VN Ren'Py Strong Desire [Ep.6B] [TheBlueInk]

[motseer]

Where do they belong then ?

Didn't have Frank 30% ?

I don't remember but, it's not mentioned during the meeting if he does... IIRC But, if I'm misremembering, then it adds up to 131% which is even worse.

It's kinda moot. I get what the story is going for. It's a battle for control of the company. The numbers are just a bit wonky. *Shrug*

 

[Squig]

Not quite. The 66% that MC inherited from his grandfather has nothing to do with the company. It's wealth separate from and above and beyond that. The company breakdown goes like this, "boys" own 21%, Marvin 6%, the other 3 5% each, the "mystery" shareholders are his grandfather's associates 24%, public holdings 25%, the "girls" 26%, Bell 6% the other 4 5%, the winner of the CEO contest gets 5%. Now, if you add that all up it's 101% which can't be right. So, if you adjust the contest winner to 4%, which is all that's left to offer, and assuming the "mystery shareholders" vote as a block and the public votes as a block... The "boys" can never gain control unless they get both the mystery and public vote. If they just get one or the other the best they can do is 50% with the public vote. The girls, however, can control at 54% with the mystery vote or 55% with the public vote. In reality, there would not be a guarantee of block voting.

In short, the contest is meaningless.

Ahh makes sense, yeah I was thinking it was more of a shell company thing with control mostly remaining with mc's family, but that makes sense.

 

[motseer]

Where do they belong then ?

Sorry, forgot this part... That's money he gets no matter what happens with the company. I think it's part of why he and his family are richer than Anna's. His 66% is likely enough money to buy and sell the company we're talking about a hundred times over...

 

[JoeTheMC84]

Why did Jessie say she hated us in the last scene? What did I miss? I can't remember.

We won't know for sure until the next release, but my guess is that it has something to do with her seeing the Mc with Macy a while back.

 

[Kvr64##]

Will the character Erika join in the Mc's poll of potential harem LI cause her model looks beautiful and hot

 

[Vezzeli]

Okay, 1st time check this one, and I have a question: Is this missing pictures or animations, because these few first sex scenes, Anna, Sophie and Cho, are pretty weird. Image and text don't meet at all. Is that how it meant to be?

 

[K.T.L.]

Odd little typo in the office scene where the MC met Chloe early on - he said "And she has some siterss" - presumably that should be sisters...

Also, later when he's met a few more of the many females that seem to be hanging around him, he says "I bet if we pulled all your resources" - that should be pooled.

And another, just a few scenes later in their gym. He says "I make due" - should be "I make do."

Sometimes Miri calls "Hannah" by a shortened "Hanna" - is that intentional?

Jeesie talks about "some jerk hoovering over us" - should be hovering, unless there's a lot of housework to do!

Ok, I'm stopping here. This post is going to get a bit long. This thing evidently needs some proofreading!

 

[dayumson922]

Okay, 1st time check this one, and I have a question: Is this missing pictures or animations, because these few first sex scenes, Anna, Sophie and Cho, are pretty weird. Image and text don't meet at all. Is that how it meant to be?

I also came here because of that, it seemed very weird. Even the kiss with Sara was skipped (I don't know if it was suposted to be like that).

 

[nightsouls]

Although MC's grandfather's will allows MC to have a harem, too many LIs will make the development difficulty exponentially higher. The problem of the pregnancy switch will generate a lot of extra renderings. Speaking of renderings, the models I like are Anna, Penny, Vinna, Helen, Emy, Cho, Miri, Bella, Chloe, and Naomi.Each of them has their own charm . Mona is my least favorite. She looks the most like her mother, but she looks older than her mother.

 

[Sonny86]

Android anyone?

 

[TheBlueInk]

This thing evidently needs some proofreading!

I have a plan and have already been replaying the early episodes to improve a lot of the dialog that I thought could be better. I think it will all be done around the same time I finish re-rendering Macy and Elliana. But yeah, unfortunately I'm just doing the machine proofing.

A few days ago, Scooter_Tramp helped proofread the last episode release, but I'm not going to ask him to do it from the beginning. So, if you can bear with me, I'll keep working on improving my writing with each update. Hopefully one day I can pay a professional proofreader who can work with me in the same workspace, as I find it really difficult to pay people outside my country.

as your help for pointing out my mistakes, thank you, I'll fix it immediately

 

[ismaral]

I also came here because of that, it seemed very weird. Even the kiss with Sara was skipped (I don't know if it was suposted to be like that).

Was also wondering if the animations are missing at the start? It seems to skip over the sex, which is pretty weird to me. Does it get fixed later on or are all sex scenes like this?

 

[Ashbringer]

Seems to be missing abunch of images involving Mel at the meeting, which is a shame, because she's one of my favourites!

 

[Chucke1992]

I hope MC impregnates all the girls

 

[asahibito]

TheBlueInk

Can we get a label added here so this Mona scene can be more complete in the gallery?

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[asahibito]

Gallery mod updated for game version 6B.

Hope we get to see some extended action with main girl Anna next few updates. Starting to forget she even exists.

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[markdx4]

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/script/scriptep3.rpy", line 1461, in script
    ell "Thanks for this, I love you [pkm]."
RecursionError: maximum recursion depth exceeded in __instancecheck__

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:


Windows-10-10.0.22000 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.0.3.22090809
Strong Desire Ep-6B.1
Sun Nov  3 01:09:05 2024

 

[TheBlueInk]

Can we get a label added here so this Mona scene can be more complete in the gallery?

Yes, I am gonna add that, but unfortunately it will not be implemented until the next update.

Hope we get to see some extended action with main girl Anna next few updates. Starting to forget she even exists.

Sure, don't worry about it

Code:

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/script/scriptep3.rpy", line 1461, in script
    ell "Thanks for this, I love you [pkm]."
RecursionError: maximum recursion depth exceeded in __instancecheck__

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:


Windows-10-10.0.22000 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.0.3.22090809
Strong Desire Ep-6B.1
Sun Nov  3 01:09:05 2024

I believe something like this happened because of the old saves. I think if you ignore it, it can still run for the next dialog, but if you want to make sure for no other error, I recommend you start a new game from the beginning.

 

[Steinchen]

Sorry, forgot this part... That's money he gets no matter what happens with the company. I think it's part of why he and his family are richer than Anna's. His 66% is likely enough money to buy and sell the company we're talking about a hundred times over...

hmmm..
i still not understand...and it still does not make sense
the 66% share sure but shares from what??
when the company was sold a few month before his grandfather died this "shares" are from what??
66% shares from what company when it was sold.
it would make sense if it would be an actual sum like a few Billions or something on a bank account,but when the company was sold before grandfather died this 66% shares can not exist.
and if they exist because from the money his grandfather got for selling the company and he bought shares again from the same company and he got 66% for the money he got for selling,the MC should still has complete controll over that said company.

so having 66% shares of something with not really owning something makes no sense.
you can not have a share of 66% of something and not beeing the main owner.

 

[motseer]

hmmm..
i still not understand...and it still does not make sense
the 66% share sure but shares from what??
when the company was sold a few month before his grandfather died this "shares" are from what??
66% shares from what company when it was sold.
it would make sense if it would be an actual sum like a few Billions or something on a bank account,but when the company was sold before grandfather died this 66% shares can not exist.
and if they exist because from the money his grandfather got for selling the company and he bought shares again from the same company and he got 66% for the money he got for selling,the MC should still has complete controll over that said company.

so having 66% shares of something with not really owning something makes no sense.
you can not have a share of 66% of something and not beeing the main owner.

It's 66% of his grandfather's total wealth not including the company talked about. Think of it this way; his grandfather owned or partly owned many companies most of which were much bigger than the company in the story that Anna's family is fighting over. We don't know who he gave the other 34% to, maybe charity. But, 66% of that wealth will go to MC.