* The start menu is very hard to read, as the text color is nearly the same as the background
* White text against a light grey background. I should stop here as I know this is going to be a pain to read. Really a bad idea for a game where you have to do a lot of reading. Really a bad idea period.
* Original art looks nice.
* I keep expecting to have to go and find items, but I don't need to. I was hoping that there would be more of a puzzle aspect to this game. Let's see how things play out.
* There are some spelling and grammar errors, but I think it has more to d with typos than lacking a grasp of English.
* It seems odd to need to develop photos in the future since we don't really need t do so now.
This isn't my idea of a game, and it's a shame The artwork is nice and there's some potential for some hot scenes, but the lack of meaningful game play and the interface issues make this a pass from me.