Hello.
The game is still in his early stage so it's difficult to assess it.
The mechanisms are easy to understand, though a little repetitive. Outside the reference to other games (which is cool too), does cleaning the bar have a purpose? The affection line is useless for now and I don't understand the point of it with slaves. The same with spending time with "...", one time with each character is enough. If you fail to pay the rent, you've got only a pop up at the top and a big text. And that's all? The rent due should be added to the next one.
The scenario is clear. I'm not a fan of slavery but you've made it in positive way and it's not bothering me so much (I hate when the slave is just a doll or a statue). I only tried to be the dom since I don't want to be the slave of a jerk of a cheating husband. I don't know if it's possible but an intermediate solution could be interesting (a last chance to their couple after everything is discussed, leading to 2 masters).
The characters are different. I was sad for John though. He wasn't that awful as a person for something like this to happen to him.
The selection of image is also well done.
The chastity cage put me out a little, sorry.
If your dominance decrease enough (spending time with John), Master Jake appear out of nowhere and you can do the sub route (cf files).
John doesn't have Service another client with "...". He only have the Back to the bar option.
I found some errors (cf files).
As for the dilemma between real porn and art/animated/drawn, I'm close to Unruly : I like them both as long as the real porn is choosen with taste and the art/animated/drawn is beautiful and realistic enough (some animated are too similar, particularly in Ren'Py due to Daz3d).
