Suggestions and corrections continued
79 - In Quthor when MC has 100t of Infernium Ore and interacts with Ledruhk Mine, they say "If you were be willing to unload that..." change were to would.
80 - Same interaction with Ledruhk Mine, they say "We have loaded you with 100t of Infernium Plating for Minos Forge." Sentence feels off. Maybe add the word up and abbreviate we have to we've, "We've loaded you up with 100t of Infernium Plating for Minos Forge." Also, you may want to add 3 periods at end. Since they are the next dialogue after this one.
81 - When calling T'Ris to the Captain's Quarters for nighttime meditation. At the conclusion they speak. She says "I oddly feel also some stress reduction myself..." This sentence needs a little rework, mostly because she refers to herself twice, just sounds weird. Try instead something such as "Oddly I also feel some stress reduction..."
82 - In morning after delivering goods to Minos Forge. BB-2 says "Drengar Bureaucracy is known to be not immune to favours..." This needs rework. Maybe something like... "Drengar Bureaucracy is known to not be immune to favours..." inverting the word be and not. Or... "Drengar Bureaucracy is known to be susceptible/vulnerable to favours..."
83 - Same conversation, BB-2 says "A case of Vortex has proven helpful in the past...." too many periods.
84 - When MC is writting a novel on his computer for Dr.Moira, he writes... "...Captain Blaze 'Starlust' sailed through the glittering void, his heart yearning for adventure and romance...." too many periods.
85 - Again, the next sentence about fiery and fearless Princess Astra...etc. This also ends with too many periods.
86 - In Quthor when speaking with Pirate Leader Belit, MC says "Just out of curiousity, what is Krogeath's asking price?" Krogneath is spelled wrong and curiosity is spelled wrong.
87 - Speaking with Dr.Moira the following day, after giving her the novel. She says "It had an otherworldy quality to it..." misspelled otherworldly, need to add an L.
88 - When giving Dr.Moira the Pet Pleaser toy, MC says "I know a certain Arellarti store...." too many periods.
89 - When finding Dr.Moira in Medbay using the Pet Pleaser, she says "Do you you mind...?" duplicate word you.
90 - When visiting Dr.Moira in the Medbay to discuss Therapy. She says "hmm...." too many periods.
91 - When visiting Dr.Moira in the Medbay to discuss Therapy. She says "And here...." too many periods.
92 - When giving Dr.Moira Racy Uniform, she says "I spent some time among the Krell, remember?." can remove the period.
93 - When trying to have Therapy with Dr.Moira in Medbay. If she is not wearing her basic uniform, then MC says "I better try that when Moira is dressed more conservatively.." missing a period.
94 - When visiting Dr.Moira for follow-on Therapy, she says "We'll get that sorted out in no time" there are no periods.
95 - When on ship Deck 2 or 3 and pressing Hotkey (A) to go to sleep. MC says he should return to Deck 1 before doing that. Would it be possible to have the Hotkey just go to bed without having to first return to deck 1? Or remove hotkey option on UI while on Deck 2 or 3.
96 - Hotkey (Q) moves time forwards 1hr. Except on hour 21:00, the button and option to move time forward vanishes and player forced to go to MC quarters to use alternate method of moving time forward to 22:00. Could we return the (Q) button for use at 21:00.
97 - When Dr.Moira visits MC at night for a BJ, if MC chats with her, she may talk about being a Krell Exchange student and she says "We all had to take Pet Class.." missing a period.
98 - Same interaction, when finishing, Dr.Moira says "Nnnnggg...." too many periods.
99 - When asking T'Ris for Bridge Favour, she says "I understood humans derive a special plasure from sex acts in unusual places..." misspelled pleasure.
100 - After handing in the 4th map fragment to library. MC is contacted in morning by Ylyee who discusses NX010 system. At one point she mentions a beacon they placed in Xenos for the MC. She says "If anything unexpected happens, you can immediately get out of NX0101..." I think this is a typo and you added an extra 1 at the end.