Ren'Py Sissified Husband of Evelyn [v0.4b] [NoEducation792]

[qwertyu7599]

Please let me know what and how I can improve. Im still very much learning within the 3 months ive been working on this.

He literally wrote what's wrong. Sexual scenes need 3d renders and animation, not just static images going up and down. Story is good but right now, it's all text, it has nothing visually compelling.

 

[NoEducation792]

He literally wrote what's wrong. Sexual scenes need 3d renders and animation, not just static images going up and down. Story is good but right now, it's all text, it has nothing visually compelling.

... working with artist to have those drawn/made in 2D.

Not 3d though but maybe a few years from now, making a 3D version of the game.
... Unless I can find a 3d artist to work with in rev share mode

 

[Sorreah]

Please let me know what and how I can improve. Im still very much learning within the 3 months ive been working on this.

I tried your game, some things;

1) This needs the gay tag as by chapter 2 you can already work and do stuff in a glory hole. I don't know what specifically because I'm trying to skip out on the M/M content, but between the hugs/kisses at work for men and the glory hole, I'm pretty sure it applies.

2) its very easy to sequence break things. I think for you the order you do things is fairly obvious, but for me, I wound up checking on evelyn who hints and teases about all the stuff she does with John...before even going on the trip with him. There was other instances too, most of them have to do around her trip and when she leaves and comes back.

3) I am assuming the "Fear" stat is to represent how much francis fears he's being cheated on, but I hit the part where she introduces you to the idea of cuckolding with Anna. So now it becomes unclear to me if fear is going to affect her and john or just her messing around in general.

4) Curious stat is actually confusing. It took me awhile to figure out that has to do with the sissification, but its quite broad. It seems to affect crossdressing, being with guys, willingness to cheat, working in feminine conditions, being with guys, etc. It feels like those catergories can be/should be more nuanced if you're trying to hit players preferences (as denoted when you mention cuckolding becomes "disliked" if you refuse ann. But this begs the question: Will francis be able to say he likes/enjoys when its from another woman or will that include John and other guys?)

This is just a side note I guess on "flavor" of sissification, but I kinda thought there would be options to become a housekeeper/maid (really like the idea of your wife turning you into a personal maid at home and renting you out to clean others), a secretary (for the lawyer?), things like that; So far the only jobs I found are for waiter and masseuse. This raises questions I guess about my own personal preferences (I'm just asking, this isn't a suggestion); Both those jobs have interactions with men, via the gloryhole or progressively "earning tips" from the male clients. Is there going to be an option to stick with female clients/futa instead of men (I'll be honest, I don't care if there is a dick or not, I just have to find who its attached to is pretty, and generally its not men, but it does make traps fair to me)? If gay route or M/M content can be avoided, will there be a chance to swap Evelyn away from John for Anna?

There is other things I guess, but this is already a lot and feels intrusive to your writing/style.

edit: one more note since coding is new to you, if you have events that trigger by thresholds of points the player has accumulated in fear/curious/hidden variables, its worth noting its extremely easy to over farm the points, as I suspect that might be what lead to the sequence breaks.

 

[dav121]

How do you disable that stupid thing that won't let you load an edited save?

 

[NoEducation792]

1. I always enjoy player comments. I'm not sure about the gay tag but I will ask the patreon if they think I should add that knowng that francie is ongoing such transition

2. Sequence break - let me consider this. Is it more like the timeline shifts? Does it break the game? or its narrative - like 2 storylines/plotpoints happening together?

3. Fear to the game is fear of change. I will see if there is a better word for it. There will be events/actions/dialogue that will use fear

4. Curious is inverse of fear. Basically willingness to try new things. There will be events/actions/dialogue that will use it as well. Cuckold is a special and seperate preference as requested by some feedback here. Option to skip.

5. Maid jobs are found in later chapters of the game as well as secretary. Other jobs you can get are maid cafe, entertainment host. More gigs at later chapters.

6. Fear and Curious are state of mind so it will be actually okey to farm these. Supposedly the stat that are not farmable are the feminity as you are limited per chapter.

7. I really appreciate your comments, please feel free to also reach out to me directly. I did find your M/M comment interesting as I could try to make a version of the game later on where almost all characters (that are supposedly male) are futa

I tried your game, some things;

1) This needs the gay tag as by chapter 2 you can already work and do stuff in a glory hole. I don't know what specifically because I'm trying to skip out on the M/M content, but between the hugs/kisses at work for men and the glory hole, I'm pretty sure it applies.

2) its very easy to sequence break things. I think for you the order you do things is fairly obvious, but for me, I wound up checking on evelyn who hints and teases about all the stuff she does with John...before even going on the trip with him. There was other instances too, most of them have to do around her trip and when she leaves and comes back.

3) I am assuming the "Fear" stat is to represent how much francis fears he's being cheated on, but I hit the part where she introduces you to the idea of cuckolding with Anna. So now it becomes unclear to me if fear is going to affect her and john or just her messing around in general.

4) Curious stat is actually confusing. It took me awhile to figure out that has to do with the sissification, but its quite broad. It seems to affect crossdressing, being with guys, willingness to cheat, working in feminine conditions, being with guys, etc. It feels like those catergories can be/should be more nuanced if you're trying to hit players preferences (as denoted when you mention cuckolding becomes "disliked" if you refuse ann. But this begs the question: Will francis be able to say he likes/enjoys when its from another woman or will that include John and other guys?)

This is just a side note I guess on "flavor" of sissification, but I kinda thought there would be options to become a housekeeper/maid (really like the idea of your wife turning you into a personal maid at home and renting you out to clean others), a secretary (for the lawyer?), things like that; So far the only jobs I found are for waiter and masseuse. This raises questions I guess about my own personal preferences (I'm just asking, this isn't a suggestion); Both those jobs have interactions with men, via the gloryhole or progressively "earning tips" from the male clients. Is there going to be an option to stick with female clients/futa instead of men (I'll be honest, I don't care if there is a dick or not, I just have to find who its attached to is pretty, and generally its not men, but it does make traps fair to me)? If gay route or M/M content can be avoided, will there be a chance to swap Evelyn away from John for Anna?

There is other things I guess, but this is already a lot and feels intrusive to your writing/style.

edit: one more note since coding is new to you, if you have events that trigger by thresholds of points the player has accumulated in fear/curious/hidden variables, its worth noting its extremely easy to over farm the points, as I suspect that might be what lead to the sequence breaks.

 

[NoEducation792]

How do you disable that stupid thing that won't let you load an edited save?

I dont know... Im using RenPY if that helps... Otherwise let me know if I should try to make a cheat module? and what kind of edits should be allowed

 

[Sorreah]

1. I always enjoy player comments. I'm not sure about the gay tag but I will ask the patreon if they think I should add that knowng that francie is ongoing such transition

2. Sequence break - let me consider this. Is it more like the timeline shifts? Does it break the game? or its narrative - like 2 storylines/plotpoints happening together?

3. Fear to the game is fear of change. I will see if there is a better word for it. There will be events/actions/dialogue that will use fear

4. Curious is inverse of fear. Basically willingness to try new things. There will be events/actions/dialogue that will use it as well. Cuckold is a special and seperate preference as requested by some feedback here. Option to skip.

5. Maid jobs are found in later chapters of the game as well as secretary. Other jobs you can get are maid cafe, entertainment host. More gigs at later chapters.

6. Fear and Curious are state of mind so it will be actually okey to farm these. Supposedly the stat that are not farmable are the feminity as you are limited per chapter.

7. I really appreciate your comments, please feel free to also reach out to me directly. I did find your M/M comment interesting as I could try to make a version of the game later on where almost all characters (that are supposedly male) are futa

1) As far as counting if its gay with transitioning, I guess it wouldn't count, except he's not particularly transitioning yet; He's barely started crossdressing.

2) I meant logic/narrative; Nothing breaks in the game exactly, but it doesn't make logical sense to be discussing how she "Thinks the job is very hard from behind, but he's great at supporting me" (something like this, the exact wording/lines escape me), but she hasn't even been on the trip yet. There are other instances where going to the office will reference the trip before she's left for it. (To clarify, that doesn't demonstrate what I mean cus it can be taken she's already cheating on francis, but I had seen several instances where things were said out of order/action)

Okay, so I stopped a bit too early for job options; I was just curious/happy to know if they were options. Although I was thinking more of an actual housekeeper/maid than just a cafe, but it works!

The me avoiding M/M thing is a personal thing, I wouldn't recommend changing just for one random person. I play sissification games because they generally involve good femdom until you start taking it from every chad/bear like guys that throw in your face how manly they are. I like pretty things and cute things if that makes sense. Futa fall into that, because generally they are portrayed/made very pretty.

 

[Sorreah]

I dont know... Im using RenPY if that helps... Otherwise let me know if I should try to make a cheat module? and what kind of edits should be allowed

Also dav121 that's not the dev's fault, that's a Ren'Py thing and has been for quite awhile I might add; I forgot where it is since I haven't felt the need to edit a ren'py game in a long time, but you also need to download a file to place into the game that bypasses the check; I'm pretty sure you can find the file on this site or google it, but you need to add it to...either the save directory or the game folder itself, I can't remember which.

I know that's not helpful, but I don't remember it off the top of my head, just that its related to a Ren'Py update from like a year ago or so.

edit: I think this is where you repack, just follow the instructions:

You must be registered to see the links

 

[NoEducation792]

1) As far as counting if its gay with transitioning, I guess it wouldn't count, except he's not particularly transitioning yet; He's barely started crossdressing.

2) I meant logic/narrative; Nothing breaks in the game exactly, but it doesn't make logical sense to be discussing how she "Thinks the job is very hard from behind, but he's great at supporting me" (something like this, the exact wording/lines escape me), but she hasn't even been on the trip yet. There are other instances where going to the office will reference the trip before she's left for it. (To clarify, that doesn't demonstrate what I mean cus it can be taken she's already cheating on francis, but I had seen several instances where things were said out of order/action)

Okay, so I stopped a bit too early for job options; I was just curious/happy to know if they were options. Although I was thinking more of an actual housekeeper/maid than just a cafe, but it works!

The me avoiding M/M thing is a personal thing, I wouldn't recommend changing just for one random person. I play sissification games because they generally involve good femdom until you start taking it from every chad/bear like guys that throw in your face how manly they are. I like pretty things and cute things if that makes sense. Futa fall into that, because generally they are portrayed/made very pretty.

1. Noted. Will ask the community consensus.

2. Housekeep job aside from maid cafe will be available. You can clean your own house, others houses even the hotel later on.

3. I will to find these story switches... if you have the sequence that breaks, let me know. Example, ev, ev, office, ev. Something like that...

4. Will improve the game!

 

[dav121]

Also dav121 that's not the dev's fault, that's a Ren'Py thing and has been for quite awhile I might add; I forgot where it is since I haven't felt the need to edit a ren'py game in a long time, but you also need to download a file to place into the game that bypasses the check; I'm pretty sure you can find the file on this site or google it, but you need to add it to...either the save directory or the game folder itself, I can't remember which.

I know that's not helpful, but I don't remember it off the top of my head, just that its related to a Ren'Py update from like a year ago or so.

edit: I think this is where you repack, just follow the instructions:

You must be registered to see the links

Wasn't blaming the Dev, just wanted to know if anyone knew how to disable it as even if you click on the button that says you trust the source of the save file - it still won't load
It's one line that you got to change from false to true or something.

 

[dav121]

I dont know... Im using RenPY if that helps... Otherwise let me know if I should try to make a cheat module? and what kind of edits should be allowed

Honestly, need some better feedback from the game - how many times does the MC need to repeatedly do an action before there's progression? Is it 20 lessons for the Job guy? Is it 40?. How many visits to the therapist to improve a stat?

 

[flexinp]

Welp, my game is stuck on chapter 8. I like the game, but there is no way i'm going through the tedium of mashing skip for 2 hours straight to get back to where I was.

I'm at 10k money, 10 feminity and 29 courage and the game will not progress. Fantastic