VN Ren'Py Suburban Sin [v0.4] [Marshall 77]

[Filipis]

NTR tag? Interesting...

I am guessing the mother can get NTRed if certain choices are made, correct?

 

[Marshall 77]

It looks really nice.
Can I just ask what kind of fashion is this with those stupid hairstyles where the head looks more like a dickhead than a real dickhead? But this guy seems ntred, so he is dickhead anyway.

Thanks for share

For the love of god, what possessed you to look at that haircut and say "yeah, this is our main protagonist"?

to be honest i don't know but i thought that's something that can get attention of the MILFS

 

[Marshall 77]

If it didn't have an NTR tag, it could have been good, but everything that has that tag turns into something rotten and disgusting.

NTR is optional so it's based on your choices that if you want to see them or not.

NTR tag? Interesting...

I am guessing the mother can get NTRed if certain choices are made, correct?

yes only the mom will get NTRed but you can avoid them.

 

[PhineasFlynn]

NTR is optional so it's based on your choices that if you want to see them or not.

yes only the mom will get NTRed but you can avoid them.

Is it only skippable or completely avoidable?

 

[AlBetGam]

to be honest i don't know but i thought that's something that can get attention of the MILFS

...is this like a pity thing? They go "oh you poor dear come inside, I've got a pair of clippers, we'll fix that right up" and boom he's hilt-deep?

 

[AnimeHentaiGamer]

can't wait for NTR thanks dev!

 

[Marshall 77]

Is it only skippable or completely avoidable?

Skippable but it won't be a heavy NTR

 

[Chris2041]

Skippable but it won't be a heavy NTR

Skippable means still hapens but you dont see it avoidable means you avoid it dosent happens if is only skippable what is the point people are gonna still be angry and more whit the mom what is the point to play a incest game if mom is gonna fuck othe people seriusly some devs seems like they are alergic to money or something.........
anyway good luck

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[Cullen Baker]

NICE. Another incest game.

See you in 8 years...

 

[zeus04]

:Amore:

 

[Adoringfan]

That haircut is a sin.

 

[Commander Booty]

The Name doesn't Match with what is on title because i decided to change the name in the last moment so for the next update i will fix the problem.

Bruh... Don't wait, fix it now. Having the wrong name on the first release of a new game is a huge fail. While you are fixing it, there were missing images as well as typos... and that was just in the first few pages of the intro. I couldn't get past that point so no idea how many more errors I might have found.


If you want to entice people to play the game and support you, it would be advisable to show that you care about what you are releasing. All I can see is sloppy effort and that doesn't inspire me to spend more time. Apologies if that comes off as harsh, but sometimes a little constructive criticism is what we need in order to get better.

The name, the concept and the featured images caught my attention. You have the makings of something good... just give it the effort that it deserves.

 

[Xx_Gamerdad-69_xX]

I don't know that the fuck are you beta cuck simps on about, this haircut be totally bussin' no cap on god fr, a mark of a true sigma rizzler. Stop malding cuz you can't looksmaxx so well.

 

[Dylango]

Thanks

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If sister brother same in real life in your house or your country there something wrong in your country about the family and about sister brother . I not said must to be same anime , but the best friendship in the world it's brother sister .

 

[SpecularGoodness]

any sisters in the game?

 

[YU_XIAN]

I hope NTR can be avoided. I really don't like NTR.

 

[Hanorak]

Bruh... Don't wait, fix it now. Having the wrong name on the first release of a new game is a huge fail. While you are fixing it, there were missing images as well as typos... and that was just in the first few pages of the intro. I couldn't get past that point so no idea how many more errors I might have found.


If you want to entice people to play the game and support you, it would be advisable to show that you care about what you are releasing. All I can see is sloppy effort and that doesn't inspire me to spend more time. Apologies if that comes off as harsh, but sometimes a little constructive criticism is what we need in order to get better.

The name, the concept and the featured images caught my attention. You have the makings of something good... just give it the effort that it deserves.

I completely agree with you.
And I'll add the following: I made it to the end with a lot of effort, and I don't know if it's just me, but there's a lack of "lore" to contextualize things, a kind of "background," I don't know. From my perspective, things are happening too quickly. As if the developer was rushing things just to show off the characters.

I don't mean this negatively. I just think things would be more enjoyable if they unfolded more slowly. For example, a scene in the kitchen immediately jumps to a random kid at school bullying MC for no reason (because MC have o hot mom actually, but still rushed). The same thing happens in EVERY subsequent scene.
Again, from my perspective, this seems a bit "lazy" and rushed to show off the characters...

I hope the developer can see that this feedback we're giving is for his own good, and good luck Dev!

 

[Maverick369]

I completely agree with you.
And I'll add the following: I made it to the end with a lot of effort, and I don't know if it's just me, but there's a lack of "lore" to contextualize things, a kind of "background," I don't know. From my perspective, things are happening too quickly. As if the developer was rushing things just to show off the characters.

I don't mean this negatively. I just think things would be more enjoyable if they unfolded more slowly. For example, a scene in the kitchen immediately jumps to a random kid at school bullying MC for no reason (because MC have o hot mom actually, but still rushed). The same thing happens in EVERY subsequent scene.
Again, from my perspective, this seems a bit "lazy" and rushed to show off the characters...

I hope the developer can see that this feedback we're giving is for his own good, and good luck Dev!

is the mom a stripper

 

[Hanorak]

is the mom a stripper

And that doesn't make what I said before wrong! Right?
I don't understand what your point is in quoting my post...

I mean, obviously she is not a Saint (far from it actually), but my point is: Everything (at least for now) in this game is kinda rushed. IF there were some description (narrative) between transictions from one scene to another, like from the kitchen directly to school corridor with a random guy, and many others.
But that's just ONE example of what I mean. I'm not saying it in a bad way, it's just seems like it's going to be a "meet and fuck" game if the dev keep following this way of development. That's all!

So, I'm not trying to engage in some deep discussion, and far from arguing. It's just the way I see the game so far.