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Melmoth99

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I know it should look like a phone but, the thin screen just does not look right on a Full size computer screen. Please make it full size like a normal game
 

menatv

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Agreed that I wish you could enlarge the screen size. And maybe have some sort of gallery option.

But otherwise, I really like the content so far. Glad I stumbled onto this game. In for more updates....
 

ErnestoQSP

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Agreed that I wish you could enlarge the screen size. And maybe have some sort of gallery option.

But otherwise, I really like the content so far. Glad I stumbled onto this game. In for more updates....
Unfortunately, to change the ratios you have to essentially redesign a large layer of the game. Gallery... It's partially there. But I'm still thinking about thinking about a variation.
Anyway, thanks for the feedback. I hope the game will continue to please you.
 
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EnterYourNameHere

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MC's personality has no problem, he doesn't act like losers, but I wish his appearance didn't look like losers! The developer can choose an appearance that is suitable for Sisi's path and does not look like losers, there is only this flaw, the game is very good, I hope the developer will change the appearance of MC, If this problem is solved in the future, I will follow this game, good luck
Yes, its pretty common to use a male that looks already like a girl when the game have sissi content. :(
 
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Ran into a syntax error in the file dakota.rpy. It seems to be missing an equals sign on line 564. I added it in manually and it seems to work after that.
 

ErnestoQSP

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Here's a fix for that bug. Most could not even face it, but it is still a pity that I made such a stupidity. just throw the archive files in the folder where the game is located.
 
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SanityVoid

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off hand suggestions and initial thoughts,

first (mostly do to some comments already) if you choose to change player models allow the play to choose with they prefer instead, I saw some suggesting changing to generic over femboy. Add a model option instead of just changing it.

Second don't trip into the fallacy of femboy = small dick, far too many games make this mistake, instead it should be a different logic for size. femboy's with monster cocks do exist, and it's just as infuriating and false to make douchey characters being the portrayed has the only one to be well equipped when usually the truth it the opposite (a bully will usually have a micro dick.)

Third, possible powerbottom routes.

Fourth, paths for healthy bisexual relationships.

Fifth, paths for health poly relationships.

Sixth lots of content toggles are probably going to be necessary. quite frankly if you can make a toggle for it, you probably should it you get a chance.

Final thoughts, the comment you made about not being able to make every happy isn't wrong, but the more time and work into this project the more paths, options, and kinks will naturally be added and addressed so you can quite probably make most happy.
 
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7RON

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Sep 1, 2018
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The game is inspired by two great games, I already have a reason to start
Which games please?

When I read the description of the game I was interested. It inspired me at one of the stories I like to read. Maybe you get a nice idea from it!?! I thought about a game like that quite often.



What I played till now, at the beginning I thought a nice idea with the cell phone screen. But after some time it annoyed me a bit. You should make the Screen bigger. And take the cellphone as a blend in item....I suggest.
What would be nice, when you give an orange rectangle, if one of the connected cell phones got a new message. With that you don't have to check it all the time.

Actually I think it will happen more with a bigger version. Interesting start.
 

Madarahyuuga

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Which games please?

When I read the description of the game I was interested. It inspired me at one of the stories I like to read. Maybe you get a nice idea from it!?! I thought about a game like that quite often.



What I played till now, at the beginning I thought a nice idea with the cell phone screen. But after some time it annoyed me a bit. You should make the Screen bigger. And take the cellphone as a blend in item....I suggest.
What would be nice, when you give an orange rectangle, if one of the connected cell phones got a new message. With that you don't have to check it all the time.

Actually I think it will happen more with a bigger version. Interesting start.
He said it was inspired by A Wife's Phone [Bloody Ink] and The Good Son [Lobsterman9999], both games are very good, I've read the one you mentioned too and I like it.

Two games that I also think you might like are The SUP [MegyMonster] and Becoming Prom Queen [The Nook Erótica] they are all here on F95
 

SanityVoid

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Which games please?

When I read the description of the game I was interested. It inspired me at one of the stories I like to read. Maybe you get a nice idea from it!?! I thought about a game like that quite often.



What I played till now, at the beginning I thought a nice idea with the cell phone screen. But after some time it annoyed me a bit. You should make the Screen bigger. And take the cellphone as a blend in item....I suggest.
What would be nice, when you give an orange rectangle, if one of the connected cell phones got a new message. With that you don't have to check it all the time.

Actually I think it will happen more with a bigger version. Interesting start.

While there are some similar games the dev actually is turning the story made what a year or so ago into a game.
Look up the dev name on chyoa, another story being converted into a game btw is "Being an adventurer is not always the best" by Darx00. Every game or at least some of the games by Icarus Media too I think.
 

SanityVoid

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Sep 26, 2023
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Updated notes for route ideas (I don't even remotely expect them all at once but some early reworks may save you coding hassle later.)

Hypno route split - adding a split in which the player isn't subject to the hypno effect can lead into a conflict route later.

Conflict routes - routes precursory to and somewhat side stepping some revenge routes may change character behavior

For example a conflict route for Jacob would be shortly after first kiss between Jacob and GF an event in which GF remarks about being surprised at MC being friends with Jacob and the options are 1) I get that a lot (keeps standard route) or 2) Just wanted him gone (conflict route) MC comment should be somethin along the lines of we're not friends in the slightest and I just wanted the bastard gone. GF realizes she has been tricked by him and get angry at Jacob who changes to harassment mode going to the gym to make mc stronger to protect GF added has a mechanic for multiple routes.

Intersex GF and Dakota paths- accidently find GF jerking off or playing with her pussy for a path determining event.

Sizes for MC cock event - early on MC see a pic of a monster cock femboy, MC would idly compare sizes (only three for sanity sake) monster, large, and medium. Monster roughly the same has me, large he's slightly bigger, medium he's twice my size
size range in 3 inch increments 4-6 medium 7-9 large 10 - 13 monster.

NPC cock size set: Medium: Intersex GF, MC (possibly David) Large: MC, Intersex Dakota, Jacob, and Vanessa. Monster: MC
All: future characters and MC.

Dakota possibly in danger of being drawn David's Hypno route.

David hypno conflict route break Hypno triggers undoing all David hypno on GF causing gf to panic and have David arrested. David is removed and mother now in conflict with MC for MC's GF having her husband arrested. (possible affects mother helps other antagonists to attempt to punish GF and higher patment costs. Also get MC a raise both has hush money and the company realizing MC is a Potential Bull that just removed a competitor by proxy.

New teacher if Dakota filled complaint: maybe a low to mid 20 something either a surfer or Himbo type (possible monster cock npc.)

David non-bastard route: David early path split determining MC relationship with David standoffish (current normal) Supportive; David is totally different here being friendly and not in a manipulative way having become a legitimate father to MC. Possible having some pseudo incest vibe paths later (sperm donor, and bi helper for ideas.) Donor: MC sperm count is low to none and asks his father figure to donate (possibly directly in some path.) Bi helper MC is bi curious and David helps.

Vanessa/Dakota route: get them to hook up potentially to get Dakota to back off from GF.

Vanessa/Dom MC: Vanessa has been secretly waiting for someone to dominate her.
(MC's Dom stat is NOT TIED to gym training.)

Dakota GF MC threesome: variants for both female, GF:intersex Dakota:female, GF:female Dakota:intersex, and both intersex.
(If Dakota intersex regardless of GF at least include a scene with Dakota and GF in some position for Dakota to look over shoulder to MC before reaching to spread herself in offer to MC to fuck her. sandwich or tower possible scene position.)


More ideas to come has more NPCs and paths emerge.
 
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ErnestoQSP

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Updated notes for route ideas (I don't even remotely expect them all at once but some early reworks may save you coding hassle later.)

Hypno route split - adding a split in which the player isn't subject to the hypno effect can lead into a conflict route later.

Conflict routes - routes precursory to and somewhat side stepping some revenge routes may change character behavior

For example a conflict route for Jacob would be shortly after first kiss between Jacob and GF an event in which GF remarks about being surprised at MC being friends with Jacob and the options are 1) I get that a lot (keeps standard route) or 2) Just wanted him gone (conflict route) MC comment should be somethin along the lines of we're not friends in the slightest and I just wanted the bastard gone. GF realizes she has been tricked by him and get angry at Jacob who changes to harassment mode going to the gym to make mc stronger to protect GF added has a mechanic for multiple routes.

Intersex GF and Dakota paths- accidently find GF jerking off or playing with her pussy for a path determining event.

Sizes for MC cock event - early on MC see a pic of a monster cock femboy, MC would idly compare sizes (only three for sanity sake) monster, large, and medium. Monster roughly the same has me, large he's slightly bigger, medium he's twice my size
size range in 3 inch increments 4-6 medium 7-9 large 10 - 13 monster.

NPC cock size set: Medium: Intersex GF, MC (possibly David) Large: MC, Intersex Dakota, Jacob, and Vanessa. Monster: MC
All: future characters and MC.

Dakota possibly in danger of being drawn David's Hypno route.

David hypno conflict route break Hypno triggers undoing all David hypno on GF causing gf to panic and have David arrested. David is removed and mother now in conflict with MC for MC's GF having her husband arrested. (possible affects mother helps other antagonists to attempt to punish GF and higher patment costs. Also get MC a raise both has hush money and the company realizing MC is a Potential Bull that just removed a competitor by proxy.

New teacher if Dakota filled complaint: maybe a low to mid 20 something either a surfer or Himbo type (possible monster cock npc.)

David non-bastard route: David early path split determining MC relationship with David standoffish (current normal) Supportive; David is totally different here being friendly and not in a manipulative way having become a legitimate father to MC. Possible having some pseudo incest vibe paths later (sperm donor, and bi helper for ideas.) Donor: MC sperm count is low to none and asks his father figure to donate (possibly directly in some path.) Bi helper MC is bi curious and David helps.

Vanessa/Dakota route: get them to hook up potentially to get Dakota to back off from GF.

Vanessa/Dom MC: Vanessa has been secretly waiting for someone to dominate her.
(MC's Dom stat is NOT TIED to gym training.)

Dakota GF MC threesome: variants for both female, GF:intersex Dakota:female, GF:female Dakota:intersex, and both intersex.
(If Dakota intersex regardless of GF at least include a scene with Dakota and GF in some position for Dakota to look over shoulder to MC before reaching to spread herself in offer to MC to fuck her. sandwich or tower possible scene position.)


More ideas to come has more NPCs and paths emerge.
Sounds fun. Not everything I think is suitable or worth implementing, but I will try to take these wishes into account in future versions.
 
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