VN - Ren'Py - Sky Division [v0.14] [MariusAxe]

Good story. Could get better with some graphics, tho. Loved the flow of story and characters...... Hop to see more. The would building was good too.

This game might not be one of the most impressive VNs you will see, it clearly has it's problems, bugs and mistranslations are really common here. But, this is the most charming game I've ever played, despite the problems, this game has intoxicating charm. You can feel the passion and thought of the dev while playing it. It's something really rare to see recently.

I've played this game before, when it used hand-drawn art for the characters, and now, the game uses AI-art for everything, but even with the change, the game doesn't feel soulless at all, all of that because of the simple, but somewhat perfectly executed storytelling, the pacing, the scenario, everything comes together nicely.

Great story. Actual great path of being an Alpha but still caring. (Yes there are caring Alphas out there where you are rewarded nicely for your total submission and being a true harem gurl) Hoping there will be a final step of owning Dax as a pet

I Like the game and I am ready for the next update; I like when people try the hand at making games and seeing what sticks. Stick with it you got this.

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Very solid. The art is mildly amateurish, but that's what you are to expect when consuming amateur works. It is good regardless. The storytelling is very decent. The characterization is solid. It gets you to care, and paints a very bleak world to provide contrast and tension against. It also doesn't rush too hard, it is patient.

But, it also doesn't withold the lewd content, if that's what you're mostly after. All in all, one of the better works I've consumed.

Well written story. Reminded me of the movie "Enemy mine" with Dennis Quaid. Except the sex part then of course. Femboy stories are also somewhat rare on this site so that's a plus.

Great job to the creator!

Pretty amazing story to be honest, some new drawings of the characters and scenes could improve the experience a lot. That's all I can say about the bad things because everything else is good, this project has so much potential to be honest

Very good game, have been following its development since around 0.5 and the game has only gotten more and more compelling with each and every update. Good work man I hope to see this game get the reignition it deservers.

Do not be discouraged by the simple graphic of this VN. The story of survivorship is engaging and exciting!

A journey of castaway Romeo and Juliet with the theme of sci-fi and bloody war, an action romance story.

to my review

-quite fascinating story
-very rare sex scene
-politic and ideology
-myth and distopia
-kinda stelarris game but they exist?

to be honest, this very interesting game and i read all the story. i hope this continue the story "the rebellion again federation" i thought something miss
about lore here Federation and Empire but all it explain by player and

Game Version : V0.9

Great game by Marius, in terms of scenes there are very less, but the story is really good, it is not complicated but a simple one, but the way it's told is really good, Dax is really adorable in some scenes which makes it really satisfying to play. The last version ended in a real cliff hanger, hoping the story continues more and more scenes with the MC & Dax.

A solid Femboy game, not many are there, good luck bro with the future updates.

Surely a 11/10....Masta Piece

Defo one of the best VNs i've read, sexual or non-sexual, and perhaps even story of war. I used to stray away from gay furry porn but this is by far gay furry porn done in the most palletable manner.
At times a bit wordy; the speed didnt always match the energy, some longer sequences that wouldn't be bad with a trim but overall a beautiful story, brilliantly executed, and even in development the in progress ending has had me wanting the next part.

Gonna be real with you, the art is not AAA or even AA, probably somewhere around a 9-volt battery being used to power a wii remote but the remote is actually working better. These are not doctorate in art level characters; and regardless they're rather good. i dont mind the clipart lizard, and Dax's model, while crude, is still well-drawn and shows effort.

Man we need more femboy games because it should be a crime that there arent many because this is just fucking great.I had this on my radar for a while but when i finally played it i felt incredibly stupid for not playing it sooner.The whole enemies turned lovers thing is my weak point so this really pulled me in from the synopsis alone jesus this is a good VN.The art may not be the best for some people but i enjoy these types of art styles for the most part,yes it could be better but its still nice to look at.And i LOVE LOVE LOVE the freedom of choice I love femboy games and this hit the nail

Sky Division has been on my "to-do" list for a while and I finally got around to playing the story the last couple of days. There are hidden gems all over. I'm sure a lot of people passed over this because new dev, art is not "refined" (whatever the fuck that means), and "oh noes gays!".

Okay, yeah, it's gay. So if that's not your thing, this'll be a real quick game for you when Dax shoots you in the fucking head.

Let's get the "bad" part out of the way: graphics and visuals. So it's not AAA. It's not DAZ. It's not anything but hand-drawn art that's better than I can do. Props, man. I think there's some very minor things you can do in regard to sprites and transitions that would make the visual aspect of your game look a lot more polished, but the actual art itself...

The backgrounds are awesome. Love the setting. Daz is cute AF without being a supermodel. Yeah, it's all about tastes, but all graphic novels are about tastes. Enough about the visuals. Let's get to the really good aspects of Sky Division.

I'm not sure how much MariusAxe has put into the background. If he's got it all written down inside his head or out, or whether he's coming up with this in the spur of the moment, the story is running at a good pace -- the perfect pace for a VN like this. The story isn't forced or so unrealistic it forced me out of the headspace of the game.

Given the setting, the characters act in a rather believable way. Enough information about the history and setting is dripped out by MariusAxe's writing to keep my attention and, more importantly, keep me emotionally invested in the story and Dax.

If you're not a gatekeeping-visuals-pansy and can handle a little furry gay sex, this is an excellent choice to spend a couple hours with. It's one of those hidden gems. I can't wait to see what happens after Part 7.

despite being poorly drawn or animated this scenario is just out of this world this is exactly what you imagine when you are a femboy enjoyer
the background and story is humble and impressive at the same time i hope i see more like this in the future

This is a simple idea executed simply, and I mean that as a compliment. Funnily enough I've had fantasies with pretty much the exact same premise as this game-that being two enemy pilots shooting each other down over some unpopulated island somewhere and then falling for each other-but I sure as hell never made it into a game, so the creator gets all my props.

If you go in with reasonable expectations, I think you'll be pleasantly surprised.

The art is the only weakness this game has, and it's really not a glaring one. I absolutely love both Dax and the MC, and this game surprised me with the depth of its lore and story.

It's also really hot if you enjoy femboys, and has the surprising but welcome option of having the MC bottom.

Art might not be the best but its pretty smooth, maybe just adding a bit more details would be perfect.

The story is pretty good, i would love to have more type of scenes or angles.

Dax is great even if im not gay i love it, i will be waiting for the next update.

Great Job

The art might not be its strength, but oh boy THE WOLF BOI IS SO THICC AND CUTE.
Pretty hot writing for the down bad, if you like your men with big asses this is for you. Ah yeah an he's a furry too, why do you care?

Review as of 0.5.0
-Femboy with a fat ass and thick thighs
-Characters and story feel natural, no overreliance on tropes
-Romance isn't rushed
-The game handles big topics, namely the war between the humans and the furry race, with a surprising amount of maturity. Neither side is correct and there are no easy answers. Doesn't feel preachy, which is a hurdle that not every writer makes it over.
-You can choose to have the femboy be the top (not for everyone, but a surprising addition that most devs would have left out, and a more than welcome one as far as I'm concerned)

-Art is a bit rough. Far from the worst I've ever seen, but definitely a lot of room for improvement. Honestly it isn't that much of a negative for the game, Dax's appearance and the quality of the story go a long way towards smoothing this over for me.
-One section of dialogue wasn't translated into English (wasn't exactly game breaking since it was just one line, but still.)

Definitely enjoyed this one WAY more than I thought I would, and I'll be looking forward to future updates.