VN Ren'Py STWA: Unbroken [Pt. 6] [STWAdev]

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MrFriendly

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The main girls the MC meets are usually the romance options, they were in the first game anyway.

The choices when speaking to them usually have a hidden score and I do believe she is one of the girls so you're in luck.
Sadly I find myself once again uninterested in the girls...

Amrite (am I spelling that right?) is the MC's mentee, that's a bad idea.
Elspeth is as intimidating as she possibly can be.
Viridian Dynamics (if you remember that show) is the MC's surrogate little sister.
Rena is his lawyer
Jogging Girl seems a bit too intense.

Did I miss anyone?

Still, just first impressions but... I feel more of a brotherly thing than a horndog get them alone in the closet for 7 seconds type of thing...
 
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The MC had all of his problems tied into a perfect little bow at the end, just was too good of a "happily ever after".
disappointing five or whatever other girls is a perfect bow? you're a monster.
Did I miss anyone?
not according to the banner.
I feel more of a brotherly thing
the best feeling. i mostly agree with you, though. like the last game, only one girl in any way grabbed me this time around. probably that's a good thing, generally. strong diversity versus homogeneity, but i guess you're left out in the cold again bud.
 
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disappointing five or whatever other girls is a perfect bow? you're a monster.
Yes, because they can move on to someone else, he got over his writer's block, got a hot girl, and has a show being made out of his book. Not like the Author murdered them all...

not according to the banner.

the best feeling. i mostly agree with you, though. like the last game, only one girl in any way grabbed me this time around. probably that's a good thing, generally. strong diversity versus homogeneity, but i guess you're left out in the cold again bud.
The LI feel like they need a protector or mentor, the only one who doesn't is the lawyer and that's just a way to mess up a good client/attorney relationship.
 

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Yes, because they can move on to someone else, he got over his writer's block, got a hot girl, and has a show being made out of his book. Not like the Author murdered them all...



The LI feel like they need a protector or mentor, the only one who doesn't is the lawyer and that's just a way to mess up a good client/attorney relationship.
You really take your porn games seriously my man.
 
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Played through part one and I have to say, not a bad starter. Already in love with Amrit though.
 

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A quick Walkthrough/Cheat Mod for the game The Unbroken

TheUnbroken.jpg

Mod functions so far:
- an info screen for the game points
- show point hints for game choices (walkthrough)
- changing options for the points and the game choices/variables
- renaming of the main character

(Most of these functions are optional and can be turned on/off while playing the game.

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June 10, 2021 - Info:
I moved this post to an own Mod thread into the F95zone Mod section
LINK
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MrFriendly

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but the npcs of the game world have smaller dicks, as these things go.

i'll take your word for it, i breezed by four of them. in truth i was still in the author's shoes.

fuckin lawyers.
LOL, poor girls have to settle for a non-monster dick. The girls in this game are interesting.

You really take your porn games seriously my man.
I take good stories seriously. This dev writes good stories with interesting characters. If it was just a simple fap story I'd not care as much (or at all)...

Some things I'll say. Don't always trust the banner. Don't always trust my code. And the five so far are not the only ones you'll have.
Hey, I just want to say you write a great story. Really interested to see where this goes. I like all the characters but the only ones who seem like viable love interests where it doesn't feel like either an abuse of trust or have the potential to fuck up relationships are the lawyer and jogging girl. However, I know I should hold off from making any final decisions.
 
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I hate to admit it but I never finished the first game... I lost interest at the very end because it was over too quickly. That and none of the girls stole my heart. I know, I'm terrible. I'll seek counseling. Hope this will be different for me.
You weren't the only one. I find myself gradually loosing interest in the plot and in some of the dames... and then I find myself bored after certain update, new LIs keep coming and the MC.. I kinda didn't like him to be honest.

The dames in this game look gorgeous, but I better wait for the pt 3 and then give it a try.
 
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Damn, really good start, and the red heads and kana are looking hella fine.
One booboo with the story though, Davis was suppose to be coming down by train as stated in the phone call to the MC, but dies in a ship accident?
 
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You weren't the only one. I find myself gradually loosing interest in the plot and in some of the dames... and then I find myself bored after certain update, new LIs keep coming and the MC.. I kinda didn't like him to be honest.

The dames in this game look gorgeous, but I better wait for the pt 3 and then give it a try.
Yeah, it definitely petered out for me. I know it was a good story but once we hit the Kim moment it coasts to an ending. This one started much more interesting and has me more hooked, but we shall see how it evolves.
 
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One booboo with the story though, Davis was suppose to be coming down by train as stated in the phone call to the MC, but dies in a ship accident?
out of smiley doodles but this is a good point. mc was supposed to pick him up, change to train, boat sinks. :unsure: what did we miss? maybe he was coming over from france?
 

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not according to the banner.
Dru wasn't in the banner of the first so could always be a surprise entrant.

Sadly I find myself once again uninterested in the girls...

Amrite (am I spelling that right?) is the MC's mentee, that's a bad idea.
Elspeth is as intimidating as she possibly can be.
Viridian Dynamics (if you remember that show) is the MC's surrogate little sister.
Rena is his lawyer
Jogging Girl seems a bit too intense.
He was hoping to snare you with one of them, give it time they may grow on you.

Amrit I like. He's only coaching her and there are no rules about coaches banging their trainee's. Rose Namajunas is engaged to Pat Barry who's one of her trainers. It's pretty common.

Elspeth I really like, she's my fave so far.

Vi I need to get to know better, bit hard to think about wanting a relationship when the conversation has been about her dead family. Hardly romantic.

Rena i'm not sure about, friendzoned her so far, want to see if she's worth going all the way through the game for before I give her what she's asking for.

Jogging girl i'm not sure about.

All in all i'm loving it so far. Much stronger start the The Author with a few good women and some I want to learn more about. Loving the MMA mix in, i'm a HUGE fan of combat sports.

You really take your porn games seriously my man.
These aren't quite porn games, they are very story heavy.
 

Avaron1974

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given me hope. dru will leave mr. knight for mr. valentine.
I only meant those shown won't be the only ones, previous love interests will not show up as LI's in future games.

You may see a cameo or 2 but you won't ever get the chance at the previous MC's girls.
 
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Yeah, it definitely petered out for me. I know it was a good story but once we hit the Kim moment it coasts to an ending. This one started much more interesting and has me more hooked, but we shall see how it evolves.
Yes, I see you already tried it. Good, good... you'r going to be the guinea pig then :ROFLMAO:
I'm glad to see the dev with another game, with one game done this can only be better!! (I hope).
 
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