VN Ren'Py Single Again [v1.24.3] [Clever name games]

[Ramagar]

Agreed.
Abby and Lily are already a couple, and obviously love each other. All Frank did was let Abby know that it's okay to accept the feelings she has for Lily, the way Lil already has for her.

Somewhat sad. Frank helped his daughter see that what others think about her feelings isn't as important as being happy. He encouraged her to follow her heart rather than worrying about what others think.
Then in an ironic twist, the author listened to what people thought about that part of their story, and gave in, changing what they wanted to do.
Oh well.

I am sure that the change was made because the 3 letter word a lot of people hate. They think if the LI even remotely looks at another, other than the MC, then it is the 3 letter word.

 

[Dr. Mick]

My problem with the last update, if it was a problem at all, was that there wasn't enough actual narrative. As others have written, Lilly and Abby was one thing plot-wise for a long time, so I see less of a problem there. I even think it could have been used as a hook to involve Abby in the given situation, but oh well.

Exactly.
A few times with the strapon, then a discussion about trying the "real thing" at some point opens the door to future possibilities.
Would have made perfect sense in the progression, alas some whiners have ruined that route, or at least slowed that timeline. Meaning it will now be even longer before there's any sex between Frank and Abby, because with that change CNG will have to rewrite where they were going with the story.

 

[Cartageno]

Exactly.
A few times with the strapon, then a discussion about trying the "real thing" at some point opens the door to future possibilities.

But ... but ... but the strapon is not my big bad dick. He's the only one to touch a girls pussy (I can use the grown up words because I am grown up!). Nobody else shall. Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!

 

[c3p0]

But ... but ... but the strapon is not my big bad dick. He's the only one to touch a girls pussy (I can use the grown up words because I am grown up!). Nobody else shall. Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!

Now go back to your mummy, I heared dinner is ready.

 

[cxx]

I am sure that the change was made because the 3 letter word a lot of people hate. They think if the LI even remotely looks at another, other than the MC, then it is the 3 letter word.

well goal is that frank has big family (harem) so no room for that.

 

[rostabu]

I found the rewrite underwhelming

 

[Deleted member 7180813]

1. He don't read this (most likely) as he is not active on this platfrom
2. Why? Why you and not all the other zoner who wrote the same amount of words for their views of things?
3. Why shall he listen to you or us more than the ones he earned money with?

It is not your story, never was and until you buy every rights for that never will.

Do we know that? It is an assumption. Same as if I go for a book about Sherlock Holmes. My assumptions would be that he catch the culprit with his sidekick Watson and most likely it will be so, but until I've read the book to the end, I know shit about it.
So, CNG can put a 180 degree change make Abi a slut, Frank a 200% Tarzan alpha male, Beth discovering dicks and so on and forth. Will it make sense? Possible not, but if CNG would write it, it would be what would be canon and what the games become.

Also, just curisous: Why do you format your paragraphs as you do?

You know. This is all stupid and pointless. I mean why? Seriously?
No shit it's not my story, but I'm the one liking and reading and committing to it like everyone else.
I get so tired of this lame argument. "It's not your story" blah blah blah

I said it clearly that I blame Patreon. But the platform and the whale tossing money to derail the story
for their own entertainment. And it gets on my nerves when people are like "if you aren't paying and
one of the Patridiots go fuck yourself. No one cares what you think"

Where do you think all the downloads come from the most? Here on this site or on Patreon/Scribestar?
You want the monies you better get head out of ass and go to the actual people downloading your shit.
You want to rake in money ignore the whales and give the people actually supporting your story a reason
to give you money. I would easily drop $20 a month to help this story if I wasn't watching it go to shit.
But I'm not going to in it's current state.

And this "We don't know" crap.

So Abby is suddenly dumb as fuck right?

She's in love with Frank. Has SAID how she fells about this.
She threated Lilith when she got violent with Frank and uses sex as a weapon
to keep her on a leash. She's not doing it for kicks or love. She's doing it for control.
And she has SAID her relationship with Lilith IS a tool she uses to control her behavior.
Lilith takes more pleasure from Abby than Abby gets from Lilith.

And I know, as a girl, with a Dad, personally, I don't like people I know hooking up with him.
I get angry even at the though of it. That's how real girls are. As a guy do you get hard thinking
of buddies fucking your mom? You sister? Or are you a bit protective and territorial?
Maybe your a beta I dunno.

Girls are territorial by nature. VERY.

So yeah, I do know. There is nothing that wouldn't keep Abigail from hating these people
and being completely destroyed by Frank and Lilith. Unless you live in that great of a delusion.

And the author doesn't have to directly see this. Some of you might be on Discord or on Patreon and
agree with this and pass it on.

So please stop replying to people like this. Not just the poster but all of you that do this.

I want this story to continue and succeed. I love it. Replies like this are counter productive and pointless.

 

[Cartageno]

You know. This is all stupid and pointless. I mean why? Seriously?
No shit it's not my story, but I'm the one liking and reading and committing to it like everyone else.
I get so tired of this lame argument. "It's not your story" blah blah blah

I said it clearly that I blame Patreon. But the platform and the whale tossing money to derail the story
for their own entertainment. And it gets on my nerves when people are like "if you aren't paying and
one of the Patridiots go fuck yourself. No one cares what you think"

Where do you think all the downloads come from the most? Here on this site or on Patreon/Scribestar?
You want the monies you better get head out of ass and go to the actual people downloading your shit.
You want to rake in money ignore the whales and give the people actually supporting your story a reason
to give you money. I would easily drop $20 a month to help this story if I wasn't watching it go to shit.
But I'm not going to in it's current state.

And this "We don't know" crap.

So Abby is suddenly dumb as fuck right?

She's in love with Frank. Has SAID how she fells about this.
She threated Lilith when she got violent with Frank and uses sex as a weapon
to keep her on a leash. She's not doing it for kicks or love. She's doing it for control.
And she has SAID her relationship with Lilith IS a tool she uses to control her behavior.
Lilith takes more pleasure from Abby than Abby gets from Lilith.

And I know, as a girl, with a Dad, personally, I don't like people I know hooking up with him.
I get angry even at the though of it. That's how real girls are. As a guy do you get hard thinking
of buddies fucking your mom? You sister? Or are you a bit protective and territorial?
Maybe your a beta I dunno.

Girls are territorial by nature. VERY.

So yeah, I do know. There is nothing that wouldn't keep Abigail from hating these people
and being completely destroyed by Frank and Lilith. Unless you live in that great of a delusion.

And the author doesn't have to directly see this. Some of you might be on Discord or on Patreon and
agree with this and pass it on.

So please stop replying to people like this. Not just the poster but all of you that do this.

I want this story to continue and succeed. I love it. Replies like this are counter productive and pointless.

I am sorry, but that is a very simplified view of how that works. "I would like to pay for something that suits my taste" - generally believable but unproven. And risking the whales for the possibility that enough of the many now-still-pirates come out of the woodwork and suddenly start sprouting money is a bit of a gamble when you have no useful data, except for some people complaining in a forum - which will always happen, no matter what. And - if the option is available - the "majority of downloads" will always be pirating, there have been experiments by (non adult) companies with "pay how much you want", and even with a theoretical $0.01 threshold for regular pay, the majority of the game was still pirated. And pirates just simply do not count when you want to make money out of it.

And that is assuming that even the majority of people, or enough to offset the "whales", agree with a change.

I dislike patreon polls deciding the direction of the story (beyond "shall Ginny wear a green dress or a blue dress to prom, and have her hair open or braided?") as well because in my opinion they tend to lead the game into a direction I do not like. However, the argument still holds true, if you want to have a voice that matters, in this case you need to put your money where your mouth is. Because nobody is changing that for potentially getting other customers - even if financially viable and you know that it also would include building a new customer base almost from scratch.

 

[Befole]

I'm currently at the point where I have to decide between the cabin (who is Hedi, by the way?) and the beach resort, could anyone help and give me an estimate as to how far back I have to go for the rewrite, or if I haven't reached that point yet?
Because it says to use a save before 1.23, but I only started playing the game when it was already at 1.24, and Lilith staying over wasn't a singular event, nor do I know what day of the week is when ingame?

 

[Maviarab]

I'm currently at the point where I have to decide between the cabin (who is Hedi, by the way?) and the beach resort, could anyone help and give me an estimate as to how far back I have to go for the rewrite, or if I haven't reached that point yet?
Because it says to use a save before 1.23, but I only started playing the game when it was already at 1.24, and Lilith staying over wasn't a singular event, nor do I know what day of the week is when ingame?

You haven't reached the rewrite yet.

 

[Befole]

You haven't reached the rewrite yet.

Thank you.

 

[Elduriel]

who is Hedi, by the way?

she is the hot assistant (receptionist?) lady at the law firm, she had a total of that one scene so far

 

[c3p0]

So please stop replying to people like this. Not just the poster but all of you that do this.

In one word: No.

Are you entitled to
have your opinion:
Yes, same as everyone
else and so am I.
If you post something
in a public space, like
here, then be prepared
that someone answer
you, with their opinion
and that might be
opossed to your own.

 

[jish55]

Basically MC every time one of the girls wants to fuck him

 

[Maviarab]

Basically MC every time one of the girls wants to fuck him

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Yaaaawwwnnsss...

 

[Elduriel]

Basically MC every time one of the girls wants to fuck him

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yeah, meme, funny. Not true for quite a while now, but whatever floats your boat.

 

[Deleted member 7180813]

In one word: No.

Are you entitled to
have your opinion:
Yes, same as everyone
else and so am I.
If you post something
in a public space, like
here, then be prepared
that someone answer
you, with their opinion
and that might be
opossed to your own.

You used more than one word. Moving on.

 

[cxx]

Basically MC every time one of the girls wants to fuck him

and you couldn't be more wrong. conclusion: wrong game.

 

[Unbreakable Patches]

I like the changes revert back to the things how the story are supposed to be, back on track, an author's story intended.

it's all about building intimacy, plots and etc. (can't find other suitable words) maybe a grand design? (Only a Master Mind can Create such a thing) A suitable ending not some poor written that been rushed forcing to sex like any other games

aren't whalers satiated to that yet? I mean alot of games are like that out there common and it's bland, no taste and it's sadden me, wasted their money to turn a masterpiece to a junk, and because of that certain story has been drastically changed, it's like the characters are somehow different and the story became meaningless why can't they see that?

I still wish at the end, all the girls are in loved with MC, because of all things what frank did to the girls like a father like how first story started hope they still remember that and won't stray to far for a sex, patience is virtue men, franks loved and care for his daughters ends up their Daughters including Meiko intimates for franks (which is weird especially the model are being a father like figure but my kind of kinks) beths and nessa i forgot which is which are only sexual benefits no love strings and NTR but still get franks kid with consent, anyhow it's all tied at the hands of the author, and not me.

 

[Unbreakable Patches]

In regards to Update 1.24.1 and 1.24.1.1,
Single Again is one of my top 5 favorite stories and as I see it since the Mei update
it's becoming a massive clusterfuck dumpster fire. And I honestly blame bad faith Patreon
influencers for it. I'm not a guy. I'm not interested in collecting digital girls. I'm interested
in the core story. And the core story is being fucked. Abigail is the main character in this
story. Sure the protagonist and perspective is from Frank, but Abigail is the main focus of
this whole series. Mei killed that. Since that update all focus has been on her and forcing this
stupid harem cult that I don't believe Becca intended. Her plan was centered on building
a her twisted family around Abigail. That's why she made Frank a list of actions to follow in
a set order. Starting with Lilith. Because winning Lilith was getting rid of the one major
obstacle to getting to Abigail.

No matter what Frank said, Abigail has always been Becca's focus. Until the Mei update.

I like Mei. Being a Japanese girl, I fucking hate this constant yellow fever tokenism these
male protag stories always devolve in to. But I like Mei. She needs to be a side character.
All the infrastructure was in place for that. Make the right choices and you open her path.
Just like Beth. Just like Maddison. And this secret cult harem is stupid. And causes so damn
many problems. Problems fappers obviously don't care about but it's killed the story.

Why?

Abigail is being lied to by everyone! Her father. Her step sisters. Lilith. EVERYONE.
Every single thing that's happened since the Mei update has been nothing but an atomic
level fuck you to Abigail. And to make matters worse she's constantly being beaten over
the head for having relations with Lilith. She has said a million times now that she is not
gay. That she does not love Lilith. She loves Frank. ONLY. Lilith is just a side piece to her.
A fling. But noooooooo. Every damn update Frank has to ignore her and force some stupid
ignorant lesbian only path on her that even the author is becoming schizophrenic about.
You can't have it both ways. She is not gay. Lilith is not who she wants to be with. So STOP
PUSHING THAT. Up until now every side story, internal side story, fairy story, Becca story
have all focused on Abigail being the Queen of the household. Stop writing her out of her own
story and series. You don't even get Abigail/Lilith scenes. Their shit happens off screen.
You never see it. And don't tell me about an Abigail side story. It needs to be the MAIN story.

It's hypocritical to an extreme. Frank can do everyone else in this story but lie to, betray and
backstab the one person utterly devoted to him. And what? You think when she finds all this out
she's going to be okay with it? She's gonna hate Frank, Loathe Lilith and Becca and probably
knock Mei out. But let me guess. Mei is secret ninja too. He spent a weekend in a hotel with
Lilith and they both lied to and betrayed Abigail. There is no coming back from that. No plot
contrivance that can make Abigail forgive this crap. She learns of this harem and any real
person would go fucking ballistic. I would. And I have such and open mind I read stories
about fucking my Daddy. I would kill these people.

So if the author reads these, please please please listen to what I've said.
I want my beloved story about Abigail and Frank back. With Lilith and Becca.
And all these other people options and not forced fuck partners. And stop making
Frank fucking stupid. He doesn't want to lose his daughter while doing everything he can
to lose his daughter. Lilith is doing everything she can to get shanked by Abigail.
You need to put the brakes on, look at this mess and iron it out. Get it back on track
and on it's rails cos it's off them. Any more Updates like this and there is no more Abigail
story. You set the course. We all know where Abby stands on all this. You know full well
you fucked the shark and it's gonna bite you, hard.

Every girl are special to franks including Meiko's and his other step Daughters not just Abigail, they all atleast have a fair and equal story no favoritism, can't have a skip love or straight sex for franks for no reason. "Cause of a feeling" that's obviously a bad writing.

besides the author have plans for all the girls, everyone are treated special including Abigail.