Ayhsel

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Well the problem is you now become the asshole. All your common friends and people who are seeing what you did to her, think you are some kind of monster, because she is chained to a location, and you treat her with indifference.

She is written as a clinical narcissist. How you treat that is exactly what she got. She will complain every month sending the check to the MC, "slaving to the grind for my ex", seeing her daughters 1 by 1 move in with the MC and leaving her alone, as he is happy. This will drive her insane as she will be unable to understand why people like the MC more than her. The final nail in the coffin will be for the MC to never speak or think of her again. For a narcissist, for someone to not be on the forefront of their mind, is death. If she could convince her daughters to do the same, that would really be the peace-de-resistance.
Oh yes, I agree with you. I never said I want to do that. I was just commenting as an improvement over the "kill the bitch violently" proposed before.

In fact, what you are proposing is a not sociopath alternative to my comment "if you can show MC is having a great time and is having the life she always wanted but can only see from abroad, that is even better. " The key is that she needs to be able to see MC being happy. Otherwise the effect is diminished.
 
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Oh yes, I agree with you. I never said I want to do that. I was just commenting as an improvement over the "kill the bitch violently" proposed before.

In fact, what you are proposing is a not sociopath alternative to my comment "if you can show MC is having a great time and is having the life she always wanted but can only see from abroad, that is even better. " The key is that she needs to be able to see MC being happy. Otherwise the effect is diminished.
Narcissist/Sociopath .. Potatoe/Potato .. LOL
 

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Narcissist/Sociopath .. Potatoe/Potato .. LOL
Wait, I thought you meant she is a narcissist. I used sociopath talking about MC, cause treating her as I described in the first post would totally make MC a textbook sociopath.
 
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Wait, I thought you meant she is a narcissist. I used sociopath talking about MC, cause treating her as I described in the first post would totally make MC a textbook sociopath.
I meant she is a narcissist, not a sociopath (as she cared for her daughters). The MC going sociopath .. yeah - that would be the having the ex being a slave, yeah .. that would work. I thought you were calling the ex a sociopath.

So our thoughts were the same - "from a different point of view" ...
 
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Amateurs...:sneaky:

If you really wanna hurt her, that is not how you do it. A life of imprisonment and shameful submission is going to hurt her more. And if you can show MC is having a great time and is having the life she always wanted but can only see from abroad, that is even better.

Imagine, for example, putting a chain on her and making her the house maid, having to treat MC as a king in front of people she knew before. Now that would hurt her way more.

And you can enjoy it over and over. Never forget that death is a more a release than a punishment.
far worse is acknowleding the knowledge of their existence, but not doing anything about or with it. creating an emotional distance, talking to her like a stranger you dont know. Formalized courtesy, a politeness that disacknowledges their past together, a civility of basic respects that are meaningless in the general sheme of things just throwing a light into the shasm of their personal distance.

The most evil thing you can do to someone that disrespects you like she did trying to accuse MC of rape and violence is knowing they can do nothing and still interacting like humans.
But remember: Forgiveness is letting go of a grudge, not letting the toxic person back in your life.
 
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Is there's a patch or not needed?
They are not your daughters, none of the three. This is not to cheat patreon, it is how the story is written (although arguably, abigail could potentially be your daughter without any problem with the story, at least for now).
So no patch needed.

EDIT. Forgot about Abigail's real father calling, so yeah, not even her can be MC's blood daughter, story wise.
 
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Pretty smoothly done I think without having landlords and tenants
The thing is all other stories are written with the mindset of blood relationships and then masquerade as some ridiculous non blood relationship. While nobody would actually believe the relationships are anything else that the blood ones, they serve the purpose to allow patreon to not be considered a porn website. The latter have way higher charges on credit cards, as it seems that porn sites has a lot of refund made by people after they finish masturbating.

At least that was the reason somebody explained it to me. Nothing more than financial decisions.

This novel, however, is clearly written with the shown relationships as the premise. In fact, I forgot in my previous post, and will modify now, that Abigail cannot be MC's daughter, given that her real father appears and will almost surely be a reason for plot later.
 

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I wonder if we will have a choice to kill Shannon in the future? shoot her in the head with a shotgun, or run her over on a truck, that would be very nice) simple, nothing particularly extreme
Just make sure you follow Rule#2: Double Tap.
 

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At least that was the reason somebody explained it to me. Nothing more than financial decisions.
half right. the payment processors dic(k)tate what content is permissable and pressure patreon to get rid of the unwanted shit. Wouldnt wonder its actualy in line with and a direct result of laws that opose incest and other abusive shit like that, especialy exploitation and violation, making said content a headache for the corporations due to tracing.
ironicaly though, the epstein mafia keeps operating and trafficking as usual.
 
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I don't know why but I was sure it was going to be released today....
 

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Hey everyone,
Single Again 0.07 - So 0.07 is almost done, I'd say around %80. I need to finish up with the writing as well as re-make the images for a scene. My hope is to get it out in a week (Aug 6th).
Other stuff - One thing I forgot to mention in the previous progress update was time jumps. I want the game to take place over a "realistic" amount of time. So that leaves a few options. One, everything happens over the course of a few weeks or so (Completely unrealistic). Two, I rack my brain trying to think of enough filler to fill up every day (Time consuming and no one likes filler). Three, use time jumps (All killer, no filler).
So, I'm going with time jumps. They won't be huge, like skipping months or anything. mostly just a day or two or three. For example 0.07 takes place on Tuesday, 0.08 will be on Friday. Skipping Wednesday and Thursday. If there is a single scene or something that happens on a day that is skipped it will be added to the beginning or end of a full day update. For those of you who made the bet with Rebecca their Wednesday date will be at the end of 0.07.
I think that's all, thanks everyone.
 
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