Excellent writing, good visuals and a story which would be 90% the same if I was the MC. What else could you possible want?!
Every girl has a different personality, wants, needs. Sime are born whores, others.. will become one soon. Some are cute nerdy girls, others are gym freaks. What I find unique, is that the author of the game added girls with psychological problems! Some of them are crazy, but crazy exactly as some of the girls I have dated. Obsessive, too shy, with too much influence from their parents, etc.
The game is pretty grindy, so I believe the money and the charge system must be removed at some point. The progress is slow enough even without it. And who would need money if you can hypnotize anyone?
The good thing is that slow progress is needed for games with hypnosis. the bad thing is it requires a lot of grinding and when you add on top the need to make money and charge points it gets too grindy.
I gave it 4/5 due to the confusing navigation which requires a lot of clicks to get somewhere. Maybe parts of it are reserved for future routes, but for now they are obsolete.
Example: to work in the Office building you need to click 4-5 times just to get there. However, if grinding is reduced, countless navigation clicks will also be reduced.
My suggestion to the dev: remove point and money systems or transform them somehow. Make navigation simpler, requiring less clicks. Add more beautiful girls. Yes, I know that beauty is somewhat subjective, but there are many short and chubby girls. Yes, I also understand that having supermodels would ruin the game, but what is the point of playing an erotic game with not that pretty girls? Please add prettier ones!
Good luck to the dev and I hope to see more content!