It's time for another episode of: "MIdAS BITCHES ABOUT GRAMMAR!"
Hold your applause please.
Right, so, Sasha says: "So What? That doesn't mean you can love other women too", it should be: "So What? That doesn't mean you can't love other women too"
She also says: "The important part is that you're both on the same page. So you should be open to her" which reads kinda awkwardly, "Open with her" or "Honest with her" both read better in my opinion.
Rachel calls Kira Ana and James' Neice, Kira says she's their Cousin, then calls James a Nephew which would make her his Aunt, Now I know Incest happens in games like this, but the trifecta like that would make her family tree a straight line.
Rachel says: "How long is he asleep?", it should be "How long has he been asleep?"
She also says: "If he such a heavy sleeper, and we stay under the besheets..." which should be "If he's such a heavy sleeper, and we stay under the besheets..."
Then she says: "I think, maybe, we don't have that much time" which again, reads awkwardly, and should probably be something like "I don't think we have much time" or "I'm not sure we have that much time"
Also, the game says you keep the vibrator remote out of the package, but then it's in the package when Bella unwraps it, she puts it on the table, and you take it again, she also visibly has it in her hand, which just feels awkward, it's either in the box or it isn't.
Also, in some of the coffee shop renders, Bella has her shoes on, even though her tights are off, now she could put them back on after removing them, but it just doesn't feel natural.
I enjoyed the update though, Bella in work uniform is a good thing.