Ren'Py Completed Space Journey X [v2.00_010c] [y.v.]

[yv0751]

Suggested corrections continued

29 - Bot Lab while choosing a new Cortex, hovering mouse over a Precursor Cortex shows the item description along the left side of screen. The description for all Precursor Cortex has a typo. It says "...Providing Superiopr levels of..."
30 - Gallery for Seraphine is missing image of her in the bathtub holding the yellow duck toy.
31 - Seraphine gets bored. Nimhe is tasked to setup shopping channel. After 2 days Nimhe reports the terminal is setup in Seraphine's room. She says "I've linked the Terminal right into to the Trade Network..." should remove redundant word to.
32 - When giving Ponygirl costume to Nimhe, MC says "How about I take your for a walk around the ship?" simplest correction would be to drop the r, change your to you.
33 - After training T'Ris and giving her a Krell Plug and assigning her to wear it during morning setup. Following days during morning setup do not show the counting tally of how many days she has been plugged. I had her train on the Dancing Pole, so this activity removed the plug and thus didn't count at end of day?
34 - When back in Iltari Station and asking Nimhe to begin training with walks on the station, MC says "Wear you normal outfit." I think you should be your.
35 - Again during same conversation when taking Nimhe for walk on station, MC says "Let me adjust you jacket a bit..." This also needs to change you to your.
36 - When inspecting Seraphine in her Revealing uniform, she says "Ship Protocoal, I know...." There are 2 things wrong here. 1st is the 4 periods. 2nd is the spelling of Prorocol.
37 - Unsure if this was deliberate or an omission. When accessing a Jump Gate and moving cursor over the various connected systems within the Jump Network. There is a popup with information on each system. The descriptions on some perhaps should be changed, up to you. As a template, the Krell system of Arellarti lists the Krell Oligarchy both at the top right of the popup and again within the body text beneath. Quthor mentions Drengarian Republic in both top right and in the body text beneath. However... the Iltari and Xenos systems are different. Iltari says Human Democracy at the top and Iltari Alliance in the body text below. And Xenos says Voron Technocracy at the top and Voron Empire beneath it.
38 - When in Xenos System, and being contacted by Ylyee to get access to the Library. MC says "What reserach exactly?" Research is misspelled.
39 - After having Seraphine wear the Revealing uniform for a while, MC has some morning thoughts about her progress. MC says "Great the Seraphine will wear her Revealing Uniform uniform now..." Redundant use of uniform twice.
40 - When speaking with the Grand Archivar Kythera for the first time. At end she wants to sample primitive mating practices. She says "Not if it isn't part of your procreation techniques.." I assume this was supposed to have 3 periods. It only has 2.
41 - same conversation. MC says "Just wait a a moment." Redundant a.
42 - When convincing Seraphine to dance. She says "Fine" usually you have a period or 3 periods after every statement. This one has neither.
43 - When entering the Xenos System Precursor Field for first time, you are encountered by the Zealots of Yr. The Zealot Commander says "You presence here constitutes a disturbance." You should be changed to Your.
44 - Same conversation, when crew discussing the offer of a Disruptor. Khelara says "A nifty pice of technology for sure..." You misspelled piece.
45 - If deciding to attack the Zealots of Yr. MC says "We have a mission to fullfil." you misspelled fulfill. The double L's are at end of word not the front.
46 - After completing the Xenos Precursor Missions and reporting to the Xenos Library, you speak with the Grand Archivar again. She talks about Voron Hyperdrive. MC says "I have already a Hyperdrive." This sentence is dyslexic. Should say "I already have a Hyperdrive."
47 - At end of the conversation with Grand Archivar she proposes you continue helping her with her studies of primitive mating rituals. However she says something the MC should instead say. Kythera says "How can I be of help?" But this is supposed to be the MC saying this. Both the image of the speaker and the textbox say it is Kythera speaking as the MC.
48 - After starting construction of Base Hyperjump Gate. Following morning you are contacted by Ylyee. She says "In order to locate that node we need the 4th Map Fragment form Quthor System." form is supposed to be from. And couldn't hurt to add the word the also. "...from the Quthor System."
49 - Same conversation, Ylyee begins to explain that the MC has been granted access to the Voron Hyperjump and goes into detail explaining its function etc. This entire portion of dialogue is a mirror repeat of what the Grand Archiver says. Feels broken to have the identical conversation by 2 different characters. Maybe cut out Ylyee explaining it, since Grand Archiver already did. Or if this conversation is necessary for players who chose different option to completion of the Xenos Precursor Field Mission. Then perhaps add a dialogue trigger. If player chooses to attack Zealots, then skip Ylyee repeat of dialogue. Or something equivalent, so dialogue is not heard twice.
50 - Speaking with Krogneath about giving him the Princess. Krogneath says "I know it would..." This should say "I knew it would..."

Awesome, thanks!
Registered for fixing!

 

[yv0751]

Bah! Pen? Paper? I just took a phone pic of the clues.
It's a little awkward, since the crew member talking in the scene is wearing the Risque outfit, so their tits are hanging out. What a great thing to have handing out in my phone gallery. haha.


EDIT:

On a seperate note, I was checking the Bot Analyzer in the lab, trying to figure out why my bot was worth more with a Gen3 Military L shell, than with an Gen3 Military Galaxina one. Only to realize that for whatever reason, the personality "Galaxina", despite being in pink color, DOESN'T give any bonus to value. It's a 1x bonus. Whereas my Hive Queen bot gets 2.5x. Even a green Palace Mistress gets 1.5x. Protector/Seductress/Infiltrator is a 2.0x, and both are pink colored.

Why was that particular decision made? I love Galaxina shells for the Devoted attitude and the bonuses to the various Likes, but the personality being no bonus at all seems like a bit of a stretch.

For the Galaxina Shell the traditional personality valuation mechanics doe not make so much sense.
The value of the Galaxina shell comes with a much higher base shell price and from the premium shell overrides that come with the shell. I still decided to mark it pink so its clear that personality comes with benefits.

Thinking of it, if the personality cube works with her you could add another personality while keeping the remaining benefits. That would raise her to 500 Mil... need to address that

 

[yv0751]

Hey YV, if you are don't mind hearing it, I've got two sets of things I'd like to see at some point before you move onto whatever the next project is.

First, I'd love it if you would make quality control scenes for the rest of the Bot shells. In v1.50, we only have scenes for the basic bot, and the Type V and Type N. I really wish we had scenes for the K/C, L, and the premium shells (Protector, Infiltrator, Golden Seductress, Galaxina). I suspect the Infiltrators scene should have it being on top and dominant to the Captain, it would be thematic.

Second, in the horse races, you've got a bunch of art for the horse racers that you only see when a racer wins. I haven't done many races yet, but I suspect the different racers have unique art. My request is that we get some sort of gallery scene unlock that has all the racers in one screenshot (kinda like Nimhe's lab blowjob 4-piece). I'm not sure what the unlock requirements could be, maybe have any racer other than Nimhe/Serahina win?

Added to the idea list. I should find a way to clone myself or to employ a few bots

 

[Lecher76543]

Yes, I kind of forgot to add the main character to the pop-up menu system. Once you have exceeded level 20 you get a message from bb2 who tells you that you now can upgrade generations of parts In the laboratory. There is a little triangle appearing next to the wrench symbol next to each part. With that upgrading, you can then increase your capability up to 30 I think

That happens when I reach level 10 in tech. I know there is a way to increase beyond 20 but still not sure what the specific action I took achieved that.

 

[Lecher76543]

For the Galaxina Shell the traditional personality valuation mechanics doe not make so much sense.
The value of the Galaxina shell comes with a much higher base shell price and from the premium shell overrides that come with the shell. I still decided to mark it pink so its clear that personality comes with benefits.

Thinking of it, if the personality cube works with her you could add another personality while keeping the remaining benefits. That would raise her to 500 Mil... need to address that

" Thinking of it, if the personality cube works with her you could add another personality while keeping the remaining benefits. That would raise her to 500 Mil... need to address that "
I mean.....you don't really have to...its a nice bonus reward for end game innit?

 

[Cirdon]

yv0751 , quirk (since it works perfectly fine, if different)
Warehouse bot container processing vs ship cargo bot container processing.

When I'm on the ship and I select to store a bot, I return to the bot container processing screen.

When I'm in the warehouse and I select "To Ship" I'm back to the crate screen and have to select "load" to get back to the list.

I prefer the ship return to the bot container processing screen where I can go straight to the next bot I want to put into storage.

 

[no1hom3]

well hum .. it appears the Galaxina personality bonus is suffering from a case sensitive mis-match ..
.. it should be getting a 2.5 bonus ..
.. but .. the shell personality is tagged 'Galaxina' whereas the pBonus function is looking for 'galaxina'

Spoiler

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

 

[yv0751]

well hum .. it appears the Galaxina personality bonus is suffering from a case sensitive mis-match ..
.. it should be getting a 2.5 bonus ..
.. but .. the shell personality is tagged 'Galaxina' whereas the pBonus function is looking for 'galaxina'

Spoiler

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Good catch, thank you very much. In the next update, I'll add a shell scrubber which replaces the wrong personality capitalization when the shell is touched. That way even the legacy shells will eventually be auto converted.

 

[no1hom3]

Good catch, thank you very much. In the next update, I'll add a shell scrubber which replaces the wrong personality capitalization when the shell is touched. That way even the legacy shells will eventually be auto converted.

cheers .. with the case change it starts getting really close to 500 Mil with the higher IQ

Spoiler

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

 

[RemoraDFC]

Suggested corrections continued

51 - In the Quest Menu, the quest description for Locating The Beacon. Description says "Wait a for a night and contact Nimhe..." remove the 1st a.
52 - After completing Seraphine's Pony training and visiting Krogneath to report results. MC says "It took some time to, ahem.. Prepare Seraphine." You are missing a period after ahem.
53 - On Krell Dome, speaking to Pony Shop Owner. He says "Tarakian Ponies have the most stamina.." Missing a period.
54 - On Krell Dome, speaking with Shady Trader. She says "This is the only way I can interact here without arousing supicion..." suspicion is misspelled.
55 - Same conversation with Shady Trader at Dome. She says "I am conducting important business here...." 1 too many periods.
56 - The Dome, interacting with Bookkeeper for first time, BB-2 and MC speak. MC says "Well, what can you tell me about Krell betting then" There is no period or periods or question mark or anything at end of statement by MC.
57 - The Dome, same conversation with BB-2, MC says "That's no so unusual..." add a T and change no to not.
58 - The Dome, after Seraphine parade. Krogneath says "Thank you, Human" Missing a period or 3.
59 - Speaking with Seraphine in her quarters after completing the Parade Event. MC says "Of course you have to wear you Pony Costume..." add an r and change 2nd you to your.
60 - Same conversation with Seraphine, she says "I am the Pony they want to see!" I believe you should capitalize the. "I am The Pony they want to see!" or some other way to emphasize THE. Up to you.
61 - When returning from Pony Walk with Seraphine. Vee arrives and then Seraphine says "Nnnnggg...." too many periods.
62 - Numerous instances of Pony Costume being said either Capitalized or not capitalized. Inconsistent. Since it is the title of an item, makes sense they all be Capitalized. Maybe simpler for you to just do a "find all..." in game dialogue files for reference to Pony Costume, and then you can pick a standard.
63 - After taking Nimhe out for Pony Walk outside in Arellarti, she says "Nnnnggg...." too many periods.
64 - Pony walking Seraphine in the Dome, there may be a Krell Pet Owner MC can speak to. If player speaks to him with Seraphine along, Krell says "You wouldn't want to happen to sell her?" This sentence should be corrected. example: "You wouldn't happen to want to sell her?"
65 - In the evening Dr.Moira is in her quarters. But there is no Red dot on the minimap denoting the presence of a NPC in that room.
66 - During the day Dr.Moira is in the MedBay. But there is no Red dot on the minimap denoting the presence of a NPC in that room.
67 - When trying to assign Krell Collar costume to Vee in the morning, if not in Krell Space and at low SUB, she says she will not wear it because it is demeaning. I don't think Vee feels shame. Perhaps a different statement would be more appropriate.
68 - When presenting a Pony Costume to Dr.Moira MC says "Yes, I ahem.... found it somewhere..." too many periods after ahem.
69 - When trying to give Racy Uniform to Dr.Moira she says "I do not plan to work on the the ship like that." duplicate the.
70 - When trying to give a Dildo to Dr.Moira she says "Not comparable to a Krell device of course...." too may periods.
71 - When calling Verity, MC says "Say, at...." too many periods.
72 - When calling Verity, she suggests 8 P.M. The most common and accepted use of the abreviated Prime Meridian is PM. Without periods. True it is an abreviation, and normally would warrant the periods. But PM is standard, without the periods.
73 - After giving bridge tour to Verity, there is a scene and MC repeatedly says "Aaaarghhh" Missing periods.
74 - When using the Voron Hyperdrive to enter Quthor for 1st time, you are intercepted by a Drengarian Destroyer. The Captain says "You have entered our System illegaly." illegally is misspelled, and missing a 2nd L at end.
75 - After delivering cure to Quthor Station. If MC attempts to exit the ship, BB-2 stops them and says "It might take a while the quarantine is lifted..." missing word until. "...a while until the quarantine is lifted."
76 - After delivering cure to Quthor Station, and waiting several days. Station Control contacts MC and says "For your safety please do not enter Quthor Station Locales at that time..." replace that with this. "...at this time..."
77 - After completing the Cure mission, MC is instructed to speak with Dr.Moira about the 15 Million Cr reward. MC says "We have Crew Task Assignments every morning at 8:00 hours." Suggest changing the time designation. If using military terminology of hours. Then it would be correct to say 0800 hours. With a zero at the front and no colon. However if using standard civilian time then 8 AM or 8 o'clock etc is appropriate. Civilians do not say hour after a time. example: "Hey Bob, see you 8 AM tommorow."
78 - The sector maps themselves, where you see the various planets/domes/stations/belts/anomalies/etc. Each Sector Map has a written title at the bottom right. Each of these differs and the standard varies. For example, in Iltari System it only says Democracy. In Arellarti System it says Krell Oligarchy. In Xenos System it says Imperial Technocracy. In Quthor it says Republic of Drengar. Etc... Suggest modifying each map that does not follow standard the correct standard. example: Iltari should say Iltari Alliance for example.

 

[Cirdon]

No, other than the office visit

I'm having trouble finding where to go with that.

It's supposed to be on the station, not the dome, but I just have a grey "Undiscovered" box with no indication of how to get to it. I thought something would change if I brought the Doctor to the Plaza with me, but that's still a grey box.

 

[EroKala]

well hum .. it appears the Galaxina personality bonus is suffering from a case sensitive mis-match ..
.. it should be getting a 2.5 bonus ..
.. but .. the shell personality is tagged 'Galaxina' whereas the pBonus function is looking for 'galaxina'

Spoiler

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

THANK YOU! 2.5x multiplier makes much more sense, so I'm glad you pointed it out to YV.

Also, random aside, why does your bot lab screen look different to mine? For example, the addons are saying what their number value is at a glance, and the parts say G3 elite above the part name, whereas on my screen it shows something like MIL or ELT on the actual picture of the part? I play on windows, so is this a different OS situation, or is there something in settings I'm missing? Or, and this just occurred to me are you not playing v1.50?

Good catch, thank you very much. In the next update, I'll add a shell scrubber which replaces the wrong personality capitalization when the shell is touched. That way even the legacy shells will eventually be auto converted.

On one hand, yay, fixed Galaxina. On the other, boo, my Legacy Type-G will be turned into a Golden Seductress. Sadness.

 

[EroKala]

I'm having trouble finding where to go with that.

It's supposed to be on the station, not the dome, but I just have a grey "Undiscovered" box with no indication of how to get to it. I thought something would change if I brought the Doctor to the Plaza with me, but that's still a grey box.

In the landing area of the Arelatti Station, in the background is a structure that will highight itself. I think it's called Administration or something? It's on the left side of the screen and up, it's the only other interactable piece besides your ship and the door to the plaza to the Pet Shop.

You'll need to take Moira to that admin building, do an appointment, keep the appointment, which will eventually open up her ability to take the Advanced Pet course.

 

[pikpok85]

Hi. I have a problem with going into Krell Space. It seems like Khelara is not progressing (App3, Exh3), cant make her exercise in front of me even though I gave her a drink, can't trigger the shower show. She agreed to wear Krell uniform for extra 10k but I don't get 'green light' from T'Ris to go into the Krell space. Pls help.

 

[sillyrobot]

Hi. I have a problem with going into Krell Space. It seems like Khelara is not progressing (App3, Exh3), cant make her exercise in front of me even though I gave her a drink, can't trigger the shower show. She agreed to wear Krell uniform for extra 10k but I don't get 'green light' from T'Ris to go into the Krell space. Pls help.

Have you given her a revealing outfit? She says yes to Krell uniform, but doesn't really mean it. Get her wearing the revealing outfit for a while and T'ris will let you know.

To get the revealing outfit wearing started, you need to offer it to her in her quarters (she'll refuse) then have Nimhe and T'riss wear it for a few days. Then go from your room to the attached hallway in the morning and T'ris and Nimhe will dress Khelara down for not wearing the revealing outfit. After that, give it to her in her quarters and have her wear it for a few days until T'ris gives the all-clear.

 

[Cirdon]

In the landing area of the Arelatti Station, in the background is a structure that will highight itself. I think it's called Administration or something? It's on the left side of the screen and up, it's the only other interactable piece besides your ship and the door to the plaza to the Pet Shop.

You'll need to take Moira to that admin building, do an appointment, keep the appointment, which will eventually open up her ability to take the Advanced Pet course.

That was it. First I was looking for it in the station lobby, and when I did try by the ship, I wasn't mousing high enough up to find it.

 

[Cirdon]

Hi. I have a problem with going into Krell Space. It seems like Khelara is not progressing (App3, Exh3), cant make her exercise in front of me even though I gave her a drink, can't trigger the shower show. She agreed to wear Krell uniform for extra 10k but I don't get 'green light' from T'Ris to go into the Krell space. Pls help.

Khelara doesn't have her Revealing uniform. So her Exhibitionism isn't going to increase. Unless her exhibition increases to 6 she's not going to have fun shower time and she's not going to be ready to go to Krell Space.

So at 18:00 give her the Revealing uniform. She won't accept it, but offering it triggers "Good Examples"

Three more days of the other ladies wearing their uniforms and you step out to H1 in the morning and that triggers a conversation of good old peer pressure. 18:00 that night you can give her the Revealing uniform and the next day can be the first day of her wearing it. Continue with her wearing it until she gets to 6.

 

[RemoraDFC]

Yes, you need to grind her thru the stages of clothing first, before she will get comfortable enough to wear Krell Collar. As for her to progress to point of letting you watch her exercise, you need to complete missions in Quthor System. Not just the vaccine cure with Dr.Moira, but the mining ore stuff too. She will eventually gain the missing stat point allowing further progress. So if your still early in game and trying to get to Krell. Don't worry about exercise stuff for a couple more systems.

 

[yv0751]

Hi. I have a problem with going into Krell Space. It seems like Khelara is not progressing (App3, Exh3), cant make her exercise in front of me even though I gave her a drink, can't trigger the shower show. She agreed to wear Krell uniform for extra 10k but I don't get 'green light' from T'Ris to go into the Krell space. Pls help.

And don't forget to give Vee also a krell uniform...

 

[Cirdon]

And don't forget to give Vee also a krell uniform...

That was the second thing I checked when I loaded his save, since that's a mistake I frequently make.