- Aug 5, 2018
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So I think you've gotten a few things wrong with names and what not so I'll just list some things that might help:
1. Stukov wasn't infected till Kerrigan became the queen of blades so I think you mean Abathur?
2. No swarm zerg is capable of sentient thought except for queens, unique zerg, and the overmind soo you might want to fix that
3. I believe broodmothers (A.K.A queens) weren't made until Kerrigan gained control so perhaps change it from a queen to some kind of extension of the Overmind itself?
I'm totally fine if you don't respond or anything, just wanted to help
1. Stukov wasn't infected till Kerrigan became the queen of blades so I think you mean Abathur?
2. No swarm zerg is capable of sentient thought except for queens, unique zerg, and the overmind soo you might want to fix that
3. I believe broodmothers (A.K.A queens) weren't made until Kerrigan gained control so perhaps change it from a queen to some kind of extension of the Overmind itself?
I'm totally fine if you don't respond or anything, just wanted to help