hmm, so you would rather have harem of futasI'd rather have only 'forced' LIs and a bunch of juicy group content. What's even the point of a harem otherwise, it's more like a dating sim.
Nice VN, looking forward to future updates!
Love this game (as is)!!! I am not American either so I don't know the legal corporate logistics in the US, but I get the picture. You probably could use a proofreader/playtester though. If you are interested I worked in the print industry for many years and I am a nativeThank you for taking the time to play this game.
I grasp the essence of your feedback, and I just want to comment on a few things:
Regarding the public sharing of the company and such, I realize there are probably many mistakes because of differing legal systems in various countries. However, I did include a disclaimer up front stating that this is fictional, so I don’t think I’ll go into more detail and following all the rules that should apply. I mean, I’m just an amateur indie developer, not a professional Hollywood screenwriter, lol.
And I think I never stated that the game’s location is in the States, did I? Maybe I'm wrong, but could you please get me a screenshot if I ever wrote that?
As for grammar mistakes, I’ve actually been using Grammarly for a while since I started working on my first game, but now I’m using ChatGPT and DeepL because they’re relatively faster... but well, if there are still mistakes, that’s just what the machine does, lol. Still, I'll never give up on improving my writing when making games (AVNs), and I hope to one day have a partner (not online), a native speaker, who can work with me on this.
About your feedback regarding the MC and Anna being too illogical (which many others have also commented on), I understand there are many games more logical than this one. If I wanted to make everything more realistic, I might only be able to finish the game in 10 years because I’d need to create branching storylines for every individual situation—the jealousy, the drama... So, I chose to go the simpler route, which is the harem way, because it allows me to update the game more quickly and finish the story within an optimal timeframe.
Regarding the idea of forced content, it was meant to simplify things as I mentioned, but you're right, what's the point? So I changed my mind and wanted to make it optional, but I haven't gotten around to it yet. But now that I'm working on updates and revising some early scripts, I'll clean that up and make it optional.
What's the netori game in your sig?Dude, can't you see she's busy and upset with you? Don't make it worse, give her time.
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its a side quest from "photo hunt"What's the netori game in your sig?
What's the netori game in your sig?
You guys are hung up on Ana being a cuck-queen but truth be told she loves her family and wants to see them happy and she is over the moon with the man in her life and will ultimately be the undisputed Queen of MC's empire!!! Why are you so wrapped up in her wanting to share? {like it's a bad thing???}
Then play something else or make your own game...It's not being a cuck that I have an issue with, it's the idea of her being a cuck because she has a deep seated insecurity about her partner cheating on her. Telling someone who is afraid of spiders to go into a cage with a bunch of spiders and locking them into said cage isn't going to help them get over that fear, thus the same logic should be applied to Anna.
Also, I don't like forcing two characters that are roughly a decade younger than the MC to be sexual partners. I prefer characters to be similar in age because an old dude with a young girl is creepy and an old lady with a young dude is desperation.
I have no issue with Anna wanting to share, there's many games that are harem based that I enjoy on this site, but a major difference is that many of those harem games don't force sexual interactions on the player.
You obviously watched too many episodes of Fear Factor, Joe Rogan is the Devil...It's not being a cuck that I have an issue with, it's the idea of her being a cuck because she has a deep seated insecurity about her partner cheating on her. Telling someone who is afraid of spiders to go into a cage with a bunch of spiders and locking them into said cage isn't going to help them get over that fear, thus the same logic should be applied to Anna.
Also, I don't like forcing two characters that are roughly a decade younger than the MC to be sexual partners. I prefer characters to be similar in age because an old dude with a young girl is creepy and an old lady with a young dude is desperation.
I have no issue with Anna wanting to share, there's many games that are harem based that I enjoy on this site, but a major difference is that many of those harem games don't force sexual interactions on the player.
thanks for sharing, NEED UPDATE!You must be registered to see the links
Yesterday, I released version 6B for Pioneer Tier and above, with the following changelog:
Thank you all so much for your continued support. I’m grateful to be able to keep working on this game (aVN), and I hope that I can keep improving the rendering quality along the way.
- 677 static renders
- 23 animations
I have to admit this version was something of an animation practice run, which is why it took a bit longer since the last release. But don’t worry—the next version will have a shorter release interval, and I hope it brings you just as much enjoyment!
So, cheers everyone… enjoy the game, enjoy life, stay healthy, and stay awesome!
Best regards,
BlueInk
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well this game have some really nice dang asses...You must be registered to see the links
Yesterday, I released version 6B for Pioneer Tier and above, with the following changelog:
Thank you all so much for your continued support. I’m grateful to be able to keep working on this game (aVN), and I hope that I can keep improving the rendering quality along the way.
- 677 static renders
- 23 animations
I have to admit this version was something of an animation practice run, which is why it took a bit longer since the last release. But don’t worry—the next version will have a shorter release interval, and I hope it brings you just as much enjoyment!
So, cheers everyone… enjoy the game, enjoy life, stay healthy, and stay awesome!
Best regards,
BlueInk
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just subscribe for a month and get it instantly - is that fast enough?Please someone share the update soon!!!!!!!!!!