruptly so you are prepared for that...

Edit.
Forgot the link...
 
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its_not_real

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I'm liking this so far. Normally I can't stand NTR games, because they almost always put you in the shoes of the cuck, but this in the third person is more like an NTR manga, which I've read a few of. The two girls are sexy and I'm interested in seeing what the dominant guy does to them.
Yes, that is the idea, to let the readers put themselves in the position any of the people in the story.
I was not sure if it was good for people who want to "fantasize" about being the man, or woman for that matter. My preference is the silly boy so I do my best... xD
Thank you for the feedback! <3
 

its_not_real

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Update tomorrow, I just want to read through all the text one more time. It's late so I'll wait until tomorrow instead of forcing it out now.

On a side note, I spent 6 hours yesterday looking into animations. I had NO IDEA it was even possible to get something done locally.
I have not spent much time other than installing and make a few tests.
Lots of fingers, but if I could make these, there are probably ways to actually make useful animations!

That will be WAY further down the road though, probably the last things I add, IF I add animations, but still! o_O
Made from an image in the upcoming update tomorrow...
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its_not_real

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Android or (no) bust :(
Use joiplay
I noted it in the patchnotes, but people don't read patch notes.. xD
Also, literally 3 posts up.. xD

Test for android users.
This is a 0.65 (forgot to change from 0.7 to 0.65, but does not matter) release, but it is only a TEST, feedback IF IT WORKS would be appreciated.
I want to know if it even works if I am going to include an android version for the actual 0.7 release (full day 2)
Thanks again to malcolmalbie for the help! <3

This is NOT the entire day 2, but it is about 2-3 times longer than day 1 so you guys will get an earlier preview than the rest. :)
There are still inconsistencies yadayadayada... Also ends pretty abruptly so you are prepared for that...

Edit.
Forgot the link...
If people confirm it is working, I will update thread with android build.
I can't test it. I don't want to add links to stuff I can not confirm is working or not.

But confirm it works, and a full 0.6.5 version will be added. :)

Edit
An extra carrot for android users..
If anybody confirms that it works, the updated version will also contain audio in the wood sex scene, something everybody else will have to wait for... ;)
Otherwise, if the android version does NOT work, I would appreciate being contacted so I can try to get it to work, because I WANT it to work, I just can't confirm myself...
 
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its_not_real

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Good game,need update,How can I support it?
You already did by typing here. :)

The game was updated just a few days ago, so please give me some time at least before next update.

I don't want to setup any donation service before I have something more substantial.
I don't feel I have the right to ask for donations before I have proven myself to deliver.
 

drh64

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I like the game especially seeing it from an outside perspective not controlling anyone the only downside is the size of the guys dick, why do dev's insist in putting in ridiculously big dicks into their games why not above average. I understand its only a game and fantasy but this kind of thing tends to pull me out of the experience.
 

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You already did by typing here. :)

The game was updated just a few days ago, so please give me some time at least before next update.

I don't want to setup any donation service before I have something more substantial.
I don't feel I have the right to ask for donations before I have proven myself to deliver.
oh,the user name is fake, you are a real creater bro:cry:(y)
 

inzebaba

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Hello its_not_real. I DO confirm that your Android build is working smoothly and is a pleasure to read. Thank you for this 1rst story. I wish you the best as game creator.
 
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its_not_real

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Hello its_not_real. I DO confirm that your Android build is working smoothly and is a pleasure to read. Thank you for this 1rst story. I wish you the best as game creator.
As promised, here is the latest version AND all images ready for production, I put it here instead of the main thread (even though it can be found there since gofile has all the builds), but with v0.7 an android build will be included on "main page" too.

I removed the text window and made the text white with black outline instead, the window covered too much and this looks much nicer imho...

There are tests for sound with one scene too (wood scene) so make sure to use headphones or adjust volume in settings.
I included test sounds for the ren'py settings too. And the moans are "voice" (I find it so annoying when you don't know what slider to use in the settings) and sounds are just slapping sounds and such.
I put a warning before it happens, but I don't think it would be fun to sit with your phone and suddenly moans starts flowing from it... xD

Thank you so much for confirming the build! :love:

 
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