Right, spelling and grammar niggles, cos that's all I ever do, apparently.
"I'll try not too" "It's fine. I want you too" "What are you up too?" "if she wants too" "You sure they want too?" "she would want me too?" You don't have too" "I wanted too" "We'd be happy too" "I just had too" "I wasn't going too" "I want too. I insist." I... I want you too" "it was me you were talking too" "You have too" "I know, I wanted too" "I can't force you too" "But... I want too" "You aren't going too" "I wanted too. But" "It's not that I don't want too" Dad. I know you want too" "Cause you didn't want too" "You don't have too" "If you want too" "Am I not allowed too" "Just because I told her too" "She has too, She lost" "I kinda had too" "I doubt I'd have too" "If you want too" "I want you too" "I have too" all need "too" replacing with "to"
"Your really just paying" "Your really winning her" "I suppose your right" "Your back" "Your not old" "your... well seasoned." "Your going to spend 3 hours" "Your beautiful don't ever" "Your Lilly Father?" "You know your gorgeous" "Your not going to make me drink" "Your not grossed out" "Your getting tense" "Your Stalling Abs" "Your back, Abby?" "Your joking?" "That your a great friend" "Your back already?!" "Your wrong!" "Your back... I thought" "Hey, your back" "Your not going to tell" "Lets say your right" "your still one of my girls" "and when your done the food" "Assuming your right" "Your my..." "I know what your doing" all need "your" replaced with "You're"
Now general spelling/grammar niggles and mistakes:
"right at you max budget" should be "right at your max budget"
"You're beautiful don't ever think otherwise" should be "You're beautiful, don't ever think otherwise"
"You're Lilly Father?" should be "You're Lilly's Father?"
"Because I'm you father" should be "Because I'm your father"
"Oh, my butts buzzing" should be Oh, my butt's buzzing"
"Abby were all friends" should be "Abby, we're all friends"
"actually were sitting on his bed" should be "actually we're sitting on his bed"
"To late" should be "Too Late"
"Soon you're body" should be "Soon your body"
"Were done" should be "We're done"
"were sisters Becca" should be "we're sisters Becca"
"You're listed assets" should be "Your listed assets"
in one scene, between Frank saying "I'm sure she really needed you" and "We're both lucky to have you", Frank says "Mmmm" I think it should be Lillith saying that.
"Equal parts naivety and pervert" should be "Equal parts naivety and perversion"
"You acting weird, Dad" should be "You're acting weird, Dad"
"You're dad brings you up" should be "Your dad brings you up"
"know eachother better" should be "know each other better"
"Hiroki and Tommo" should be "Hiroki and Tomo"
"since you here" should be "since you're here"
"her and I need to have a conversation" should be "She and I need to have a conversation"
"So you going to put all this on her?" should be "So you're going to put all this on her?"
"And I was to... Stubborn" should be "And I was too... Stubborn"
"Try not to cum to fast" should be "Try not to cum too fast"
And that's everything I took note of, there's probably more, but hey, it's a start.
