VN Ren'Py Sticky Money [v0.1 Prologue] [1adwad]

[1adwad]

Sally is such a cutie, I will be keeping a close eye out for the next update. Good luck, with your game. It's sad to see such a cutie go bad, but, she is an actress, right? That's why she gets the big bucks. I would like to see her get corrupted into becoming a bar waitress being groped by drunk men and she has to wear sleazier and sleazier clothes. Maybe, work the Gloryhole as well. Maybe, Sally can get herself a dog for "protection".
The renders are awesome. I think you really have a winner here with Sally.

a dog for "protection" you say... hummm...hmmmm
Thanks for your feedback tho. Made my day

 

[1adwad]

what ai did you use

it's a stable diffusion, using merongmix model

 

[Ifllslonly]

Haaa.. To be honest, it's been pretty rough to make those AI CGs. Took a lot of time. Cuz, as you may know, the consistency is the main problem in AI commune right now. One of the way to get the consistent character/appearance is to train lora, but for that, you need strong PC... and mine it's not good enough for that. Like most of my CG's are just raw generations and I am the guy who photoshop them --> send it back to AI --> back to Photoshop --> and upscale, so that's why it look cute and alike.

If you don't have a way to train AI that's really sad. I touched SD with novelai about a year ago and there was the same problem with the teaching. Maybe someone is sharing already trained models now or something?
You should try to find a way around it, because doing more work only to get weaker results is not productive.

If anyone here knows how to help 1adwad with AI please do.

 

[jorge21]

I really liked the game

 

[jorge21]

I have 5 questions, the first question is I wanted to know if the protagonist will have a boyfriend and the protagonist's boyfriend will be the blonde boy in the images with the abs, the second question is we will see incest where the father They fuck and are unfaithful to their boyfriend, the third question is we will see the protagonist fucking with old men and being unfaithful to her boyfriend, we will see the old man fucking the protagonist in her boyfriend's bed, the fourth question is what we will see in the next update and the fifth question is when we will see the next update.

 

[1adwad]

I have 5 questions, the first question is I wanted to know if the protagonist will have a boyfriend and the protagonist's boyfriend will be the blonde boy in the images with the abs, the second question is we will see incest where the father They fuck and are unfaithful to their boyfriend, the third question is we will see the protagonist fucking with old men and being unfaithful to her boyfriend, we will see the old man fucking the protagonist in her boyfriend's bed, the fourth question is what we will see in the next update and the fifth question is when we will see the next update.

1) Yes, I was thinking of adding some (avoidable) romance routes (hetero/lesbian) in the game.
2) No, I don't think going dark incest route is in my plans... for now.
3) So you basically want NTR in game, huh? Since some romance will be added then yes, that's very possible.
Also, I will be adding nursing home, so MC can work there and "take care" of old people.
4) In next update, I'll add some gameplay, like going thru the Rosetown's map, exploring areas, meeting people, finding jobs, gaining money in different ways, spending money, etc. Some new stats should be added too.
5) Considering that I still need to make some CGs for several scenes, and then put it in the code, I assume early~mid February.

 

[Ifllslonly]

1) Yes, I was thinking of adding some (avoidable) romance routes (hetero/lesbian) in the game.
4) In next update, I'll add some gameplay, like going thru the Rosetown's map, exploring areas, meeting people, finding jobs, gaining money in different ways, spending money, etc. Some new stats should be added too.

Avoidable romance sounds funny for some reason.

I would suggest that you show more of MC's personality - how does she react to certain situations, what are her feelings, what are her emotions; make the story more intimate. If you're adding stats, you should understand how they affect the story; stats without impact are meaningless. Jokes work better when used in context rather than as the main plot.

And don't be all over the place, you should understand the priorities in your work and why you add something - don't add something just for the sake of it. Focus on quality rather than quantity in general, and if you don't like something anymore - get rid of it.
People like the "hard to get" type of girl, so it's better if she doesn't jump on a first smiling girl/guy she meets. It's also better to show more erotic situations and less porn in general - not only visually, but also story-wise.

So the first thing you need to do is find a direction for your game. For now, it seems to me that you want to make a sandbox - it's too ambitious for one person without contributors.

 

[1adwad]

Avoidable romance sounds funny for some reason.

I would suggest that you show more of MC's personality - how does she react to certain situations, what are her feelings, what are her emotions; make the story more intimate. If you're adding stats, you should understand how they affect the story; stats without impact are meaningless. Jokes work better when used in context rather than as the main plot.

And don't be all over the place, you should understand the priorities in your work and why you add something - don't add something just for the sake of it. Focus on quality rather than quantity in general, and if you don't like something anymore - get rid of it.
People like the "hard to get" type of girl, so it's better if she doesn't jump on a first smiling girl/guy she meets. It's also better to show more erotic situations and less porn in general - not only visually, but also story-wise.

So the first thing you need to do is find a direction for your game. For now, it seems to me that you want to make a sandbox - it's too ambitious for one person without contributors.

Undoubtedly, you are right. Right now, I'm prioritizing the story and exposition. I don't chase all tags/categories just to add it in game.
Actually, I wrote a plot before making the game. So, I stick to it. As I work, I test the game then update the plot if I needed, make some corrections, add something that I feel will fit perfectly into the overall atmosphere of the game.

And about my ambitions, when I was studying coding I found fun playing with variables and statements.
Also, by playing other big games like Girls Gone Bad, Ravager, Our Red String, etc. It was a big discovery for me. They show what Ren'Py is capable of. Ngl, it was inspiring. Like, a large number of different event options. Small decisions that affect the further narrative. I like it.

I want to stretch and develop the variability of my story.

 

[Ifllslonly]

I don't chase all tags/categories just to add it in game.

Actually, I wrote a plot before making the game. So, I stick to it. As I work, I test the game then update the plot if I needed, make some corrections, add something that I feel will fit perfectly into the overall atmosphere of the game.

And about my ambitions, when I was studying coding I found fun playing with variables and statements.
Like, a large number of different event options. Small decisions that affect the further narrative. I like it.

I want to stretch and develop the variability of my story.

When I mentioned adding things, I didn't really mean tags and wasn't talking about the next update specifically: I was discussing the general concept that everything added to the game, even a single plotline, should have an impact on the eroticism in some way, whether directly or indirectly. If you add a character with a dog - dog should 'guard' , if you add money - it should have as many interaction types as possible, etc; there are some exceptions of course (most of them are not applicable to VNs). But I think you already got my point.
I think the last thing you want your game to be is superficial and hollow, so every single thing you add should have as much impact as possible.

Good, so you already have a vision and a plan, but I just had to mention the general tips anyway, just in case.

I hope that I got it right and you want to make a VN with many branches and not a full-fledged sandbox elder scrolls 69 type of thing.
My main concern for now is a visual one. I hope you will find a solution to make the art consistent.

PS: Is it former 'Pomni' on your avatar? I like it.

 

[single_guy_from_au]

This game looks interesting!

My only concern (which is common to many AI graphics) - I hope we are not going to see hands with six fingers, etc?

Thank you for your game - 1adwad

 

[1adwad]

I hope we are not going to see hands with six fingers, etc?

AHahahahahaha dude no way I'm doing 6 fingers without fixing it xdd

 

[guanciale]

THX for the minigame fix, without that stuff it was really fun to play and did not fail to get me horny (even if kind of short)
I´m looking forward to more content and stuff.....

 

[StarDustruntor]

Has there been any updates? I'd like to know because I really like the game

 

[TyrantBinch]

Update?

 

[Asedor]

Any news?