The logic around who you get a date with is far more coherent now.
However, another area I think could still use a little clearing up though is the Social Rank system, from what I can tell it's a scale from either 0 or 1 to ~1000, with lower being better. Anything above 500 designates one's social status a Commoner, and below as a Noble, with a third designation of Alliance Military being available. The only non-AI with this third designation has a rank of precisely 500, so I can't tell if being military replaces your rank with 500 (as the midpoint between commoner and noble to indicate being neither), or if this is a coincidence and one could have a different rank and still be military (which I would have to assume is the case, because even if the commoner vs noble distinction is truly eliminated within the ranks*, surely an admiral would still have better social rank than say an ensign)?
Further confusing things, one character, Zara Vel, simply has a blank entry on her social rank (I assume on account of being an alien), while Eve, the aforementioned AI, is given a social rank of 0, I think an entry of N/A would likely be more appropriate for both of these. We also don't know the player's rank, which would be helpful context for the other scores. Ideally, a second page would be added to the codex for lore/setting information such as social rank or what a Caelorian is (at present this is just stuffed at the end of the codex entry for the only Caelorian we've met).
*Which seems doubtful given that, for instance, we're told that only noble scions can qualify to lead a battlegroup. Though... With that being said there's only three cadets in that class including the player should they pick it and of those: one we've yet to meet; and the other is a commoner with the lowest rank of any character currently known to us so... Yeah. It is at least implied that there are special circumstances around her admittance so I assume this is deliberate and we'll find out more at some point down the line.
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Another very minor thing is the "MAC cannon" in the second battlegroups simulation should the player choose the fight option, firstly the acronym MAC already includes the word cannon, and second it is (to my knowledge) specifically a term tied to the Halo universe. I would suggest using either a more generic term like railgun/coilgun/mass driver/Guass cannon etc. or coming up with a different specific term for your universe.
Lastly, more character options on creation would be nice, notably absent is the option to be a redhead, but more options in general would be nice if possible too. Also for female characters specifically, the "blond" option should probably instead be "blonde".