Hmm, why all the trouble to name the girlfriend's family? Or does patreon classify a 3some with sisters as incest
This is why I hate incest games. Got nothing against incest itself, but just so many hoops to jump through
Good job on the adopted thing too. Another thing I hate about incest games is often it makes no sense without a patch. Wish more games were like this where the game still makes sense without needing a patch. (Also, being neutral about incest itself, I like adopted/step scenarios better since the philosophical conflict between social vs blood relations feels more interesting. That's just me tho ¯\_ (ツ)_/¯)
Anyway, looks pretty standard, which is good. Maybe get a editor for English?
Also the game leans pretty farther into establishing the MC's face compared to most games. I don't mind the render this time, but it's pretty hit or miss most times (for most ppl too I guess) aesthetically speaking. Which is another reason devs go for the more 'immersive' choices most times I guess
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Good Luck dev, I can see this doing well
Edit: A 1st release on-hold undermines that confidence somewhat. Wishing you better luck this time around.