VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Summer Camp [v0.1.6] [All Natural Games]

mediocre at best. the models are mediocre as well, until the time they are horrible. i mean they are fine for most of the time, and then at some scene they make those weird faces or positions that are kind of horrendous. the animations are bad, choppy and again with weird facial expressions.
half the time the writing is absurd. the story itself is kind of absent, i guess there are different background for the girls, but nothing beyond that from what i can tell. the MC is magically attracting all females (without actually having anything magical in the story - they are just falling for him from nowhere)
so it looks like a porn slideshow, with the exception that the porn itself is not very exciting.
in general - it's very boring. i cant even reach the end of the current version, i just get bored and constantly switch to something else.

[v0.1.4]
As far as loli hentai/games are concerned, I actually prefer this kind of take on it because the absurdity makes it easier to turn my mind off to the shitty concept and just get off on the taboo.

You can enter the age of the girls at game start. They are treated like children but generally look like older teens for rule 7 reasons.

So OK, I am not against the concept. I don't stand on some moral high ground. Nor am I put off by the obvious vileness of the MC, I actually prefer that. Even with all that going for it, I just can't say this game is anything worth playing.

The renders are average. The models are average. The girls have 2 expressions, resting face and an unnatural smile. The writing is poor. The English is janky, but I've seen worse. The scenario is just a sex fest with no build up or nuance. The choices don't set any variables. It's just "sex or no" choices.

The sex scenes feature some unnatural poses and doesn't have the most inspired dialogues, but it's at least lengthy enough.

In summary, perhaps the game's only audience is the rare loli fans that look for more exploitative stories (that don't take itself seriously) rather than the usual "wholesome" shit. For those people, it might be a 3/5. For the majority of players, this is probably a steaming pile of radioactive dung.

I really like this one. i'd prefer if there was a little more romancing and chasing the girls but the campers are very cute. i cant wait to find out more about the rest of the campers backstory. 12 girls is a lot and i hope they spread out the rest of the updates with all the girls

A lot of negative things you can say about this game, but it starts and ends with the writing being a complete turn-off. It's a shaky premise for a story and it's executed in a really hamfisted way.

Aside from that, the renders are clunky and lack consistency.

I remember playing this a fair bit of time ago. It hasn't gained more than a few scenes.

It relies a lot on the fetish of virgin midteens. If you aren't into that, not for you.
If you are, well. It doesn't have much.

Mediocre model art.
Less than average animations.
Barely any story beyond a setting.

Worth playing?
If it had more content maybe. As is? Not so much.

I don't know how to feel about this game after the most recent update. I think that the game is fine. It has very good renders and it fulfills the Incest the "young" kink well.

The bad things are almost pushed under the rug with the good renders, but they still remain. The story is a whatever for example. Kind of contrived, but the problem comes with the pace of the story. I get that every game these days has to have an opening sex scene, but the ones in this game aren't too engaging.

The first 2 sex scenes come in a really rushed way. One is with a horny bartender and it happens with little to no build up. The next scene with your girlfriend's loli sister. You don't have "sex" but there is a LOT that happens in the first few minutes of meeting her.

The MC is a pretty big creep without much going for him except he's handsome and girls want him the second they see him. He is often times thinking dirty thoughts about the innocent characters without a hint of irony.

NOW, the biggest problem I had was with this past update. Before, I would have given this game a 4-5 stars. The faults still bad, but not enough to affect your enjoyment.

However, the most recent updates has the MC become a mentor and therapist for the YOUNG girls in this camp. He interviews his first girl and... to put it frank, it's pretty tasteless. I'll put the rest in spoilers.


Because of this I had to stop the game. It was REALLY uncomfortable and wasn't about to play out the Dev's "fun" scene. To a certain point I get the scene, but I DON'T get showing it since the character is a Love Interest. Whatever that means in this game. :/

I was planning to give this 2 stars, but the more I think about it, the more I doubt where this Dev's heads at. I get trauma, but I don't like glorifying things like rape and molestation so yeah, 1 star.

If the Dev changes this, I might come back and modify my score, but this was too much for me.

Update: Dev added a way to skip it, BUT it still happens... Make that what you will.

Amazing, would be even better if there where teen shemales. I hope we get some in the future, even if optional. Very good initial content. Will definitely check again in the future, if there are some traps of femboys will update to 5 stars

Very good game, I can't wait to see the sequel. Maybe a little slower with a little more teasing. But many very pretty girls (the features are very well done) and the monitors seem to be very open. to be continued

Another stupid game u get idk 3-4 choices then you have to fuck that girl (fucking forced sex) if you don't play like the Dev wants it it's a game over so fuck this game
Not worth to play except u like kinetic novels and like to be forced to have sex with girls you don't like
It's bad as watching porn for the dialogue

love the game keep it the way it is and it will turn out grate or even better also i hope down the line that we get to have sex with all the camp girls and other girls to also hoping to have sex with the older lady to and mc ex girlfriends sis to be sent to the camp as well would be nice to

Rated against version 0.1.3

It's not bad. There are a few things which could do with some polish but beyond that it's a fun playthrough.

The models are varied which is a big plus and overall the story is quite interesting.

As I mentioned there a few things which could do with being fixed but it's nothing game breaking, and truthfully it's things you see in other games so it's hardly anything to beat this game with. During some scenes the lighting is a bit wacky. Some characters will go from being "normal" to suddenly being bathed in sunlight, only to go back again.

Also, given the plot of it being a camp for people with psychological issues, I'm somewhat worried that going forward the game may become a bit too dark. In 0.1.3 one of the last scenes is a girl talking about her life and it's not great, I worry if that is the standard (and given there are 12 girls shown in the banner) then the game may suffer from swinging from ultra dark to comical porn game which may put players off.

But I fear I'm being a bit negative, certainly nothing I've seen is a deal breaker, it's interesting, the time seems to have been taken to make the characters interesting and (although it was certainly a bit dark) the one character you had a big conversation with seemed to have a backstory that's been thought out as opposed to some cookie cutter nonsense that's instantly forgettable after the event.

Gorgeous petite models, a brisk pace, very decent writing and a hung MC.
It's my kind of game.
So far it's really good, but I hope the dev doesn't add too many characters, there's already quite a big cast, and we want some effort to go into making them feel like full characters.

Also some here are complaining about the size of the MC's dick. I say no! Keep the cannon as is! Dick worship needs a worship worthy dick.

Patch at Review: v0.1.2


Very good renders, great facial reactions and expressions. The characters don't look or feel 2d, or have weird lighting issues. They feel like they belong in the scene.

Overall Story/Plot is good so far, has good potential and I hope it's explored more.

Story/Pacing. Would like to see the first scene with the (ex) girlfriends sister to be a little slower. Feels rushed in terms of plot like it was just there to masturbate to. Slow it down a little, with some more dialogue to make it feel more 'real' and not rushed.

With a story revolving around the MC being a psychologist, A lot of dialogue focusing on the 'real' issues of the other characters could be very interesting to explore.


Issues - A few minor grammar issues, but you can still read/understand it and follow the story quite easily if you can overlook them.

Suggestions: Good/Corruption/Evil paths would be interesting with this specific type of story. Adding more dialogue and slowing the game down more. Let the players learn about the characters, make them work for it, rather then having the characters throw them selves at the MC.
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Letting people chose how they want to play would elevate this game and make it one of the best within it's tag group.

Overall 4/5

Looking forward to future releases.

Played 0.1.2, so far.. the game looks promising! The character designs are really interesting, the subtle facial expressions are astounding.. though the story is still building up, is somewhat different from a lot of other games. Looking forward to more updates of this!!

v0.1.2]

Story is average
No bugs
tags look intresting
don't play with sound
Little bit to short
I'm suprised the shower scene choice gave a game over some other games you would exactly get what you expected

I'm keeping a eye out for updates for sure to see where the game is going

75-90 minutes of gameplay? For 0.1.2 I didnt count, but I think it is like 15 minutes.

Writing is straightforward and silly. Sex scenes are decent, nothing specially sexy though.

The girls look good and just throw themselves at the Mc.
The game over choice I got is stupid, the scene doesn't give anything worthy of a game over really. If the scene was well shot with good camera work, and not a generic shot with a generic pose...

Overall the game gets what is aimning for which is quite obvious, but doesnt tell it in any cinematic or sexy way, its pretty generic, It relies on the hotness of the Lolis, and not in the storytelling.

Its just that so far there is only 1, and with this amount and quality of content the game can't be good. Lets wait a couple of updates.

Absolutely disgusting and sick... Basically a little sister porn simulator. The story is bad, average character renders, the environment renders are even worse, abysmal writing and dialogues and the fucking smiling faces are out of place and downright creepy. The whole story is "teenage girls swoon over a huge dick". Should be reported and be taken down in my opinion.

Version 0.1.2
Not so great writting, average renders. And way way less content then advertised in notes. Feels like this is just trying to cash in on the most taboo tag out right now sigh. Seriously maybe it will get good, but this is lacking so far.


Only reason doing a review is people are throwing 5 stars jsut for the tag not the actual content. Right now stay away wait a few months might be something worth reviewing for reals by then sigh...


0.1.3 models have got even younger now some how and look at 5 stars from just that. Story is even worse these females just throw themselves at you, and even in writing he is telling them "don't you got plenty of time to grow," its like yeah she looks like she just got a training bra last year, and look at that already down for the D pretending to be all innocent but hopping on that MC like a pro sigh...

Some how they found a way make writing even worse and just fully embrace that "tag" that gave it the 5 star raiting. Already seeing people ask for futa, but with this females build it would just be a trap at this point that has a vagina lol I do like others had to age up their girls a bit for legal reasons and this one is all "nah brah make that shit a boy with a vagina! Shrink them boobies and hips! I want them built like a ironing board!" Its like I clearly see the market for this is going sigh...

Great game, story and models!
Can't wait to see more of it. Yet, there are not enough choices in lewd scenes but I'm sure there will be implemented.
The girls are amazing if you like petite like I do and it promise a great game
Good work and can't wait for the next one!

I see great potential here in a degenerate way.... saying "I see great potential" in an age play porn game felt wrong somehow...
Girls 10/10
as a teaser/demo 10/10
taboo feel 10/10
I don't think there is going to be a story at all
its a lighthearted game with all girls horney for MC with big D
about the taboo age play so far I think its great because while the ages are implied or outright stated they: 1. don't really look their age since they are too perfect 2. don't act like people of said age group
those two point are really important since I did play a game where they didn't have those two factors and it was incredibly creepy.
-someday I'm going to try running for some government position in 30 years or something and they're going to pull this comment out to show I played this