Probably the best 0.1 standard Ren'Py VN I've seen on this site. Fantastic job. I want to particularly compliment the clothes. An absolute master-class in clothing that isn't just painted on top of boobs. V-necks, sweaters, button downs, all well made and actually seem semi-realistic.
Main con: I'm worried about how dumb the protagonist is. For example, there's a line where someone says something like "I've got bad news," and the protagonist thinks to himself "this doesn't sound good." Yeah man, bad is typically not good, great observation. Also him not getting that Veronika was gonna jerk him off was a bit drawn out.
Minor con: Some games, including this one, have started doing this thing where the camera pans around for a fully rendered clip of a woman standing there or doing some random task for a few seconds. I have a feeling those probably take a lot of time and computer power, and if they aren't for a sexy scene, I don't really see the point. Just think that time could be better spent on more / sexier renders.
Second minor con: Could use a little more body diversity, Lisa and Misato in particular seem like they could have had slightly more realistic proportions. But Kelly is my favorite character so far by a mile, or more thematically, a light year, so who am I too complain about too many big boobs.
Looking forward to updates! Already speculating as to who could be [REDACTED]