my only problem with this game right now is how much time we spend with the MC's inner thoughts, we already know what he is thinking we have the dream sequences for that, it would be better to spend more time with the girls doing mundane things, go visit Becca at work more often and than just talk a little bit and fade to black, watch a movie at home, go to Lilly's job and grab a coffee, go to the grocery store and drink some tea, and talk to the beauty that works there, just go to work and maybe meet the neighbours in the hallway, I don't know, not every day needs to be an event but not every day needs to be spent with us reading the MC agonize over what is happening over and over again, it makes sense that he is but it would be more believable to me if we spent time doing things like normal father and daughters would instead of every time they are on-screen "sex" is looming over them.
edit: basically what this would do is give time for the Mc to accept the situation in a more believable and organic manner as well as allow us as players to see them as more than just people who want to fuck each other, this is a problem that a lot of these games have, they want everything to happen in about a month and us to play each and every day, but this isn't just unrealistic but it creates fatigue, downtime is important in every story it is the moment where the characters will actually grow, one small event every two days, or something like that could make it better, I don't know it is hard to say what would work in someone else's story, but I feel like a lot of the complaints would be sated if this was the case if we could see him as a father more, if we could see the girls as daughters more, and if time was allowed to pass.