VN Ren'Py Sinful Summer: A Tale of Forbidden Love [Ch.3.3] [Ruykiru]

[MacLovin']

Is the narration written with the help of an LLM? I get flashbacks from GPT 3.5 erotic role play mannerisms playing this game. “The complex tapestry of their feelings” “chaotic symphony” are expressions that came up often. Also I kinda like this game but theres literally one metaphor per sentence and I feel it might be a little too much.
I mean I don’t blame anyone for using AI to make up dialogue it’s a great tool!
Edited because the wording was too rough

 

[Peregrine Strike]

This motherfucker is not curling 30s with those crab stick arms bro

EDIT: its 30 pounds.. right that makes more sense... also explains the 100s sitting in the basement

 

[MacLovin']

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This motherfucker is not curling 30s with those crab stick arms bro

EDIT: its 30 pounds.. right that makes more sense... also explains the 100s sitting in the basement

How about him benching four plates lmao I was like nah there’s no way

 

[Sossse]

This motherfucker is not curling 30s with those crab stick arms bro

you guys watch to little anime... it´s always the weak looking ones with the most power

 

[Ruykiru]

Is the narration written with the help of an LLM? I get flashbacks from GPT 3.5 erotic role play mannerisms playing this game. “The complex tapestry of their feelings” “chaotic symphony” are expressions that came up often. Also I kinda like this game but theres literally one metaphor per sentence and I feel it might be a little too much.
I mean I don’t blame anyone for using AI to make up dialogue it’s a great tool!
Edited because the wording was too rough

I was way too wordy on chapter 1, yes, I didn't really grasp that I was creating a visual novel and it's better to show than to tell. I didn't trust my rendering qualities enough and I used text to enrich the overall atmosphere and hopefully make the old render quality more tolerable, but on hindsight most narrator lines were too much. And the renders except for the intro and the start of day 3 are old, from when I had barely any experience, but I warn about all this stuff at the beginning cause. This is my first project after all and improving is part of the process.

The upcoming 2.6 has many narrator lines removed from the start and replaced with either nothing or dialogue. I plan to rework some more stuff for chapter 1.

 

[MacLovin']

I was way too wordy on chapter 1, yes, I didn't really grasp that I was creating a visual novel and it's better to show than to tell. I didn't trust my rendering qualities enough and I used text to enrich the overall atmosphere and hopefully make the old render quality more tolerable, but on hindsight most narrator lines were too much. And the renders except for the intro and the start of day 3 are old, from when I had barely any experience, but I warn about all this stuff at the beginning cause. This is my first project after all and improving is part of the process.

The upcoming 2.6 has many narrator lines removed from the start and replaced with either nothing or dialogue. I plan to rework some more stuff for chapter 1.

Well like I said in my rating your game got me hooked, you’re doing two things that I love very well: slow burn and Mom-daughtercest. I even ended up subscribing.

 

[Ruykiru]

Taking a break...

Sorry for the long post below but what I'm about to tell you is important stuff if you like to keep up to date with the development of Sinful Summer (In spoilers for easier reading because it's freaking long! )

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I hope you are having just as much fun as Lyna is during her summer! See ya~!

 

[MacLovin']

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I hope you are having just as much fun as Lyna is during her summer! See ya~!
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Enjoy your vacation bro! You deserve it

 

[rudy007]

Taking a break...

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I hope you are having just as much fun as Lyna is during her summer! See ya~!
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i remember your beginnings, first renders on Deadmoon Survival page as help for Hot Tomato. It's bean over a year ago. I'm sad that Hot Tomato left this site, but I understand the reasons very well. I would probably left too. I'm sad he doesn't answer as well.
But this is about your game. Enjoy your free month, you deserved it. It's this time of the year, holidays, so enjoy and leave the keyboard at least for 2 weeks. You don't have to rework S1 at once. I hope for many new seasons as well.

Great game Ruykiru !

 

[popang888]

Taking a break...

Sorry for the long post below but what I'm about to tell you is important stuff if you like to keep up to date with the development of Sinful Summer (In spoilers for easier reading because it's freaking long! )

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I hope you are having just as much fun as Lyna is during her summer! See ya~!
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Thanks for all, enjoy your vacationes, we Are going to be here wainting on your return!
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Cant wait for the sloppy Kisses with the mom

 

[hentaicharley 2]

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This motherfucker is not curling 30s with those crab stick arms bro
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Um, he's not a mother-fucker. YET.

You're jumping the gun, so to speak.

 

[Moonis]

Oh Wow! This was great. I had my eyes on this since first update, but the new banner forced me to start playing this and my expectations were crushed, in a good way. This was so much better than I hoped for. Perhaps best incest game on the site.

Story was very well written. Good pacing. Not too slow and not too fast. Actually I would have expected walls to break down faster between the horny teenagers, but mother's ongoing slipping into debauchery was great.

The star of the game is Lyna. What a beauty. Face could be more beautiful, but that slender body was just perfect. Just my favourite type. Those perky teenage breasts were divine. I also liked her personality greatly.

I managed to make bit more room into my signature and added this to my favourites.

 

[lucathesaint]

Papa pls releasssseee peen hurts again ((

 

[Ruykiru]

Just two more weeks for the free release or... you can sub

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[lucathesaint]

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2 weeks peen explodes papa don't do thisss

 

[Scotty1212]

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My cards are getting declined on subscribestar... Cant be arsed anymore, tried to contact support 2x, idk what is the problem...

I think you could make an exception for Chritsmas just once this time, considering you are taking a holiday anyway. But that is just MHO. Anyway, good game

 

[Ruykiru]

My cards are getting declined on subscribestar... Cant be arsed anymore, tried to contact support 2x, idk what is the problem...

I think you could make an exception for Chritsmas just once this time, considering you are taking a holiday anyway. But that is just MHO. Anyway, good game

Sorry to hear that. Support is completely dead or something yeah, I've been trying to contact them for other issues for months.

I don't currently have any other alternative payment platforms.

And I've got different plans for a Christmas gift

 

[Scotty1212]

Sorry to hear that. Support is completely dead or something yeah, I've been trying to contact them for other issues for months. I don't currently have any other alternative payment platforms.

I've got different plans for a Christmas gift

Consider it a Birthday gift lol, mine is on 11th

EDIT: SBS being a Russian platform, may experience sanctions... Never mind it's HQ being registered in USA, if billing is set to Soviets, they will get blocked... IMHO. IDK , just a guess... Once a COMMIE, always a COMMIE ... Good COMMIE is a DEAD COMMIE... (yeah, we dont love them in Poland... )

 

[Darreau91]

Sorry to hear that. Support is completely dead or something yeah, I've been trying to contact them for other issues for months. I don't currently have any other alternative payment platforms.

I've got different plans for a Christmas gift

You probably got black listed due to how up front you are about your taboo content. If they provide a paper trail in helping you it could open a can of worms in any lawsuits that go into discovery. If they feign ignorance they can still collect the money.

 

[Ruykiru]

You probably got black listed due to how up front you are about your taboo content. If they provide a paper trail in helping you it could open a can of worms in any lawsuits that go into discovery. If they feign ignorance they can still collect the money.

I don't even show up in the "Find your creator" search in the platform, not by tag and not even if you write my full nickname lol. And yeah support's been ignoring me for months except for payments, but to be fair they also seem to ignore everyone else and especially people wanting to be new creators in the platform.

As for the content I don't think so, SS was made for us degenerates that don't want to be censored and the company doesn't seem to give a shit about their own terms of service as long as you are in the ".adult" version of their website. There's some creators with way more taboo stuff than me