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It's under genres in the disclaimer but not in the tags so anyone browsing in latest updates or searching tags won't find itSo "slave" tag is missing too.
that's kind of annoying
It's under genres in the disclaimer but not in the tags so anyone browsing in latest updates or searching tags won't find itSo "slave" tag is missing too.
Thank you very much about that I didn't know anything about it I will replace it right away.I just checked your Patreon page and I'd change your banner. You could get flak for having nudity in your banner, and imo, it's best to fly beneath Patreon's radar at the best of times.
Sorry for that the page on patreon was not created by me, I will have that fixed as quickly as possibleI would change it also because it contains a spelling error
If you compare a dude who works 8h a day and has some other issues to attend with pinktea 10k per month only to create h-games we already have a problem. Thank you for the feedback the things which are good from there will be implemented or they had been in this quick fix.Okay, quick review of the game as I play through it:
-loading screens don't scale to 1920x1080
-"sentenced player" bit has a typo that says "santanced", there's a few more in the intro
-very jarring font compared to the rest of the style
-E
-your first language clearly isn't English, that's not a problem, but get some English players to test read your writing
-Movement on the map is done with the arrow keys, I would recommend programming in being able to drag around using the right mouse button
-very annoying music, can thankfully be turned off
-2 frame "animation"
+kinda nice art?
+promising idea
+alrightish kink
I wouldn't start asking for donations yet, it's in no state to demo to the public and the state in which this was released is more likely to scare away people than gain them. Given some more time and development, perhaps a way that you can actually quit the game or go to the main menu instead of being forced to alt-F4 it when you're put in the "sandbox" mode would be nice. Also, having to go back to the interaction menu is kind of a pain in the ass to do each time if you want to explore what you can do with the girl. Pinktea did something similar, but at least figured you'd wanna stay in the menu with the girl and since you're taking a lot of "inspiration" from Pinktea anyway, maybe you ought to apply that too.
I rate this game 3 out of 10 hams, needs more time in the smoker.
You've plastered quite a bit of your patreon link all over the game even in this state. If you've come here looking for help and showing a game in such a state, that's kind of a weird thing to do, y'know? Hence the bias of my short little list thing. If you're prepared to ask money for it, then you should demo it in a state worth viewing. First impressions and all that, you know?It's not quite a game yet... The hole point is to create a story with a community and then make it a game.You must be registered to see the links
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If you compare a dude who works 8h a day and has some other issues to attend with pinktea 10k per month only to create h-games we already have a problem. Thank you for the feedback the things which are good from there will be implemented or they had been in this quick fix.
Also my disclaimer was clear it should be not treated like a game, I've put it here to get help in order to finish it faster on story side/graphics hoping for community help, instead of dropping the project.
Just use LALT+F4 for kill process.---- Google translate -----
I have never understood people sharing a VERY RAW product for sharing. Not only that, there is NOTHING in the game (except the main character and the map), so after the launch it is also EXITING IMPOSSIBLE (there is no standard menu called "ESC" with the "Exit to the desktop", "Settings", "Save", "Download" and so on). Add to this the FLUID message "this is a demo of the game ....." that appears at EVERY end of a player’s turn !
This is how much you need to be "nearby" to make so many elementary mistakes at the start of the project ?! Do you, dear developer, have you ever tested your "craft" at least once or are you acting like "I blinded it from what happened" and "let it happen anyway" ?
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Я никогда не понимал людей выкладывающих для общего доступа НАСТОЛЬКО СЫРОЙ продукт. Мало того что в игре НИЧЕГО НЕТ ( кроме главного героя и карты ) так из игры после ее запуска еще и ВЫЙТИ НЕЛЬЗЯ ( нет стандартного меню вызываемого поклавише "ESC" с пунктами "Выход на рабочий стол", "Настройки", "Сохранить", "Загрузить" и так далие ). Добавте к этому НАДОЕДЛИВОЕ сообщение "это демоверсия игры ....." появляющееся при КАЖДОМ завершении хода игрока !
Это на сколько надо быть "недалеким" чтобы на старте проекта допустить столько элементарных ошибок ?! Вы, дорогой разработчик, сами-то хоть раз тестировали свою "поделку" или действуете по принцыпу "я её слепила из того что было" и "дальше пусть будет как получится" ?