VN Ren'Py Single Again [v1.24.1] [Clever name games]

[HiP1]

I repeat what is said in my previous intervention. Mc, it seems quite realistic to me ... The doubts present in his head seem to me in line with the thoughts of the great majority of people, in any situation (not necessarily on sex). The continuous waiting for something to happen between him and Abby, considering the relationship with the deceased wife, I find him adequate (even if he does not respect the canons of the AVNs). The only thing, which I would find intriguing, would be if, one of the secrets held by Becca, was Frank's natural daughter. Unfortunately, I found enough data, to eliminate this hypothesis. Becca was born in March. To return to conception and subsequent pregnancy of nine months, it should have been born in January, or, at most early February. All this, I deducted it from Frank's flashbacks. When Shannon left him, and Jessica went to the room, to console him. According to the dialogues, it had been in the room for a month, and summer was coming. Of course, if the DEV wanted to rewrite the date of birth, it would have a great very exciting event, to be inserted. We add the fact that Frank is no longer a boy, and a biological daughter, it would be a nice event.

Becca is born March 15th. Jess comes to cheer MC up in July, and she says MC was in his room for a month, so he broke up in June. that's exactly 9 month. so like I said, either Becca is MC's real daughter, or Shannon cheated on MC.
because of Patreon rules, there will never be actual confirmation in the game without a "patch".

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exactly. that was misleading. that's my point. the dev presented the MC as the player. but the fact is the MC is very separated from the player who decides very little except for some scenes getting shown (most still happen in the background even if you miss them). it's close to a kinetic novel.

i do think the crux is that he is already in a relationship whit 2 of his 3 step-daughters
Lily and Becca kinda did force themselves onto the MC and Abby was the mc's step-daughter for longer so it is understandable that he's a bit more hesitant on Abby.

then again Abby is jessica's daughter the women who he loved and she's starting to resemble her more and more, she was the women he loved so you'd expect the boundary's to start disappearing faster.

Most people don't have a issue whit the fact that the MC struggle's whit the idea off being whit abby but that it is dragging on and on whilst hes ignoring that hes already doing the same thing whit Lily and Becca.

All in all it seems that the MC only needs a excuse to get over himself ,Lily and Becca's aggressive approach made him crumble fast
The same can be said for the Rape play thing whit becca,the mc was against the idea but now that Mei said its her "punishment" hes all for it....

the Abby x MC is just a carrot on a stick on the MC(the player) is the donkey
We'll probably see a other scene like at the graveyard before they progress in their relationship( light shining on Abby whilst the rest is covered in shadows like some divine sign)

MC needs his perception to be altered for his to allow himself to make moves. and Becca is the one that alters his perception. She did it for herself, and she did it for Lilly, she did it for Mei. MC specifically made her promise she will stop doing it for Abby, punishment for breaking it would be that MC and Becca are done. that's why it's taking so long for her. MC and Abby are left to their own devices and Becca can't work on any of them to speed things up.
for the rape fantasy, Mei changed MC's perception.

 

[Thatguy125Ab]

so i started playing the day the current build was released, and it took me 4 days, i only stopped to eat, sleep and go to work, and i loved every second of it, i think my favorite non-lewd scene was when Abby turned on the tv to the adoption porn and she got super embarrassed, i was playing it around midnight so it was really hard to contain my laughter for like a straight 5-10 minutes. This is easily one of my favorite vns now

 

[Nick_on_Vox]

Played for the first time. Renders and animations are well done. The dialog... Eh. You can skip all the dialog in this VN and miss nothing. MC only ever has 1 thing to say, really. Characters are shallow as hell. Beth and Nessa are the only ones with any depth of character to them.
Becca is a bad Oracle/mastermind trope that has everything planned down to every possible detail.
Lilith is a ran through bar slut who you're stuck with.
Abby is... Well, dev decided to never get around to that it seems. She's the first to try and the story will probably end before she ever gets a scene other than when Lilith cucks MC with her. Speaking of, there's definitely no player agency. Lilith cucksC MC with Abby and the only option is "give her a hug and tell her it's fine". So dumb.
The only decent looking LI models are Beth and Madison, but Madison is also a ran through bar slut. Guess it's whatever though, since MC is such a pathetic beta who's always getting cucked or cheated on. Lol.
Yeah. This dev does well with renders and animations, but should definitely hire someone else to write the story and dialog.

 

[Maviarab]

Played for the first time. Renders and animations are well done. The dialog... Eh. You can skip all the dialog in this VN and miss nothing. MC only ever has 1 thing to say, really. Characters are shallow as hell. Beth and Nessa are the only ones with any depth of character to them.
Becca is a bad Oracle/mastermind trope that has everything planned down to every possible detail.
Lilith is a ran through bar slut who you're stuck with.
Abby is... Well, dev decided to never get around to that it seems. She's the first to try and the story will probably end before she ever gets a scene other than when Lilith cucks MC with her. Speaking of, there's definitely no player agency. Lilith cucksC MC with Abby and the only option is "give her a hug and tell her it's fine". So dumb.
The only decent looking LI models are Beth and Madison, but Madison is also a ran through bar slut. Guess it's whatever though, since MC is such a pathetic beta who's always getting cucked or cheated on. Lol.
Yeah. This dev does well with renders and animations, but should definitely hire someone else to write the story and dialog.

 

[xxTHESTYGIANxx]

Okay so I don't usually give feedback very often.

I am not a fan of the pushing Abi and Lilly together thing, I get it was more of a parental move than anything and I can agree with that. However, the following inner crisis was somewhat disconnected for me, the MC admits he wants her. He tells Lilly they should remain a secret so her and Abi can be together? That kind of put me off. In the dream he should have consulted Becca, lets face it Becca is the wild ass glue for all this. Lets face it he tells Becca everything after every "date" why is this different?

It just felt this playthrough moved the MC further away from Abi. To me, and this is only my opinion, but it felt the MC was going backward in terms of feelings for her.

 

[janetitan]

Okay so I don't usually give feedback very often.

I am not a fan of the pushing Abi and Lilly together thing, I get it was more of a parental move than anything and I can agree with that. However, the following inner crisis was somewhat disconnected for me, the MC admits he wants her. He tells Lilly they should remain a secret so her and Abi can be together? That kind of put me off. In the dream he should have consulted Becca, lets face it Becca is the wild ass glue for all this. Lets face it he tells Becca everything after every "date" why is this different?

It just felt this playthrough moved the MC further away from Abi. To me, and this is only my opinion, but it felt the MC was going backward in terms of feelings for her.

many people want to see mc fuck abby not me, im not abby or lilly fan, the author want to get abby and lilth together let him lol

 

[Maviarab]

many people want to see mc fuck abby not me, im not abby or lilly fan, the author want to get abby and lilth together let him lol

What I find interesting is, there are all these people just 'assuming' Abby is an LI. Sure, Becca working on Frank, but she has never been confirmed...the dreams are just teases and Frank's thoughts and the side stories are just that, side stories. Sure, she probably is...but...who knows really except CNG?

However, this is F95...get 2 girls together who are potential LI's to the MC and everyone (for some reason) loses their shit and has a major overly dramatic meltdown....

 

[ccxvidonaferens]

What I find interesting is, there are all these people just 'assuming' Abby is an LI. Sure, Becca working on Frank, but she has never been confirmed...the dreams are just teases and Frank's thoughts and the side stories are just that, side stories. Sure, she probably is...but...who knows really except CNG?

However, this is F95...get 2 girls together who are potential LI's to the MC and everyone (for some reason) loses their shit and has a major overly dramatic meltdown....

To be fair, I have seen the dev respond to messages about Abby in the past and they have confirmed that she is a future LI but not for a considerable amount of time yet.

 

[HiHaHo]

What I find interesting is, there are all these people just 'assuming' Abby is an LI. Sure, Becca working on Frank, but she has never been confirmed...the dreams are just teases and Frank's thoughts and the side stories are just that, side stories. Sure, she probably is...but...who knows really except CNG?

However, this is F95...get 2 girls together who are potential LI's to the MC and everyone (for some reason) loses their shit and has a major overly dramatic meltdown....

im fine whit however its going to go
i don't feel invested enough to start speculating hard on possible future content or really got into one off the girls
yet im still invested enough to play a update when its out ,classic middle off the pack AVN for me

 

[c3p0]

However, this is F95...get 2 girls together who are potential LI's to the MC and everyone (for some reason) loses their shit and has a major overly dramatic meltdown....

More, this is the furryZone get one dildo involved with a potential LI to the MC and everyone (for some reason) loses their shit and has a major overly dramatic meltdown....

 

[Mickademous]

To be fair, I have seen the dev respond to messages about Abby in the past and they have confirmed that she is a future LI but not for a considerable amount of time yet.

Maybe it will turn out like "How I Met Your Mother" - Abby joins the DPG and then next season it's over.

 

[ccxvidonaferens]

Maybe it will turn out like "How I Met Your Mother" - Abby joins the DPG and then next season it's over.

It was bugging me that I hadn't provided a source for my original information so I had a search through my old posts on this forum and I found what my source was.

From the Dev's Patreon Post dated 20 July 2023 which announced the results for the Best Girl Poll that ran that month (Abby won btw, for a hat trick) and the relevant lines were as follows;

But back to Abby. I know people want her scenes in the story already. But she's still a ways off (And the story won't end when they do).

 

[Cartageno]

It was bugging me that I hadn't provided a source for my original information so I had a search through my old posts on this forum and I found what my source was.

From the Dev's Patreon Post dated 20 July 2023 which announced the results for the Best Girl Poll that ran that month (Abby won btw, for a hat trick) and the relevant lines were as follows;

But back to Abby. I know people want her scenes in the story already. But she's still a ways off (And the story won't end when they do).

Good to hear, thanks for the find. Let's just hope CNG doesn't pull a DMD and we then get an admiring Abby - sex with Abby - admiring Abby - dinner with Abby - sex with Abby - two lines of dialogue with a different character - repeat loop.

 

[Nick_on_Vox]

It was bugging me that I hadn't provided a source for my original information so I had a search through my old posts on this forum and I found what my source was.

From the Dev's Patreon Post dated 20 July 2023 which announced the results for the Best Girl Poll that ran that month (Abby won btw, for a hat trick) and the relevant lines were as follows;

But back to Abby. I know people want her scenes in the story already. But she's still a ways off (And the story won't end when they do).

Idk how the dev would keep it going after. The only story beats are MC crying "I don't wanna" and Lilly being an angry village bicycle with sharp edges. After Abby gets her scenes, the only thing left will be another Lilly meltdown, like that hasn't been the whole story so far. Lol.

 

[Harkonnan]

I am personally tired of the whole lily being possessive of abby thing. I get it they were a thing and still like to fool around, but by this time there should have been some progress on that. Lily should be more open to, or at least considering, sharing abby with the mc. I mean it is the end goal but now we seem to be going away from that idea in the story so, yeah, it's just getting annoying now. It's starting to remind me of the MC's whole denile of his desires thing earlier in the story; It's taking way to long to resolve itself.

Well that's my 2 cents worth.

 

[Sasanid]

I am personally tired of the whole lily being possessive of abby thing. I get it they were a thing and still like to fool around, but by this time there should have been some progress on that. Lily should be more open to, or at least considering, sharing abby with the mc. I mean it is the end goal but now we seem to be going away from that idea in the story so, yeah, it's just getting annoying now. It's starting to remind me of the MC's whole denile of his desires thing earlier in the story; It's taking way to long to resolve itself.

Well that's my 2 cents worth.

I guess it's more that Lilly is scared of losing those she loves, thus being ultra-possessive, I also really hope she manages to understand that at some point, cause yeah, her not wanting the MC to touch Abby, while Abby is all over him, and him being scared of Lilly... that's a 'funny, not funny' situation.

With that said, the MC really is a pussy, so it doesn't help, Becca has him in her grip and controls everything, while Abby seems oblivious to it all while being the 'end boss' at the same time.

It's a fucked up story to be honest, but weirdly enticing, even though I really dislike the MC, I mean, I suppose I can understand his confusion at first, his conflict over what's happening, but he's such a coward at the same time, 'no no no I can't do that' while he's fucking one of his daughters. Man, own your shit.

I'm still playing cause I want to see how it ends, certainly not because of the MCs inner monologue, but cause I like how the main LIs are written.

On the other hand, am I the only one who doesn't give a fuck about the sidegirls ? None hold a candle to Abby, Lilly and Becca, and they kinda just lengthen the story for no reasons.

 

[Mickademous]

On the other hand, am I the only one who doesn't give a fuck about the sidegirls ? None hold a candle to Abby, Lilly and Becca, and they kinda just lengthen the story for no reasons.

I'd be okay with just having Becca and Lil.
Best time I've had in the story so far was when Becca took Frank and Lilith to the hotel.
Those couple days with just the three of them were great. With some limited interactions in the stores and check-ins by text with others.

All the other characters are secondary for me, including Abby.
The rest could all still be characters in the story, of course, simply don't need to have a relationship with them.
Abby would still be a daughter.
Beth could still get her donation for her and Nessa to have a baby.
While the rest could all be family friends, who occasionally interact to flesh out the storyline, and so the world doesn't seem empty.