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Despite being through Zombie Apocalypses they still have tattoo parlors.
- Thread starter MrBaker
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- Mar 18, 2019
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You don't need tattoo guns to tattoo. My brother was so cheap he broke a scissor blade and sharpened it to a point and made me give him a tattoo with it when I was 8. Looked nothing like what he wanted but still worked out he finished fixing it by himself.
- Mar 27, 2022
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- Nov 12, 2020
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No zombie AVN is complete without it so let's hope.
- Jan 28, 2020
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Is ntr planned? I hope it is, but even if it isn't it still looks like it will be a good vn.
- Dec 30, 2022
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You don´t need much to make tattoos tbh. Ever heard how you make prison tattoos or how certain tribes are making tattoos?
- Mar 8, 2018
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- Jul 23, 2018
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I support this too hahahaha !!! Is there any plans for this ???
Ahhh I hate that too. I've been noticing more devs doing that. Just write the whole word! You're not in an online chat, you're writing dialogue for a story!
Anyway, thanks for the heads up.
- Apr 6, 2020
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I second this, the current genre list is basically telling us nothing. Unless this is planned to be the most vanilla game in the whole site.
- Jun 24, 2021
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I won't say anything that most haven't said already, but still...!
PROS:
- Beautiful renders. Seriously, the quality is better than I expected.
- Gorgeous girls so far, no weird facial expressions that make them look like the Joker, they all look so natural.
- Male characters who aren't the MC are look nice. So many games make the mistake of dropping the ball and just make them look like spawns of Satan, I personally appreciate when they look human and realistically good looking.
- MC is handsome as hell. Yep, some don't care about this, but I strongly believe if you're going to show a MC's face, he should be pleasant to look at. Guy looks perfect.
- Animations are good.
- Zombies. What else do I have to say? A good Zombie VN is always welcomed.
- The premise of the story seems to have so much potential.
Weak Points:
- As it was already pointed out: Grammar. There's lack of capitalization at the beginning of the sentences, lack on punctuation, lack of question marks in some dialogues with questions, abbreviations that cheapen the writing ('Sr' instead of 'Sir', 'Pls' instead of 'please'. 'Cmon' is okay, but it should still be written as 'C'mon', like 'singing' can be shortened as ' singin' ').
- The structure of some sentences reveal that English isn't the dev's native language. Some games get abandoned when people struggle to read coherent sentences, so it's crucial dev corrects this and/or gets some help from someone who speaks it fluently.
- Some of the dialogue could get some work. Instead of MC shouting 'no man not you pls', dev shouldn't be afraid to add something extra 'I can't believe this is happening! Not you man, can't be you, please!'.
Dev already added a note where they explain the game will be polished, cause its still in its early stages.They have to take in consideration that they're going to compete with VNs that not only look as gorgeous as theirs, but with VNs that also have good grammar and natural and easy to follow dialogue.
I really wish them the best, and I'll be crossing my fingers for this one.
PROS:
- Beautiful renders. Seriously, the quality is better than I expected.
- Gorgeous girls so far, no weird facial expressions that make them look like the Joker, they all look so natural.
- Male characters who aren't the MC are look nice. So many games make the mistake of dropping the ball and just make them look like spawns of Satan, I personally appreciate when they look human and realistically good looking.
- MC is handsome as hell. Yep, some don't care about this, but I strongly believe if you're going to show a MC's face, he should be pleasant to look at. Guy looks perfect.
- Animations are good.
- Zombies. What else do I have to say? A good Zombie VN is always welcomed.
- The premise of the story seems to have so much potential.
Weak Points:
- As it was already pointed out: Grammar. There's lack of capitalization at the beginning of the sentences, lack on punctuation, lack of question marks in some dialogues with questions, abbreviations that cheapen the writing ('Sr' instead of 'Sir', 'Pls' instead of 'please'. 'Cmon' is okay, but it should still be written as 'C'mon', like 'singing' can be shortened as ' singin' ').
- The structure of some sentences reveal that English isn't the dev's native language. Some games get abandoned when people struggle to read coherent sentences, so it's crucial dev corrects this and/or gets some help from someone who speaks it fluently.
- Some of the dialogue could get some work. Instead of MC shouting 'no man not you pls', dev shouldn't be afraid to add something extra 'I can't believe this is happening! Not you man, can't be you, please!'.
Dev already added a note where they explain the game will be polished, cause its still in its early stages.They have to take in consideration that they're going to compete with VNs that not only look as gorgeous as theirs, but with VNs that also have good grammar and natural and easy to follow dialogue.
I really wish them the best, and I'll be crossing my fingers for this one.
