So, if anyone is like me, they might be sorely disappointed by the grammar, capitalization, spelling, typos, incorrect speakers, missing or superfluous parentheses, and other assorted errors that litter this game making it a chore to read through and often a puzzle to figure out who said what.
Luckily for you other perverted nerds that get bothered by this stuff, I have taken it upon myself to proofread the script and now provide it free of charge to whoever would like to use it (including Temptress Games should they deem to fix their many, many errors. Seriously, hundreds if not thousands of corrections). The first step was just running it through a standard spellcheck (I don't know how this is not SOP for any game designer, as it caught several hundred issues right off the bat). Then the vast majority of the somewhat random capitalization was corrected. Finally a single long read through of all 44000 lines to manually correct issues as they came up, especially including correcting the speaker title being wrong and also incorrect parentheses & italics to indicate thoughts.
While I should have caught the vast majority of straightforward issues, I'm sure there's still some problems that slipped by. Maybe I'll go back once the game is complete and try again. Maybe.
Known things I didn't fix include a lot of punctuation such as double periods and missing commas, also not every line has ending punctuation as it probably should. I did fix a lot, just not all of it. I also didn't alter the CONSTANT YELLING that is throughout. It would have required too much typing (use of two hands not always available, hehe) and a different method of providing emphasis like I believe the author is intending.
I tried not to alter the actual content too much, but a few things I just couldn't stand for. So there's no more "WASSUP!" every morning. It's now "What's up". Also no "lemme" in place of "let me", and other various stupid juvenile phrases replaced. I also split a few lines or added a couple to make things clearer, and added a few completely new lines to jazz up the pregnancy talk (less than ten I swear, it's just my other kink, and was already there but lacking. Sue me.).
Finally, this is only for episodes 1-12 so far, and is based off the incest patch (as in it already includes incest as it should). Installation is the same as the original patch, simply save the new patch as "script.rpy" file, put it into the "game" folder, and replace the one that already exists.
*Edit 2023/03/31 - Link to done the same way.