VN Ren'Py Sinful Summer: A Tale of Forbidden Love [Ch.3.3] [Ruykiru]

[DL00ng]

Georgie Erik is disliked

 

[DL00ng]

Eric：傻人有傻福， Fortune favors fools

 

[HeathenJack]

What?

 

[DemonInH]

Eric：傻人有傻福， Fortune favors fools

wow, rarely see another Chinese speaker. but still it may cause some misunderstandings, so better communicate with others in english.
by the way, did u use my chinese translation upstairs, if so, i'd like to know ur feedback

 

[DL00ng]

wow, rarely see another Chinese speaker. but still it may cause some misunderstandings, so better communicate with others in english.
by the way, did u use my chinese translation upstairs, if so, i'd like to know ur feedback

NO. It means that fools have good fortune.

 

[DemonInH]

NO. It means that fools have good fortune.

我知道是啥意思hhh，但感觉主角后面还是挺有主动性的，不是那种傻傻的等着的那种性格

 

[DL00ng]

我知道是啥意思hhh，但感觉主角后面还是挺有主动性的，不是那种傻傻的等着的那种性格

我还没玩完，剧情的进展都是由妹妹和妈妈驱动的，男主就像被支配的角色，牢牢占据“道德高地“，很难想他会被妹妹和妈妈喜欢。（I haven't finished playing it yet. The development of the plot is driven by the sister and mother. the male protagonist is like a dominated role, firmly occupying the "moral high ground". It is hard to imagine that he will be liked by the sister and mother.）

 

[minibaer12]

我还没玩完，剧情的进展都是由妹妹和妈妈驱动的，男主就像被支配的角色，牢牢占据“道德高地“，很难想他会被妹妹和妈妈喜欢。（I haven't finished playing it yet. The development of the plot is driven by the sister and mother. the male protagonist is like a dominated role, firmly occupying the "moral high ground". It is hard to imagine that he will be liked by the sister and mother.）

With the last update, I see it this way:

Erik is slowly but surely taking on the role of "man of the house." This is hinted at in some scenes. What still puzzles me, however, is the fact that when Erik and Helga become sexually active, he acts like a "mama's boy." One little taunt on his part, and Helga immediately becomes dominant and takes complete control.

This is where Lyna comes in. She manipulates Helga to the extreme. But she, too, fails at the decisive moment.

So, now the facts come into play:
- Helga and Lyna are bisexual
- Lyna and Erik want to be sexually active not only with each other, but also with their mother
- The relationship between Lyna and Erik is still secret, but Helga already suspects something
- Lyna and Erik's plan to seduce Helga is still only a theory. The bedroom scene, in which Helga is drunk and unconscious, shows us what the two are capable of together. In the last update, at the beginning of the pool scene, we see how Erik and Lyna harass Helga together, leaving her only room to flee. (I've posted two pictures in this thread)

Conclusion:
It's only a matter of time before Helga gives up her resistance and a threesome develops.

Now it's interesting to find out who the mysterious texter is. It's probably Anna, the aunt. What impact will she have on the story?

 

[Filipis]

I want some more flashbacks of Helga dominated by her older sister.

 

[DL00ng]

With the last update, I see it this way:

Erik is slowly but surely taking on the role of "man of the house." This is hinted at in some scenes. What still puzzles me, however, is the fact that when Erik and Helga become sexually active, he acts like a "mama's boy." One little taunt on his part, and Helga immediately becomes dominant and takes complete control.

This is where Lyna comes in. She manipulates Helga to the extreme. But she, too, fails at the decisive moment.

So, now the facts come into play:
- Helga and Lyna are bisexual
- Lyna and Erik want to be sexually active not only with each other, but also with their mother
- The relationship between Lyna and Erik is still secret, but Helga already suspects something
- Lyna and Erik's plan to seduce Helga is still only a theory. The bedroom scene, in which Helga is drunk and unconscious, shows us what the two are capable of together. In the last update, at the beginning of the pool scene, we see how Erik and Lyna harass Helga together, leaving her only room to flee. (I've posted two pictures in this thread)

Conclusion:
It's only a matter of time before Helga gives up her resistance and a threesome develops.

Now it's interesting to find out who the mysterious texter is. It's probably Anna, the aunt. What impact will she have on the story?

Upon seeing the beginning of Chapter 3, my personal thoughts are:

1.Erik is a moody hypocrite, Helga is a typical naive sweetheart, and Lyna is an evil pervert. Erik is thoroughly unlikable—this so-called moral role model who can’t even keep his own condom is now grabbing Lyna by the neck and demanding an apology?

2.I would have much preferred if the women were equals—lovers, partners, perhaps with one being more dominant in sex or daily life, but not in a dynamic of control and submission.

3.As the story progresses, I would rather see them engaging in mutual seduction and resistance, gradually breaking through their emotional barriers together.

Points 2 and 3, unfortunately, are no longer achievable in the current storyline.

 

[MAGO-DAG]

Upon seeing the beginning of Chapter 3, my personal thoughts are:

1.Erik is a moody hypocrite, Helga is a typical naive sweetheart, and Lyna is an evil pervert. Erik is thoroughly unlikable—this so-called moral role model who can’t even keep his own condom is now grabbing Lyna by the neck and demanding an apology?

2.I would have much preferred if the women were equals—lovers, partners, perhaps with one being more dominant in sex or daily life, but not in a dynamic of control and submission.

3.As the story progresses, I would rather see them engaging in mutual seduction and resistance, gradually breaking through their emotional barriers together.

Points 2 and 3, unfortunately, are no longer achievable in the current storyline.

Sigh... it's just porn dude, you're forgetting the fact that every porn genre has its own plot and atmosphere!
Not all games have to be the same style, some have a romantic story, some have a perverted plot.

And yes, some girls like to be involved in roleplay or being dominated by their man! Think again and have a nice day!

 

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Based dev! Love it

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, and Mindgeek in recent years.

 

[DemonInH]

Upon seeing the beginning of Chapter 3, my personal thoughts are:

1.Erik is a moody hypocrite, Helga is a typical naive sweetheart, and Lyna is an evil pervert. Erik is thoroughly unlikable—this so-called moral role model who can’t even keep his own condom is now grabbing Lyna by the neck and demanding an apology?

2.I would have much preferred if the women were equals—lovers, partners, perhaps with one being more dominant in sex or daily life, but not in a dynamic of control and submission.

3.As the story progresses, I would rather see them engaging in mutual seduction and resistance, gradually breaking through their emotional barriers together.

Points 2 and 3, unfortunately, are no longer achievable in the current storyline.

男主称不上虚伪，他是个害羞、负责任、遵守诺言的男孩。这一点在我逐行翻译的时候有体会到，之前我玩2.4版本的时候是感觉人物的行为有点割裂，有点对Erik喜欢不起来，但后面直接更新到3.2，再次逐行翻译时看到了开发者很用心，调整了许多句子，将人设变得更加饱满。

Lyna也提到过几次打破Erik的壳，她是有点受虐倾向，想要Erik展现主导的一面。至于说Erik掐Lyna的脖子，一方面是Lyna的行为太过冒险有可能毁掉一切，Erik感到愤怒也是合理的，一方面也是Erik想顺从Lyna的想法表现出大胆主导的一面，一点点的情趣Play

The male lead isn't exactly fake—he's a shy, responsible guy who keeps his promises. I really felt that when I was translating line by line. Before, when I played version 2.4, his actions felt a bit disjointed, and I didn't really warm up to Erik. But then i updated to 3.2, and when I translated it again line by line, I noticed how much effort the dev put in. The dev tweaked a lot of lines, making his character feel way more fleshed out.

Lyna also mentioned a few times about breaking Erik out of his shell. She's got a bit of a masochistic streak—she wants Erik to take charge. As for Erik choking Lyna, on one hand, Lyna's actions were too risky and could've ruined everything, so Erik's anger made sense. On the other, he wanted to go along with what Lyna wanted and show some bold dominance—just a bit of kinky play.

 

[DL00ng]

Sigh... it's just porn dude, you're forgetting the fact that every porn genre has its own plot and atmosphere!
Not all games have to be the same style, some have a romantic story, some have a perverted plot.

And yes, some girls like to be involved in roleplay or being dominated by their man! Think again and have a nice day!

you are right, just enjoy the porn.

 

[DL00ng]

男主称不上虚伪，他是个害羞、负责任、遵守诺言的男孩。这一点在我逐行翻译的时候有体会到，之前我玩2.4版本的时候是感觉人物的行为有点割裂，有点对Erik喜欢不起来，但后面直接更新到3.2，再次逐行翻译时看到了开发者很用心，调整了许多句子，将人设变得更加饱满。

Lyna也提到过几次打破Erik的壳，她是有点受虐倾向，想要Erik展现主导的一面。至于说Erik掐Lyna的脖子，一方面是Lyna的行为太过冒险有可能毁掉一切，Erik感到愤怒也是合理的，一方面也是Erik想顺从Lyna的想法表现出大胆主导的一面，一点点的情趣Play

The male lead isn't exactly fake—he's a shy, responsible guy who keeps his promises. I really felt that when I was translating line by line. Before, when I played version 2.4, his actions felt a bit disjointed, and I didn't really warm up to Erik. But then i updated to 3.2, and when I translated it again line by line, I noticed how much effort the dev put in. The dev tweaked a lot of lines, making his character feel way more fleshed out.

Lyna also mentioned a few times about breaking Erik out of his shell. She's got a bit of a masochistic streak—she wants Erik to take charge. As for Erik choking Lyna, on one hand, Lyna's actions were too risky and could've ruined everything, so Erik's anger made sense. On the other, he wanted to go along with what Lyna wanted and show some bold dominance—just a bit of kinky play.

只是无法带入这样的角色。有各种各样的人物，总有喜欢的和不喜欢的，我不能因为不喜欢就贬低他。
I just can't get into this kind of role. There are all kinds of characters, there are always some that you like and some that you don't like, and I can't belittle him just because I don't like him.

 

[Ruykiru]

2.I would have much preferred if the women were equals—lovers, partners, perhaps with one being more dominant in sex or daily life, but not in a dynamic of control and submission.

This is what you might have thought from the incest build up and wholesome story on chapter 1 and half of 2. In retrospective it was genuine, but also kind of a bait on my part hehe. This is not that kind of only romance story, my friend.

It's called SINFUL Summer for a reason

And yes, I do like dominant or perverted women. Too tired of the mindless harem structure with a gigachad MC that fucks everything that moves. Let the ladies be on the spotlight for once

 

[DL00ng]

This is what you might have thought from the incest build up and wholesome story on chapter 1 and half of 2. In retrospective it was genuine, but also kind of a bait on my part hehe. This is not that kind of only romance story, my friend.

It's called SINFUL Summer for a reason

And yes, I do like dominant or perverted women. Too tired of the mindless harem structure with a gigachad MC that fucks everything that moves. Let the ladies be on the spotlight for once

Yes. It would be more interesting if Erik became more assertive, hopefully as a clever disguise to please Lyna and Helga, while he remained the same person.

 

[DarkLurker12]

This is what you might have thought from the incest build up and wholesome story on chapter 1 and half of 2. In retrospective it was genuine, but also kind of a bait on my part hehe. This is not that kind of only romance story, my friend.

It's called SINFUL Summer for a reason

And yes, I do like dominant or perverted women. Too tired of the mindless harem structure with a gigachad MC that fucks everything that moves. Let the ladies be on the spotlight for once

Just playing up to version 3.2. Good story and excelent characterization in this novel, props to you. Love me some pdominant, proactie women in my porn and we all know how rare that is without going into sissification and the like.

Also an interesting choice making the driving force of the story be our villian protag Lyna and her neverending manipulations. I look forward to having this whole thing settle right back into a perverted version of the original powerdynamics: pushy brat at the bottom, people pleasing switch trying to mediate in the middle and DommyMuscleMommy forcibly keeping it all functionally normal.

That does bring me to my only complaint for this VN, how the "music videos" scattered about midkey sing Lyna and the whole incest dynamics' praises. The text of the VN reads like a psychological triller but presents like a romance novel. The mixed messaging feels like a warped Lifetime TV Movie. It greatly increases the ick factor by romanticizing these sinful proccedings rather them letting these PsychHorror moments sink in properly. Like the VN want to do to you what Lyna want to do with her family, manipulate you into seeing all this sinfulness as wholesome. I'm very pleased that Helga's here with the right mindset about all this.

Here's hoping Helga properly takes control out from under Lyna and spends a good week sitting on her daughter's face while wrapping her new boytoy around her finger and between her tits.

 

[Ruykiru]

Like the VN want to do to you what Lyna want to do with her family, manipulate you into seeing all this sinfulness as wholesome. I'm very pleased that Helga's here with the right mindset about all this.

I mean her methods are not the cleanest, but if you play through her flashback and confession again, when Helga goes away for a morning after the massage (2.6 I think?), you can see Lyna simply has a trauma and that's the root of everything.

The bratty girl just wants a full "wholesome" family she never had, and incest is the most extreme love. She was taught to be very stubborn after all...

 

[minibaer12]

I mean her methods are not the cleanest, but if you play through her flashback and confession again, when Helga goes away for a morning after the massage (2.6 I think?), you can see Lyna simply has a trauma and that's the root of everything.

The bratty girl just wants the a full "wholesome" family she never had, and incest is the most extreme love. She was taught to be very stubborn after all...

If we're honest, you're touching on at least one taboo subject here, which is embodied in one person.

The scary thing is, it's not even unrealistic!