VN Ren'Py Single Again [v1.24.2] [Clever name games]

[COOLMASTER]

this game started good, but since the two last update...
Many no sense in the storyboard, that's pitty with some story line kilométres..(need help of eminem ^^)
i am agree with some remarques that people done here,
like the pseudo prude attitude, the virgin lost on a dildo ?? WTF.
And a lot of the other little no sence, about the story, the feeling's dev's try to created and the "jet lag" or non application in the game of those paramètres...
I m not sure that dev that assume or know's where is go'in with story.....
Maybe, Some re-writing will be better.

 

[ar1122]

the raltions are just to complicated one is adopted and the other is the step sister of the adoptive and his wife died then he devorced this is just too uncoordinated.

 

[Spfjolietjake]

Pretty simple to me
Mc marries an already pregnant woman. She passes. He then marries a woman with 2 daughters, they divorce.

He is just a good man that sees them all still as his daughters even though they are not of his blood or sperm.

 

[Naxos]

the raltions are just to complicated one is adopted and the other is the step sister of the adoptive and his wife died then he devorced this is just too uncoordinated.

If that's too complex for you, it's probably not the game for you.

Going to be about that slow burn to bedding and overcoming that hesitancy about doing his daughters.

On a side note.
I'm been saying "daughters" but actually going to stop with the "" because they are his daughters in every way that counts as far as the MC is concerned. The fact they are not blood related has nothing to do with it. As a 44 year old dude, I can 100% identify with them being his daughters.

 

[ontach]

the raltions are just to complicated one is adopted and the other is the step sister of the adoptive and his wife died then he devorced this is just too uncoordinated.

You should play Maou-Sama. Go back and forth in time and fuck your grandmother, mother, daughter, granddaughter ... that will teach you to crib about strange relations.

 

[obsessionau]

A bit brutal in your words there

The guy's single and has been for quite a while, never gets laid, then a gorgeous 20 years old something offers him a quickie, with no strings or consequences.
You REALLY think many men would turn that offer down? Really? Hell, a large chunk of married men would take the offer as it is
Granted the timing's not great, but It did not shock me more than that, I've seen good men doing way worse than that when thinking with their dick

Given the scenario presented, No, it just felt unnatural. For me atleast, it made the night a bit of a farce and I just feel it could have been done better.

If I had organised a "special night" for myself and someone else special, and they didn't show interest in the activities and invited other people along... Personally I would be quite concerned. But that's just me.

As others have said yes he has been very sexually frustrated these past few days with thoughts of his daughters... YES!! There is a great reason right there that *could have been used* to explain why he wanted Mei to join them on their special date night and why he spent time away from the girls.

With the girls all dolled up and looking hot, Frank is presented with some fan-service so he deliberately avoids the girls to cool off a bit and not wanting to spoil things with Lilith. Darla comes to chat and he decides to use her to deal with his "sexual frustration" so that he can then spend guilt-free time with his daughters. Something like that to me would have fitted better.

Instead it was. Invites Mei to the date night his daughters had specially arranged, sits at table alone during dad-daughter night while they have fun, then out of the blue a gorgeous 20 years old something offers him a quickie, with no strings or consequences. - That just all felt disjointed for me.

 

[ontach]

I'm been saying "daughters" but actually going to stop with the "" because they are his daughters in every way that counts as far as the MC is concerned. The fact they are not blood related has nothing to do with it. As a 44 year old dude, I can 100% identify with them being his daughters.

THIS. Exactly. If this weren't true, no one would ever consider adopting a kid. He helped raise these girls, one from infancy and two from preteen age. Even for the ex's daughters, he's been a father figure to them for over a decade. That mindset doesn't change overnight.

 

[ar1122]

nah i just dont like this. bye bye.

 

[Maviarab]

nah i just dont like this. bye bye.

You're not an airline...no need to annouce your departure.

 

[ontach]

Given the scenario presented, No, it just felt unnatural. For me atleast, it made the night a bit of a farce and I just feel it could have been done better.

If I had organised a "special night" for myself and someone else special, and they didn't show interest in the activities and invited other people along... Personally I would be quite concerned. But that's just me.

As others have said yes he has been very sexually frustrated these past few days with thoughts of his daughters... YES!! There is a great reason right there that *could have been used* to explain why he wanted Mei to join them on their special date night and why he spent time away from the girls.

With the girls all dolled up and looking hot, Frank is presented with some fan-service so he deliberately avoids the girls to cool off a bit and not wanting to spoil things with Lilith. Darla comes to chat and he decides to use her to deal with his "sexual frustration" so that he can then spend guilt-free time with his daughters. Something like that to me would have fitted better.

Instead it was. Invites Mei to the date night his daughters had specially arranged, sits at table alone during dad-daughter night while they have fun, then out of the blue a gorgeous 20 years old something offers him a quickie, with no strings or consequences. - That just all felt disjointed for me.

I agree completely. That date night his daughters had set up should have been special and precious. He loves them and thinks of them as his kids, but inexplicably does something very insensitive and hurtful. He brings Mei along as a +1 (she's a complete stranger to the other two), and then he bails on all three to go boink some stranger. Not done.
Mei should have been introduced to the group on a completely different occasion.
Darla should have been a quickie after he'd had a fight with his daughters and gone off somewhere to cool down.

 

[Spfjolietjake]

Wow I'm thankful some of you aint the ones writing this vn. Sounds like you want it to be another incest clone.

The night out dancing was great as is. Mei got introduced to everyone and got out and even a little less shy because of it. Some of you act like it was an anniversary or something. No it was just the weekly "date night"

 

[Pudthumper]

Okay, I'm hooked. I wish I wasn't broke because waiting for the next public release of this VN crack is going to be like going cold turkey. I loves me a good story sprinkled with porny goodness. Well done sir!

 

[albundi]

i've got a bug i can not ask for a hug with lilith, any fix ?

 

[Naxos]

Wow I'm thankful some of you aint the ones writing this vn. Sounds like you want it to be another incest clone.

The night out dancing was great as is. Mei got introduced to everyone and got out and even a little less shy because of it. Some of you act like it was an anniversary or something. No it was just the weekly "date night"

True, to be as special as some are making it out to be, it should have been Abby and him only. Abby already introduced the 3rd wheel with Lilly...

I really did like how Lilly almost called him dad a couple times thought. I also suspect and hope her reaction to the photo is going to be a lot better than he expects.

 

[Salami Pasta]

I'm getting the following error when the MC tries to hug Lilly
```
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "game/script 0.08.rpy", line 658, in script
jump start111h1
ScriptError: could not find label 'start111h1'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "game/script 0.08.rpy", line 658, in script
jump start111h1
File "D:\STU\S\SingleAgain-0.08-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1697, in execute
rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)
File "D:\STU\S\SingleAgain-0.08-pc\renpy\script.py", line 898, in lookup
raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'start111h1'.

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.3.5.606
0.08
Sat Sep 19 21:55:05 2020
```

i've got a bug i can not ask for a hug with lilith, any fix ?

There's a typo in file 'game/script 0.08.rpy' line 661.
Change from:

label satrt111h1:

To:

label start111h1:

File attached, if you're REALLY lazy to edit.

 

[Spfjolietjake]

True, to be as special as some are making it out to be, it should have been Abby and him only. Abby already introduced the 3rd wheel with Lilly...

I really did like how Lilly almost called him dad a couple times thought. I also suspect and hope her reaction to the photo is going to be a lot better than he expects.

Oh man I totally forgot she hasn't seen it yet. good times, I hope you are right

 

[Glooskabe]

I really did like how Lilly almost called him dad a couple times thought. I also suspect and hope her reaction to the photo is going to be a lot better than he expects.

And she's happy and smiling around him most of the time now too! That wall is crumbling fast!

 

[MOAR Cowbell]

is there a patch to make them his real daughters?

No that would require a complete story rewrite.

 

[COOLMASTER]

the raltions are just to complicated one is adopted and the other is the step sister of the adoptive and his wife died then he devorced this is just too uncoordinated.

it s not a complicated story
but this uncoordinated IS the probleme..And this problem on everything else and makes this story and the felt has the reading totally wonky... And i don't talk about the little fairy.....guilty / no guilty...An ersatz also..

it s why i say a re writing of all this or a second letcure can help really...and reworks some renders also...them...

 

[lapau]

How long is this update from the previous version? If it's short, I'll wait for the next one or after