So. Promising start. Like the prose. Like the concept. Design is standard and inoffensive. Love the responsiveness of the Dev to interaction and feedback.
However, there's not really enough here to review yet. At the moment, this is more like a pitch than even a proof of concept. The gameplay loop isn't exactly there. It's more like a kinetic visual novel than any sort of actual game, currently. That doesn't mean it has to have branching gameplay of any kind, RPG elements, or any sort of conventional gameplay system. Nevertheless, if doesn't have a gameplay loop then it needs a lot more story -- like an entire Act, not merely an intriguing yet all-too-brief chapter 1 -- for the player/audience to sink their teeth into.
What is here is good, but until it has more proverbial meat to it (no pun intended), there's just not enough to give this a sincere review. Sorry.
However, there's not really enough here to review yet. At the moment, this is more like a pitch than even a proof of concept. The gameplay loop isn't exactly there. It's more like a kinetic visual novel than any sort of actual game, currently. That doesn't mean it has to have branching gameplay of any kind, RPG elements, or any sort of conventional gameplay system. Nevertheless, if doesn't have a gameplay loop then it needs a lot more story -- like an entire Act, not merely an intriguing yet all-too-brief chapter 1 -- for the player/audience to sink their teeth into.
What is here is good, but until it has more proverbial meat to it (no pun intended), there's just not enough to give this a sincere review. Sorry.
