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Will this also be "necessary" for the plot?The only thing I can promise are tentacle dream sequences in the future...
The thing is way, way further down the line and it will come down to player making choices - obvious or not) Telling more will just be too big of a spoiler)Will this also be "necessary" for the plot?
Silver Creek is the town name) Could've gone with something like Shitville yada yada, but the intention was to be a bit different.note: With a name like "Silver Creek" (particularly the "Silver" part) I would expect GILF, Senior Citizens, etc.
I haven't played your game yet, but I from the pics and tags I don't think that's your intention.
Feel free to ignore this comment. Just trying to help.
If anyone is not sure how to download this....right click and save as.Also: quick fix for one of the animations with Chloe that didn't work:
simply copy it to your game folder.
"Gotta live, gotta live, gotta live in Shit Towne
"Gotta live, gotta live, gotta live
"The Weavers live up the street from me
"The crackheads, they live down the street from me
"And we don't bother anyone, we keep to ourselves
"The mailman visits each of us in turn"
- Live, Shit Towne (aka. York, PA)
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As for the game, I'll give it a shot and let you know what I think.
I get it. But just because they're definitely not blood related, doesn't mean MC isn't going to want to call her Mom. If you think you can get around the Patreon thing by making him an alien, I would politely suggest otherwise. Doubtless a 'friend' can be encouraged to produce a patch and upload it from another account. Most of us really aren't here to enjoy an alien getting it on with his caretaker. I mean, look at Away from Home. Vatos games seems to pull in a tidy sum from Patreon.Shit) So writing still has these issues with stuff being repeated and sentences seeming like they're not made by native US bro) And I've thought I checked everything a bunch of times) Damn.
The thing is that Kate can't be blood related to MC, since he's an alien of sorts) At first draft it was stepcest, but we all know the thing with Patreon, so had to scratch even that. Will find where that parent quote was now. Thanks!
Thanks for showing that there's a lot to more work on to get better than I've thought. And here I am critiquing other lads for lazy/cliche writing in their games.As for the English. A few instances from the breakfast table
Watching "Crows" being all over the place - what does this mean?
Season 3... so I've thought ----> so I thought
Awesome! - she's your not-mom, she's not 16. Wonderful! would work.
My company... ---> I know I'm not as fun as your friends.
You probably just say it... ----> You're just saying that to make me feel good, but I'll take it.
Kate was supposed to be Martha Kent in the early draft, so no Incest from me, since it creates a bunch of plotholes further down the line. Can't make everyone happy)Etc etc. But for myself I'm not going further into the game until there's a patch. Hats off to you for putting in the hours, though.
Thanks a lot! If not the $, reviews like this give me the motivation to continue.Allright, first glimpse is definately a good start.
As of now, it's very barebones. When things will start to spiral down - there will be obvious choices to make to avoid it.Is Fem Dom avoidable?
Will probably switch to brackets and make size a little bit bigger in first global fix, of sorts.The dialog text and character's name font size used is very small...as well the internal dialog talk (italic font) and normal dialog talk too similar, which makes it hard to tell them apart (maybe it's the font size and style used which could be the cause.
Thanks! Always thought that it could be used both ways.(handsome is used as a description for an attractive male only).
To each of their own. Had similar teacher like that back in the days(albeit caucasian) and people were drooling all over her. Her boobs (Vanessa's, I mean) will be 10-15% smaller in next updates, though. If you knew what pain in the ass it is to make heavy chest look normal with sweaters and long shirts...Ughhh!And, almost no student would be interested in being intimate with a teacher that look's like Vanessa. She is not hot at all, she is old and over-weight.