VN Ren'Py Sinful Summer: A Tale of Forbidden Love [Ch.3.3] [Ruykiru]

[kevlar591]

SOMEONE GETS IT

What fantasy is there to fulfil if I had made yet another harem power fantasy where the MC gets every girl she meets with a flick of the cock? It's much better when it's only your very close family, and they gotta work for it...

It's much more interesting to be hit on than to hit on:
What I meant is that the approach you used for the MC is much better (in my opinion).
In most VNs, the MC fucks everything that moves, but here it's the opposite; everyone wants to be the MC.
It's much more exciting.
(I use gg trad to communicate here, sorry, sometimes it's a little weird.)

 

[Ruykiru]

In most VNs, the MC fucks everything that moves, but here it's the opposite; everyone wants to be the MC.

Well, it's multi-protagonist like I said everywhere. But if I had to choose someone to call MC that would definitely be Lyna, not Erik

 

[Gabo69780]

looking forward to the sequel❤❤

 

[KnightOwlSC]

I love this game. It's much more interesting to follow a protagonist who is harassed by women rather than the other way around, as in most adult games.
It's much more interesting to be flirted with than to flirt.

Ehhhh... his whining gets to be a bit too much.

 

[K.T.L.]

Ehhhh... his whining gets to be a bit too much.

Yeah. He comes across as a pretty pathetic creature. Always looking away, always embarrassed. I know it's to make it a sort of slow burn but IMO it's really overdone and off putting

 

[Gabo69780]

Yeah. He comes across as a pretty pathetic creature. Always looking away, always embarrassed. I know it's to make it a sort of slow burn but IMO it's really overdone and off putting

It's very good like that

 

[Darreau91]

It's very good like that

Plays well off of Helgas and Lynas more domineering personalities.

 

[kevlar591]

Yeah. He comes across as a pretty pathetic creature. Always looking away, always embarrassed. I know it's to make it a sort of slow burn but IMO it's really overdone and off putting

Personally, I find that the character is coherent and above all it's different from the others where the MC jumps at everything that moves like an animal.

 

[Ruykiru]

Yeah. He comes across as a pretty pathetic creature. Always looking away, always embarrassed. I know it's to make it a sort of slow burn but IMO it's really overdone and off putting

Yeah dude, look at him at the start of chapter 3 here:

Spoiler: Always looking away, always embarrased. Right...?

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Wanna write the story instead of me? Please bro im desperate i need help i beg you please bro...

Seriously, bug off. If you don't like character development what the hell are you doing reading a narrative kinetic novel with no choices that states right at the freaking beginning that it is not a poorly written silly ass harem? I'm tired of you illiterate people that can't even read a description or the intro. I won't show any respect for people like you anymore like I tried to, because I see you don't show any respect from what I'm crafting either.

Ironic. The few ones who keep whining about Erik being whiny, are the whiniest after all...
Read this and grow up: https://f95zone.to/threads/sinful-s...dden-love-ch-3-1-ruykiru.193794/post-15635243

 

[K.T.L.]

The few ones who keep whining about Erik being whiny, are the whiniest after all...
Read this and grow up.

Are you sure you're cut out for this game development thing? Getting so excited over words...

 

[Ruykiru]

Are you sure you're cut out for this game development thing? Getting so excited over words...

Sorry if I lashed out at you. Don't take it personal and think my rant was for you in particular, please. I'm simply fed up with that narrative about Erik and I've gotten actual haters that deserved that block of text.

However, if you're gonna keep saying the same shit they do over and over again then I'll have no choice but to add you to the ignore list with them. I'm tired of reading nonsense (which is not true by this point in the story btw, I can keep sending you pictures like the one I sent).

 

[george agdgdgwengo]

I dunno I quite like the idea of getting reverse corrupted into a chad sex maniac. Its an origin story.

 

[BulgariAMARA]

Sorry if I lashed out at you. Don't take it personal and think my rant it was for you in particular, please. I'm simply fed up with that narrative about Erik and I've gotten actual haters that deserved that block of text.

However, if you're gonna keep saying the same shit they do over and over again then I'll have no choice but to add you to the ignore list with them. I'm tired of reading nonsense (which is not true by this point in the story btw, I can keep sending you pictures like the one I sent).

Buddy, you really shouldn’t pay attention to such annoying and essentially useless posts. Your story is great, it may not be ideal at some points, but damn it, in real life, who among us is not without sin or weakness? If you don’t like the story, go wander around, look for something you like and don’t bother the author’s brain and nerves. I think you should have exactly this approach to such annoying posts.

 

[Ruykiru]

Buddy, you really shouldn’t pay attention to such annoying and essentially useless posts. Your story is great, it may not be ideal at some points, but damn it, in real life, who among us is not without sin or weakness? If you don’t like the story, go wander around, look for something you like and don’t bother the author’s brain and nerves. I think you should have exactly this approach to such annoying posts.

Yeah, screw them. I'm tired of being polite. I'll just answer bluntly or straight up ignore them with the button to do so directly.
Not like their opinion matters anyway, I've been making my own VN however the fuck I want and I plan to keep doing that, it's been great so far.

I do listen to constructive feedback, but the toxic one is just pure cancer and the people spreading it misunderstand the point of this story so bad. It makes me question if they even have the ability to read a mere warning or description like the ones I put at the start, instead of wasting hours reading/playing something they were never gonna enjoy in the first place.

 

[Ruykiru]

New long ass progress report for 3.3 with a little photoshoot (for FREE subscribers too! don't be afraid to join)
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I bought many new clothes from full time modders for the software I use, and some of them are... well you'll see in that post.

It's a shame these type of skin deformations can only be applied with clothes, so no realistic breast groping for you sadly! Sometimes I wish I had learned blender or something with soft body physics and started making my lewd fantasies with that program instead... I do have a soft spot for Honey Select 2 though. It's charming.

 

[Yoda200689]

Anyone have 3.2 download link?

 

[delain]

Anyone have 3.2 download link?

Free public release: Sunday, 21st June

 

[rudy007]

New long ass progress report for 3.3 with a little photoshoot (for FREE subscribers too! don't be afraid to join)
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I bought many new clothes from full time modders for the software I use, and some of them are... well you'll see in that post. View attachment 4958702

It's a shame these type of skin deformations can only be applied with clothes, so no realistic breast groping for you sadly! Sometimes I wish I had learned blender or something with soft body physics and started making my lewd fantasies with that program instead... I do have a soft spot for Honey Select 2 though. It's charming.

Yes, blender is better for many things, but like you said, HS2 is more charming. But it's never too late to learn something new, so why not blender? If you plan to develop new games, why not with blender. You're good with scenes, story and characters. nothing stops you to try...

 

[Sodapop.]

Any update?

 

[filochard]

Any update?

You should read the last posts of a thread before embarrassing yourself