Nobelium

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I find Bella's submissive path a little hard to write sometimes and I don't think I could stomach introducing another one. In Liza's case (as unbelievably naive as she is) it would be a very uneven power dynamic and one I wouldn't be comfortable with.
You don't have to go full submissive. How about this?
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I find Bella's submissive path a little hard to write sometimes and I don't think I could stomach introducing another one. In Liza's case (as unbelievably naive as she is) it would be a very uneven power dynamic and one I wouldn't be comfortable with.
Seriously? In that case, bravo! You had me fooled. From the way it (and the stuff at Discreet) is written, I'd figured it was a strong interest of yours. Excellent work.
 

Perverteer

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Yeah that was my point about it being her suggestion. It would be a little bedroom kinkiness but with the understanding thats all it is, just bedroom stuff.
Yeah, I can see that work. I'll think about it!

Is there a way to stay with Adriana at the end of the Discreet path? Do you need to be on Discreet only route?
You can only have sex with Adriana during your last visit at Discreet whether you're on the Discreet-only or Discreet and Mom-romance path.

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Will there be options to indicate MC cares for Bella within the d/s path? I think when I first embarked upon it I didn't realize it was going to be mutually exclusive, though I can understand the argument for making it so.
As @Nobelium already mentioned, Bella can come to respect you on the submissive route. The MC will act as a protector of Bella in future updates, that way he'll be able to show her he genuinely cares for her, despite the power dynamic in their relationship.

You don't have to go full submissive. How about this?
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Interesting idea, but I'm not keen on adding another whole branch, but maybe I could introduce it as part of a roleplaying scene (or multiple scenes) on the harem path. But as Liza is so sexually naieve I think I have a hard time making it work narratively.

Seriously? In that case, bravo! You had me fooled. From the way it (and the stuff at Discreet) is written, I'd figured it was a strong interest of yours. Excellent work.
Well, it's not to say I don't like writing dom/sub scenes, or watching porn in that genre. But in my mind Bella's submissive content skirts right along the edges of consent. Sometimes I just want to retreat in the happy world where every girl drinks gallons of cum from your cock willingly, instead of writing sexual interactions where there's always that hint of uneasiness.

On a more general note, I finally decided to do something with the domain name I've owned for a while. Public, uncensored releases and any news that isn't fit for Patreon can now or more specifically, on . Perhaps someone with more permissions than me could add the link to the OP, thanks!
 

Nobelium

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Interesting idea, but I'm not keen on adding another whole branch, but maybe I could introduce it as part of a roleplaying scene (or multiple scenes) on the harem path. But as Liza is so sexually naieve I think I have a hard time making it work narratively.
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Avaron1974

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I feel a bit sorry for Liza in my game, she's the only one not getting anything. She's adorable and all that jazz but she's the kind of person I like as a friend, not a lover.

I just don't have the patience for sexually naive people.

Nothing worse than being horny as hell, wanting your love to throw you down, tear of your panties and tongue fuck you to sexual oblivion .... only for that lover to have absolutely no clue and needing to give a running commentary on what you want which kills the mood and forces me to fake an orgasm so I can make it stop.

To be fair though, the only one i'd go for a relationship with here is Alina. She's submissive and knows what she wants and what she's doing .... being attractive helps.
 

TheBlueKnight

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First of all, can somebody tell me how far along the game is in production? The version doesn't give me any information and neither does patreon...
If you look at the change log it's currently up to day thirty one, but who knows what the last day will be. There's probably a fair bit of content already though if your going for all the girls, but I'm pretty much dedicated to just .

As for the problem Sisterly Lust is Ren'Py not RPGM like the two you mentioned, better ask in one of those threads (and you may not have any issue with this game).
 

Anthony2

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Yeah, I can see that work. I'll think about it!

You can only have sex with Adriana during your last visit at Discreet whether you're on the Discreet-only or Discreet and Mom-romance path.

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As @Nobelium already mentioned, Bella can come to respect you on the submissive route. The MC will act as a protector of Bella in future updates, that way he'll be able to show her he genuinely cares for her, despite the power dynamic in their relationship.

Interesting idea, but I'm not keen on adding another whole branch, but maybe I could introduce it as part of a roleplaying scene (or multiple scenes) on the harem path. But as Liza is so sexually naieve I think I have a hard time making it work narratively.

Well, it's not to say I don't like writing dom/sub scenes, or watching porn in that genre. But in my mind Bella's submissive content skirts right along the edges of consent. Sometimes I just want to retreat in the happy world where every girl drinks gallons of cum from your cock willingly, instead of writing sexual interactions where there's always that hint of uneasiness.

On a more general note, I finally decided to do something with the domain name I've owned for a while. Public, uncensored releases and any news that isn't fit for Patreon can now or more specifically, on . Perhaps someone with more permissions than me could add the link to the OP, thanks!
u are an amazing writer btw
 
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Right, I've done so as well. Basically I was asking if d/s route was going to track to dickishness, but it sounds like it won't! Thanks for replying, @Perverteer!
As @Nobelium already mentioned, Bella can come to respect you on the submissive route. The MC will act as a protector of Bella in future updates, that way he'll be able to show her he genuinely cares for her, despite the power dynamic in their relationship.
 
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Perverteer said:
Still a few more renders to go, but the story is pretty much done. So I'd say I'm on schedule for this month.
Day 34 will include an extra sex scene with Riley and the sex shop owner, who didn't have a name (but she's now called Lexi).
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