i see where you are coming from, its just that, to me, the dialogue feels incomplete, kinda like they still have more "steps" to go. specially because many of the other girls gain new dialogue for the other scenes when they do submit, while the ones that "resist" dont really do.The defiance makes it hot. Artemis is my favorite, all your talk about wanting them to cave is preference.
Random rotation for Lex room could be neat though.