I really wanna like this, I really do.
I like the characters, I enjoy the interactions. But man theres just so many glaring issues with this that drive me nuts.
I'm not finished the story yet but I think I'm far enough through thousands of dialogues that I can finally weigh in a bit and give a really fair critique. JK I was literally like one 10,000 word essay away from the end so I did finish this update.
Abby being the starter. Is this gonna happen or isnt it? I've been at this VN for several hours at times even just spam clicking the same boring, over-sold dialogue possible where the characters just repeat the exact events that just happened or go through this long winded conversation of saying essentially the same thing 18 different ways. If Abby is gonna happen with the "MC" why do we need the constant
I mean its like at the point of writing where I'm beyond everyone being part of the group and together, united, yadayada. I'm just so tired of hearing about all these escapades, the constant pushover of a mc just letting stuff happen and even encouraging it in ways while its like bro, its your daughter and your still in the mindset mostly, why do you need to be so involved in this aspect of her life lol. It's like borderline NTR in a way.
Then we go onto Lily who had serious character progression but at times she just feels hollow and like an empty shell devoid of personality. Your recommended to play a side story of hers, which this time is literally NTRing yourself lol. You get to learn all Lily's dirty deeds and be a part of everyone using her like a fleshlight! Yeah nah, wasn't for me, stayed far away from that, but again just really really weird, Single Again started wholesome, but got progressively more depraved while still trying to retain this weird wholesome angle that just gets worse and worse as time goes on.
Becca, she's probably the only okay character, but again MC lacks a backbone in almost every situation, but for whatever reason pushes harder back on Becca than any other character which confuses me the most. Idk its just strange, I cant really say much on it. She's the oldest and the one that probably listens the most, and is the most respectful of the bunch outside her banter with Lily but the MC only takes a more dominant figure with her than anyone else when it comes to "meddling and breaking rules" meanwhile is just completely cool with everyone else doing w/e they want for the most part.
Rest of the cast I dont have much to say they're just kinda there and doing their thing as far as I'm aware, not really doing anything that is worthwhile of mentioning other than the dialogue with Meiko being extremely drawn out and borderline snoozefest because MC just repeats himself 35 times every single conversation they have and beats a dead horse harder than a loose hooker on a free friday night special. Seriously its painful at times lol.
I'm not really trying to slam the creator in any way, dont get me wrong but man this has to be one of the wordiest stories I ever played that just doesnt say or do anything as a whole lol, IDK if its just for the purpose of filler or what. The character models are great, the animations are nice, but the writing is just so painful and I mean that respectfully, just too much detail and description and beating home points that just dont need to be, its like artificial time waste at this point.
At this point I'm just like "is Abby ever gonna be part of this? Is she ever gonna break away from what she's doing? Can we stop pseudo-cucking the MC with his daughter?" It's just weird to me honestly lol. Idk wasnt a big fan. Theres alot of work into this i respect it, giving it a 3 (would be 2.5 if i could really) because at the end of the day everythign that matters is average, the only good stuff is the unique models and the animations at best.