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Jstforme

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it s not a complicated story
but this uncoordinated IS the probleme..And this problem on everything else and makes this story and the felt has the reading totally wonky... And i don't talk about the little fairy.....guilty / no guilty...An ersatz also..

it s why i say a re writing of all this or a second letcure can help really...and reworks some renders also...them...
I'm just confused why someone who has the hang-ups about real life law, immorality of incest, and thinks anyone older than 30 would never in their life be interested in a young college girl, would even bother making a game like this in the first place.
 

Maviarab

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How long is this update from the previous version? If it's short, I'll wait for the next one or after
It has not been terribly long, dev updates fairly regularly so if you want a lot of content at once it may be better to wait if that suits your time better.

I'm just confused why someone who has the hang-ups about real life law, immorality of incest, and thinks anyone older than 30 would never in their life be interested in a young college girl, would even bother making a game like this in the first place.
You know the dev and the MC are not one and the same right? The dev can create a character totally unlike himself...yes...you do understand that?
 

kameohawk

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is there a patch to make them his real daughters?
You'd lose a chunk of the plot if that was to be the case. I don't think any of the daughters backstory would make sense if they were actually related.

Just caught up with this game. It's not bad. The renders have actually grown on me. The story can be a bit odd though at times but certainly not stupid to the point where it's hard to read.
 
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jhustrue

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Has there ever been a 5-10min new version.......... No changelog for you................ Not smart enough
Wow did you really have to be a dick about it? The last version was the first time I'd played. I do find it hilarious when an idiot tries to attack someone's intelligence, though.
 
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leo_grouch

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Always enjoyable story, the judges daughter twist was a little odd. Would have liked a bit more in this update, waiting impatiently for the next continuation.


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Watcher X

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You know the dev and the MC are not one and the same right? The dev can create a character totally unlike himself...yes...you do understand that?
I think a lot of people forget that a lot of devs are in their early 20s and in university, which is why we see so many porn games with the male protagonist around that age in a school setting. And when they try to write an older male protagonist they tend to suck at it. That's to be expected as they have no life experience.

I have no idea how old this dev is, but I like how he is writing the MC in this game. I think a lot of people have become conditioned to believe if you are not a perv in a porn game then you are a weak simp. When in fact he is just reacting normally to situations where attractive girls half his age and under his care are flirting with him.
 

jhustrue

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I think a lot of people forget that a lot of devs are in their early 20s and in university, which is why we see so many porn games with the male protagonist around that age in a school setting. And when they try to write an older male protagonist they tend to suck at it. That's to be expected as they have no life experience.

I have no idea how old this dev is, but I like how he is writing the MC in this game. I think a lot of people have become conditioned to believe if you are not a perv in a porn game then you are a weak simp. When in fact he is just reacting normally to situations where attractive girls half his age and under his care are flirting with him.
That's well put. I actually hate games where the MC acts like a monkey, molesting people in their sleep, spying on them, overall acting like a complete horndog. When I find games where the MC acts maturely I usually find myself loving the game. It sucks that most games the MC acts like he's never been around a female before. I think it shows that the dev doesn't actually know much about females to begin with... that's just my opinion though.
 

fullarsenal

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Only issue i have with this game is i cant tell if the side girls will cut into the main girls action but thats just a wait and see kind of deal, loving the game so far.
 

Justbrian74

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Reading the debate on the latest update is interesting. This story at least has people engaged enough to go back and forth about a “date night.” Personally, I felt the event at the dance club was out of place, but it didn’t hit me how out of place until someone mentioned how it was supposed to be a date with the girls and he spent almost no time with them. He just seemed to be there as a wallet (by his own choosing).
 
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Spfjolietjake

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Reading the debate on the latest update is interesting. This story at least has people engaged enough to go back and forth about a “date night.” Personally, I felt the event at the dance club was out of place, but it didn’t hit me how out of place until someone mentioned how it was supposed to be a date with the girls and he spent almost no time with them. He just seemed to be there as a wallet (by his own choosing).
Sometimes he is the Mac sometimes he is the daddy. Even if he took abby alone they wouldn't be having sex any faster. The scene fit, I'm at a loss at some of the over possessive views.

To me an LI doesn't have to be chained to an mc. They should be allowed to have fun with their sisters and new found friends. I really hoped the caveman mentality wasn't this alive and well :(
 

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Sometimes he is the Mac sometimes he is the daddy. Even if he took abby alone they wouldn't be having sex any faster. The scene fit, I'm at a loss at some of the over possessive views.

To me an LI doesn't have to be chained to an mc. They should be allowed to have fun with their sisters and new found friends. I really hoped the caveman mentality wasn't this alive and well :(
In the MC's eyes Abby isn't a LI yet, she's his daughter. If my daughter took me out I would spend my time with her, because it's the polite thing to do. I wouldn't be screwing strangers in the back office.
 

ontach

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Sometimes he is the Mac sometimes he is the daddy. Even if he took abby alone they wouldn't be having sex any faster. The scene fit, I'm at a loss at some of the over possessive views.
1. That 'date night' is a father-daughter bonding event, not some random night out. This date night was something the daughter had planned as a surprise.
2. IMHO it would have been more natural for the MC to go out by himself after the fight with the daughter, and drowned his sorrows in Darla. It would have taken his mind off the fight, rather than leave him brooding about it.

To me an LI doesn't have to be chained to an mc. They should be allowed to have fun with their sisters and new found friends. I really hoped the caveman mentality wasn't this alive and well :(
Don't you have this backwards? The MC brought in Mei almost as a +1 to an event that should have been exclusive - family only. Abby doesn't remember her at all. The others never even knew her. Even with Darla, the daughters aren't the ones having fun with their new found friends - it is the MC himself doing that.

What caveman mentality are you talking about?
 

Spfjolietjake

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In the MC's eyes Abby isn't a LI yet, she's his daughter. If my daughter took me out I would spend my time with her, because it's the polite thing to do. I wouldn't be screwing strangers in the back office.
She had a blast. If it had been a special "date night" she wouldn't have invited lily. He had a good time she had a great time. I don't see the issue.

Even with fatherly duties I don't feel he has to be chained to her and is allowed to get some pussy when he can. She's getting some herself so I see no issues they are both adults
 

Spfjolietjake

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1. That 'date night' is a father-daughter bonding event, not some random night out. This date night was something the daughter had planned as a surprise.
2. IMHO it would have been more natural for the MC to go out by himself after the fight with the daughter, and drowned his sorrows in Darla. It would have taken his mind off the fight, rather than leave him brooding about it.


Don't you have this backwards? The MC brought in Mei almost as a +1 to an event that should have been exclusive - family only. Abby doesn't remember her at all. The others never even knew her. Even with Darla, the daughters aren't the ones having fun with their new found friends - it is the MC himself doing that.

What caveman mentality are you talking about?
When is it stated "date night" is family only? Are we reading the same vn?
 
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Moonis

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I can't wait for daughters reactions when they find out that it's proposed that MC marries Mei :D
If they get to know Mei before that, it lessens the blow if Mei isn't total outsider, someone to instantly hate.
 
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kameohawk

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Reading the debate on the latest update is interesting. This story at least has people engaged enough to go back and forth about a “date night.” Personally, I felt the event at the dance club was out of place, but it didn’t hit me how out of place until someone mentioned how it was supposed to be a date with the girls and he spent almost no time with them. He just seemed to be there as a wallet (by his own choosing).
I found it interesting they really hammed up the Lethal Weapon Murdock "I'm getting too old for this shit" vibe by having the MC keep saying how loud it was and how he wished he was at home to kind of explain why he sat down all night until the very end.

I think the blow job would have made more sense if there was a lead in to it. If the MC was going to get blown in the club it would have been better if it was someone like the lassie you had sex with in the flat, as opposed to a completely new character who may or may not appear again (although I'm guessing she will). Especially a character who is only blowing you because her mother ROYALLY went over her remit by blabbing to her daughter about Super Dad. She could lose her job for that shit. the blow job and sex felt less like plot development and more a throwaway scene to avoid people complaining there's no sex. Personally the update would have been better with no sex but instead focused on getting hot and heavy whilst dancing, but that's just me.
 
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