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Just got finished playing the latest update and I have to say great update.
My thoughts'
My thoughts'
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Am I the only one who thinks Mel's old look is better? I liked it better, it seemed more natural and different from the others, now it's too common, I think she should go back to how she was before, Her pale skin is a real different and attractive charm which really suited her kind and loving personality, tan definitely doesn't suit her, that's what I think.
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- Aug 19, 2024
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Episode 1 impressions:
Visuals - Great renders, models and framing.
Story - Way too many characters introduced. I feel like I needed a family tree apart from the character cards just so I could easily glance at it. There is also the "plot" or rather the foreshadowing to the start of the plot?
Lewd - The MC is way too pervy from the get go towards any women he sees (felt like it was almost like a parody) but whatever I can overlook it.
I don't want to make any judgements on the story since at the end of EP1 there isn't much of it, but so far its seems very predictable (which isn't bad per say).
Visuals - Great renders, models and framing.
Story - Way too many characters introduced. I feel like I needed a family tree apart from the character cards just so I could easily glance at it. There is also the "plot" or rather the foreshadowing to the start of the plot?
Lewd - The MC is way too pervy from the get go towards any women he sees (felt like it was almost like a parody) but whatever I can overlook it.
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I don't want to make any judgements on the story since at the end of EP1 there isn't much of it, but so far its seems very predictable (which isn't bad per say).
I tried the game and the patch is not working at all. Landlady, Sir, Ma'am, friend, etc., are used instead.
It's really annoying to keep fixing them using URM.
It's really annoying to keep fixing them using URM.
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I tried again. The values/patch seem fine until I open the menu then they switch to Landlady, etc.
I can see it in URM as well, they instantly change vale when opening the menu
- Aug 19, 2024
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So I finished the rest of the (current) novel. I went back and read the thread so I won't be making a big post about my issues with it as I think the author got enough of that. Instead I'll recommend some improvements the author could make to enhance their novel.
- Either use a spell check program (like grammarly) or if using VSCode use the "Code Spell Checker" extension. There are many instances where the sentence structure is wrong or the grammar is incorrect.
- Please either read up on how the US (since at one point the character says they are in the states) company structure work or rework the explanation about it in game. At some point there is a throwaway line that the company has public shares. None of this competition and majority transfer would be possible without publicly disclosing it if that's the case. (Not to mention all tax / anti money laundering processes in place when majority shares get transferred)
- While using pre-made poses is a good way to shorten dev time, after seeing the 3rd BJ scene with the same animation it subtracted from the experience instead of adding
- It might be worth trying Iray Interior Camera for the animations but it does reduce quality, however I think it's worth spending a day testing it
The premise of Anna allowing the MC to have sex with others to counter her fear of the MC cheating on her is an extremely weak plot point. The fact that this is what caused her to become a cuckquean is not how that works at all. I personally would never give my fiancé permission to do the one thing that scares me most. I fail to see how this is in any way valid to her fetish.
I get that she knew about the MC's history of being a player even when he was in a seemingly serious relationship. I get that it would be a legitimate fear in Anna's mind that the MC may cheat on her because of his history. How, in any way imaginable, would she get the idea to be a cuckquean mitigate that fear? There's no way in hell that she got the idea from a psychiatrist because they're too professional to recommend something that could vastly harm a client's personal life like that.
I also hate being forced into sexual encounters with characters that I personally have no interest in. Cho and Emy both are cute, but they're too young to be involved with someone who is almost a decade older than them in a sexual way. Literally every other character is optional, but those two are forced and it leaves a bad taste in my mouth. Why would it be those two specifically? I see no benefit to the advancement of the plot other than the arbitrary cuckquean fetish that arguably shouldn't even exist with this poor reasoning.
I saw the dev's earlier post about how games force content in some way by making a character do this or that, but this is a blatant disregard to an individual's autonomy. As I said before, every girl is optional except Cho and Emy, so why not just make them optional too?
A loyal only option, even if Anna still gave the MC the option to be with other women, would fix every issue I have with this. Why is that not even an option?
I get that she knew about the MC's history of being a player even when he was in a seemingly serious relationship. I get that it would be a legitimate fear in Anna's mind that the MC may cheat on her because of his history. How, in any way imaginable, would she get the idea to be a cuckquean mitigate that fear? There's no way in hell that she got the idea from a psychiatrist because they're too professional to recommend something that could vastly harm a client's personal life like that.
I also hate being forced into sexual encounters with characters that I personally have no interest in. Cho and Emy both are cute, but they're too young to be involved with someone who is almost a decade older than them in a sexual way. Literally every other character is optional, but those two are forced and it leaves a bad taste in my mouth. Why would it be those two specifically? I see no benefit to the advancement of the plot other than the arbitrary cuckquean fetish that arguably shouldn't even exist with this poor reasoning.
I saw the dev's earlier post about how games force content in some way by making a character do this or that, but this is a blatant disregard to an individual's autonomy. As I said before, every girl is optional except Cho and Emy, so why not just make them optional too?
A loyal only option, even if Anna still gave the MC the option to be with other women, would fix every issue I have with this. Why is that not even an option?
- Jun 26, 2020
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Thank you for taking the time to play this game.
I grasp the essence of your feedback, and I just want to comment on a few things:
Regarding the public sharing of the company and such, I realize there are probably many mistakes because of differing legal systems in various countries. However, I did include a disclaimer up front stating that this is fictional, so I don’t think I’ll go into more detail and following all the rules that should apply. I mean, I’m just an amateur indie developer, not a professional Hollywood screenwriter, lol.
And I think I never stated that the game’s location is in the States, did I?
Maybe I'm wrong, but could you please get me a screenshot if I ever wrote that?As for grammar mistakes, I’ve actually been using Grammarly for a while since I started working on my first game, but now I’m using ChatGPT and DeepL because they’re relatively faster... but well, if there are still mistakes, that’s just what the machine does, lol. Still, I'll never give up on improving my writing when making games (AVNs), and I hope to one day have a partner (not online), a native speaker, who can work with me on this.
About your feedback regarding the MC and Anna being too illogical (which many others have also commented on), I understand there are many games more logical than this one. If I wanted to make everything more realistic, I might only be able to finish the game in 10 years because I’d need to create branching storylines for every individual situation—the jealousy, the drama... So, I chose to go the simpler route, which is the harem way, because it allows me to update the game more quickly and finish the story within an optimal timeframe.
Regarding the idea of forced content, it was meant to simplify things as I mentioned, but you're right, what's the point? So I changed my mind and wanted to make it optional, but I haven't gotten around to it yet. But now that I'm working on updates and revising some early scripts, I'll clean that up and make it optional.
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And that's completely fair. It just one of those things where I personally was in the industry so any media that gets it so wrong (and don't worry Hollywood often does get it wrong) that it makes the content not enjoyable.
During EP3 Ellie says:And I think I never stated that the game’s location is in the States, did I?
That's fair. Grammar mistakes are sparse to be fair I think that's why they stand out. Also I think you meant to say "Receptionist" here instead of "Officer" as that usually means police officer.
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The only thing on this I would like to say is that the story tells us (and not show) certain characteristics (MC's business knowledge, Anna's cuckqueen nature) but when it comes to actually showing it, in scenes, they act either against that characteristic or not in a way you would expect them to. Now that isn't always bad, like with Mona I think you did a good job.
Also, I forgot to say it in the last post but well done on the rework of the beginning of the game. Compared to the models before I do think it's much better quality.
- Jun 26, 2020
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Ah, that one, I'll fix that for sure.
And that one too.
I see what you mean. Well, actually, the story about the MC's 'knowledge' of business and other things (like Anna becoming a cuckquean) is just starting. If you continue playing the next update, you might see it, but it's all up to you.
Thanks
Much appreciated! I really enjoy the dynamic of this story as a slice of life romance, but I can't be romantic to girls that I have no interest in personally. I'm a romantic so I just like to have agency in my choices in regards to these types of stories and the very moment that there's forced content with a character that I'm personally not interested in I start to not enjoy it anymore.
With that out of the way, the renders are great, and I enjoyed the story up to the point where Cho is forced. After that I just skipped a lot of the stuff because my interest was lost. I'm eager to see the new rework or whatever you want to call it when it's finished.
- Oct 29, 2021
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421 renders completed.
This last part of the scene should be finished today, but I took a day off yesterday because I felt I needed to rest. However, I'm sure I'll be able to finish it by tomorrow, so I can focus on the animations the next day (sexy time).
As I've shown in several previews, we've entered the "New Reyna" chapter, along with the new appearances of Macy and Elliana. But I decided that it would be best to remake the older renders of Macy and Elliana so that there won't be too many storyline to mention this "treatment". So it will be said here that Elliana will only get a hairstyle change.
But I will do this remake after version 6D. So after the current version (6B) is released, I'll continue the story with two more releases, after which I'll focus on the remake.
I feel this remake is necessary, considering the importance of Macy and Elliana's engagement. I hope you won't be disappointed by this decision, and I think it's better to announce this news to the public.
That's all for now. Please stay tuned for the next update.
Hope you are all doing well, stay awesome, and as always, thank you for your support.
Regards,
BlueInk
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Oh no. Why the fuck do devs feel the need to fuck with models there is no problem with? The result is almost always worse.
I'd rather have only 'forced' LIs and a bunch of juicy group content. What's even the point of a harem otherwise, it's more like a dating sim.
Nice VN, looking forward to future updates!
Nice VN, looking forward to future updates!