VN Ren'Py Single Again [v1.24.2] [Clever name games]

[Spiderfox]

Well that's odd... because no matter what I tried, I haven't even met anyone named Alice yet.....

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Please continue dropping things. I'll pick them up for you. I'm just that kind of nice guy.

 

[Havik79]

Just curious, I choose the loss in the dare game (Chinese checkers?) what happens if you beat Lily, surely she doesn't end up naked.

 

[Fap2766]

Just curious, I choose the loss in the dare game (Chinese checkers?) what happens if you beat Lily, surely she doesn't end up naked.

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[Havik79]

Really huh, so does it change anything in the latest version if she doesn't see your cock.

 

[Spiderfox]

Really huh, so does it change anything in the latest version if she doesn't see your cock.

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[MOAR Cowbell]

It would be hilarious if the dev decided, that the dad will NEVER ever fuck any of them ^_^.

Well that is a possibility as many may dislike any of the main girls (Becca, Lilith & Abigail) and would maybe want not to pursue them but more than likely you will get to bone all 3 of them just will prob be 5 or more updates from now to start it.

Really huh, so does it change anything in the latest version if she doesn't see your cock.

If you chose to shower with Becca from a previous update it changes some of the dialogue when she gives you a hand jobhowever if you didn't choose to shower with her then there is no dialogue change.

 

[Vertius]

I'm just going to come out and say it. Abby is so fucking annoying. Well, her and the fact that the dad turns into a spineless cuck whenever she is around. Any other girl and he's a respectable dude, Abby? Not so much.

 

[quorkboy]

If you chose to shower with Becca from a previous update it changes some of the dialogue when she gives you a hand job

And damn is that shower dialogue after Lilith loses the game such a turn on. I don't know what Becca said in the other path because I played "I lose" as far as the end of the steam room, saved, went back and took second place, got to the steam room scene and preferred that version. But whatever it was I doubt it could top what I got.

 

[Watcher X]

Again, the slow pace, slow burn is not the problem. The fact the MC has reservations, is not the problem. His slow evolution, is not the problem (as I've said numerous times, it's a refreshing change and nice to see).

As you said, it is a writing issue (ie, far too much of it at times) that is the issue. All we're advocating for is less inner diatrabe constantly repeated every fifth render...every update...it really is beyond old now and turning people off/away. We all understand his pysche (despite the professional masters holder arguing we don't)..we do. Just, do we need to constantly hear is inner thoughts all...the...damn...time....still?

This is a criticism I agree with and can get behind.

Criticisms I've seen others make that the MC is a weak simp because he won't take the initiative I can't agree with.

 

[Thrill Flares]

Impatient? yes. especially when a game has 10 to 11 updates and yet the MC has failed to progress much if at all. I DO immerse myself in the game. When it is possible, I use MY name for the MC (in order to feel "closer" to the action), I play each scene and do not skip dialogue, and do my best to pay ATTENTION to the dialogue.

So you may understand where I am coming from, I am a 59 year old disabled veteran. I have - over the past 8 years - played and reviewed adult/porn games from Japan and here in the US. Normally, I do not mind a slow burn within a game, and I have played plenty where it takes nearly 8 updates before you even see the LI nude or even get to TOUCH her body, much less have sex with her. But THIS story is bordering on the ridiculous with its MC development and progression. The fact that after 10 to 11 the girls have shown a fair amount of character progression and have included a fair amount of content change from their initial behavior towards the MC, yet He STILL waffles between wanting them and "resisting" them is pulling this game downward from a pretty decent game to the level of a scam just to milk money from the developer's patreons. Not saying that this is what he/she is doing, but it sure FEELS that way.

And yes, As I mentioned in another post here, I have played games with fairly slow burn, but there is a right way, and a wrong way, to use that slow burn. I have no problem with slow burn if the MC shows a decent amount of progression within the game. There has been little to none with the MC in this game, and it is getting both annoying and boring.

The other thing I have a problem with is how he reacts (the MC) to Betty's manipulation of Lilith. At one point, I liked her as a character, but it pissed me off that the MC did not condemn her for her abusive - and yes, regardless of "her reasoning" it was abusive - treatment of a sister she is supposed to love. And the specious reasoning she uses is bullshit. at least from my point of view. Yes, I know, this is a porn game and not real life. But when you immerse yourself in a game, you put your own values into the game. Had this been real life, I would have back-handed her and told her to never come back until she changed and apologized to her sister.

A Person's past reflects their future its the same with characters. It is true that MC has not grown much. Most people see no growth cause its very miniscule and to most miniscule means nothing cause people want "more and greater" which is fueled by impatience. Complain all you want about the fact not alot has been done in 11 updates but take away the last .1 in the update and you get .10 which equals 0.1 which is where most games start at. Its still a developing game. It aint a finished project nor is it meant to be a short game. Also waiting 11 updates for any "major things" going on in the game. There are people who wait years for any "major growth" in translated novels from china and japan to see any major growth in characters. Also you must no know the horror of waiting for the RPG porn game A Struggle with sin its at version 3.3.1. It took such a long time for it get any significant change tot he game. There are other games like that. Just learn to be happy with what you get. Some people what years for significant change.

 

[Thrill Flares]

We understand you fine. We just think you're wrong.

So i am wrong about psychology then? I don't think so. Nothing anyone has said has made think otherwise. And unlike other people I constantly try find the flaws in my own arguments. Psychological the character fits. Logically in the next "major update" there should be a noticable change. Its all about the Psychology of characters. Some people grow from the past quicker than others. Others slower. Also at least you said "that nstead of stupidly saying I don't understand like others.

 

[quorkboy]

So, Mister Boombastic, about those wallpapers?

Please don't punish us all for those who can't let this go.

Or do what you want. The two we've had are well appreciated and if that's all, that's all.

(but a solo Lilith wallpaper, being adorable, sexy, or both, clothed or not, would make my day! Have I mentioned I like Lilith?)

 

[Thrill Flares]

No, their not mistakes, but they aren't supporting you're opinion with their thoughts either. I was just saying calm down. I wasn't telling you to stop voicing your opinion. You seemed to be getting kind of worked up with all the caps locks you were using.

I didn't voice it well and I blame the alcohol.

I only got annoyed cause i kept having to repeat myself. Especially when i keep trying to tell them I understand their argument, but they keep telling i did not. As if I was some kind of idiot who couldn't read nor understand simple annoyance over repetition. LOL Also i calm down quicker than what it seems. I did calm my self down after your reply before though. Anyone who repeats themselves or is forced to constantly repeat themselves gets annoyed by it. Its how repetition actually works. When you have to repeat yourself over and over again with minute (pronounced as my-noot) changes is more annoying then reading the same thing over and over again, but thanks for the advice. 'preciate it.

 

[Mister Boombastic]

So, Mister Boombastic, about those wallpapers?

Please don't punish us all for those who can't let this go.

Or do what you want. The two we've had are well appreciated and if that's all, that's all.

(but a solo Lilith wallpaper, being adorable, sexy, or both, clothed or not, would make my day! Have I mentioned I like Lilith?)

Sure mate.

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[Thrill Flares]

Unfortunately `Single Again` isn`t a psychological essay. It is a fictional story and the way MC progresses (not) as a character is wrong storywise. His issues may be in some way realistic but if it breaks the narrative - it should either be reworked somehow or even excluded. The rules of writing.

That argument is inane. A narrative has to do with people. People think. psychology has to do with the how and why people say or do what they do. Your opinion that it breaks the narrative is only cause its annoying to read the same words over and over again. It more annoying to repeat yourself with minute (pronounced as my-noot) changes. If a story is not realistic enough then it breaks the narrative not the other way around. Boring realism is only a small part of realism cause realism is not specific but general. Logically (unless the dev is a "goof") there should be a a significant change that adjusts the MC moving forward in the next "major" update. I mention "boring realism" cause to quote you " His issues may be in some way realistic, if it breaks the narrative..." point. The repetition is a small aspect that people are blowing out of proportion.

 

[Maviarab]

Just block/ignore the dude...easier.

 

[Thrill Flares]

Sure mate.

And Thrill Flares, can you please let this go? This is a thread about an erotic visual novel, not about your or anyone else being right or wrong. I'm not sure if this is your first internet discussion, but there is no way you are going to 'win' this, not even by replying to each comment with a half essay. Just accept there are some people with a different opinion than yours and let it go.

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Its funny how people think i want "win" anything. Just replying to replies i get notified on. Secondly its I know its impossible to "win" when people blow small things out of proportion cause of annoyance of small annoyance issues and not getting how some people react to their pasts."

 

[Thrill Flares]

Also never meant to argue with so many people about a small annoyance issue that people have. So sorry if caused annoyance to anyone outside the argument/ debate that has been going on. Every thing i typed has been typed enough and my piont cant get more accross so i am done typing about. Those who listen to reason understand those who don't, don't plain and simple. Have a nice day/night everyone!!!!

 

[Mister Boombastic]

Just block/ignore the dude...easier.

Didn't know I could do that, thanks! Any last wallpaper request before I head off to bed?

 

[quorkboy]

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Now who could she be sending that to? Or is it just for her? These are the important questions.

Thank you