Ren'Py Single Mother [v0.16 BugFix] [Story Teller]

[albersotysonfajandez]

I would like this game to be like Amy Ecstasy/Eva Ecstasy so you don't miss any scenes. That way you can choose which character to advance the story with in the menu.

 

[rajesh000]

I hope that before Owen or Yama, you focus on others like Derek, because his scenes were good, but... honestly, it would have been better to explore his "path" at school. Besides, Owen and Yama already have too many scenes.

yeah you are right. But i like it that you have a path for John and Derek too

 

[Grev7]

well it ended in the first 'path' owen still have more storyline in the future

In the past I already wrote that I love this game. Your new one doesn't catch me as much (yet).
If you wanted/could, you could expand so much more on this game storywise.

Right know we have very distinct intelligence/corruption routes. Once you are on the corruption route, the protagonist becomes a submissive bitch without any significant other decisions to make. But corruption can also lead to a corrupt dominant person. And this dom/sub behaviour can chance depending on the other person.

In the Owen storyline, intelligence path makes you dominant, but not really sexually involved with owen, although a dominant personality would be possible in both paths.

In Yama's storyline intelligence path makes you dominant about your approach, but it is not dominant in a sexual way. And the corruption path makes you a submissive person.

I am not trying to tell you how to make your game. I just wanted to share my views, because I appreciate your work so much.