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Hahahahahah...no comment!That is not a problem! Real perv like us would have been thinking about nailing that sweet pussy for the last 5 years already
Kidding, of course
As an aside, just had a thought, we also have to bare in mind that he has had the divorce on his mind, possible worries about maybe losing Becca and Lilly etc. While I agree he does act somewhat immature for his age (though i disagree a little with the twice married comment, the second I believe was firmly of convenience and Shannon was very much the dominant figure), the guy (as written) has had a lot going on for the last few months. So to find out she suddenly wants him and tells him Abbi is falling for him, let's be honest, would come as a bit of a shock to anyone. I also see the MC (as written) as being the kind of guy that as much as he may want Becca, he is also thinking of possible fallout of such a situation which again, being honest, would be major if it got out.
My biggest gripe with the writing (and the only one really) is the speed of the divorce. I get it for game reasons, but where have they been living in the meantime? They moved back in to the loft like 2 days before the final hearing....
But, I can get over that error and suspend belief for the sake of the story moving forward.